checkers....

12 lines flashy boi


i want to post as soon as possible...


ya kno hurry n get this win

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will edit when your ready to post... i'm finished

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Eh i was ready 3 weeks ago

But nah really yeah post whenever ill post whenever i get back on and see you have

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Eh you know what fuck waitin for you and fuck the 12 lines you go whatever im going 50



Kid your stupid how you gunna lie about not biting
with the proof right there
With that post right there, just proves you was frightend
We all know your wack, and your washed up aswell
Uppercut you into the aeral
...................n send you straight back down to hell
Kids amazing totally mind blowing and deffintly spectacular true
im'a smash this fag's throat so hard he'll be drinking adams apple juice
Ill punch you in the face and break your nose kid
n' leave you homeless just like your family did
Philly aka Teacher aka Artisk, shit stick with one name
Cause no matter what name you come up with, your still lame
Im here to bring defeat to this fake ass wannab teach
N that shit above your head
............Thats just the LLL belt you could never reach
Why so many names philly? O i kno cause your shit
Or is cause your hopin to sneak one into the championship
Your wack can you see, you've never accomplish shit on RB
So ill give you the KO for thie battle
..............................Just so you can say you got beat by me
Came over to Rv hoping for a title or something? heck
N i'll give this teach an apple,
.............................Right after i punch it out his neck
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18 match it.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...679&postcount=4


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...877&postcount=5







http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172201
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308329


flash aka Led Poetic aka Ancel aka Lampejo


flash is a known biter, 's the only way you've been famous before
then we find out none of tha dope concepts were actually yours :/
a shot at the contender? u? man don't make me laugh with emotion
n drop that tuff guy shit.. cuz clearly 's the only thing u were holdin
you got matched up with me fagget, kempo that shit was just stupid
so i'll lettem feel the window pain.. ya kno when i throw his ass threw it
i kno relationships take time, but often that shit can be leading to danger
so i'll throw his bitch so many questions.. she'll razor hand up outta anger
your punches don't connect worth shit man, so really why even try it
cuz flash'll throw alotta hooks this way.. n i'll hang em right in my close
i'm done with you kid read your verse n threw this bar in cuz i hate feinds
so i figured i'd drop these 12 par bar's n straight murder your 18
the sun
i've won
u suck
bad luck





aha... i'll show off... yes u suck that bad that i dropped 12.. enjoy being 5-2 or banned from the leauge

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What Appocolyptik said, before I deleted that post, was wrong. You can edit your verse, if you've posted second, at any time as long as no one has voted. Flash can't edit his verse cos Artistik has posted, Artistik can edit his verse cos no one has voted. Ya get?

Those "bites" aren't exactly bites, they're played and the second one which is more obvious is a nameplay. The first one is just an awful simple bar, I highly doubt he'd bite it let alone try and reword it.

Open for voting. And both of you stop with the freeposting or I'll deduct votes.

Alright good call, I didn't realise the second person was allowed to edit their verse. I was just going from what I've seen in these situations in the past. Open for votes.

settled then..


vote up honestly... i'll just use my quote's to show playedness


up 4 votes

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Kids amazing totally mind blowing and deffintly spectacular true
im'a smash this fag's throat so hard he'll be drinking adams apple juice
Im here to bring defeat to this fake ass wannab teach
N that shit above your head
............Thats just the LLL belt you could never reach

vs.

you got matched up with me fagget, kempo that shit was just stupid
so i'll lettem feel the window pain.. ya kno when i throw his ass threw it
your punches don't connect worth shit man, so really why even try it
cuz flash'll throw alotta hooks this way.. n i'll hang em right in my closet

Hmmm, lots to say about this battle... first off, Flash isn't Ancel.. second off, when I did what Artistik did last week, Kempo said it was feeding, but I won't penalize Art for that cuz that's not feeding.

Anyway, Flash prolly had the line of the battle with the LLL line, that actually was a pretty tight line, hit hard cuz it was true. The adam's apple juice was corny times 1000, but i actually laughed so I quoted it. Unfortunately, the rest of your verse was very bland. Lots of just very simple lines with no wit to them and that killed your verse.

Artistik, you came pretty blah as a whole. The two lines I quoted from you were good concepts, decent lines, just lackin' the flavor. A very consistent verse, other than the closer not much bad in it, though I'm pissed you stopped 4 lines short, I mean, it was just 4 more lines and honestly this battle was much closer than you think.

Overall, tho Artistik "fed", at least by Kempo's weird rules, posted fewer lines and didn't really try very hard, I think he still won based on the consistency because Flash just came wayy too basic and played for a lot of the verse.

Vote - Artistik

oh.. nevermind wrong forum

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