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10-01-06, 10:15 AM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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LBL Championship Match: 1. DaTrusHurtz (10-0) vs 2. N.Tavarez (5-0)
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10-01-06, 01:23 PM | #2 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
checkin' in... 20?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235542 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235548. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235541 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3089570 Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 10-07-06 at 09:30 PM. |
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10-01-06, 08:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 2FB2 BF34
i got another champ match on Rm lets make it 16 lines.............
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10-05-06, 09:32 AM | #4 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
if cool with you i need an extension til tomorrow morning
some personal shit came up |
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10-05-06, 01:41 PM | #5 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 4AE4 D83F
Yea, that's cool... we'll say the new due date is 2:00 PM EST on Friday
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10-06-06, 09:53 AM | #6 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
aigght lets go
You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do the way you butcher other peoples quotes .................David Lama would be ashamed of you Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show 1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go tavarez102882: just came back from a baby shower in NYC.......mad ass up there son im still tryna get over it DaTrusHurtz: haha, that's awesome, but wait who ya callin' son? tavarez102882: lol thats NY lingo, im still in Bronx Mode DaTrusHurtz: word, i hear ya, i just always confront people when they call me son and i'm like uh... am i older than you? Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son ..............I could never father such a wack flow Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe... U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month so beat it Last edited by N.Tavarez : 10-06-06 at 11:28 AM. |
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10-06-06, 02:30 PM | #7 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
anyyyy day now trus .
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10-06-06, 03:02 PM | #8 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: BE48 95D9
Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted... ... the kind thats really easy I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma I have Braggin Writes... ... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer "Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year! DaTrusHurtz: what do you think about quality of heads in the 1-2? Should there be a higher bar about who is let in or just let average heads in and let them elevate in the league tavarez102882: i think in the beggining you should let them in and eliminate the weaker ones as the season progresses tavarez102882: give them the chance to improve and if they dont, get em out That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league? Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is These days I don't know why people even vote... ... for ANY of ur verses The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see You were still the champ... ... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie Sorry for takin' awhile, I had other shit to do this morning. Uppin' for votes.. and I don't want Serb voting. Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 10-06-06 at 03:06 PM. |
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10-06-06, 03:34 PM | #9 | |||
Phu Que
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IP: 0A3C 4A41
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time vs I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team v/Tav I really wasnt feeling much that Trus dropped |
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10-06-06, 04:24 PM | #10 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: AC73 256B
n.tav
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show 1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son ..............I could never father such a wack flow CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something vs da trus Now Nelson... I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer "Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year! Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming pretty close battle...i liked n tavarez in the beginning then after the convo n those lines i wasn't really feeling at all...da trus hurtz came pretty nice had a couple lines that missed...but alot of connections more then tavarez...cool battle vote-datrushurtz |
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10-06-06, 04:30 PM | #11 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 5163 CDCF
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither i used a com wordplay last week lol. but u used it differently so i quoted Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something vs. I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted... ... the kind thats really easy Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league? I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see You were still the champ... ... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie v/ DTH - edges this. n.taverez came more personal, but i feel a lot of his personals were bland where as DTH added more wit. cool battle though dudes.. keep at it. |
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10-06-06, 06:03 PM | #12 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
2-1 trus .
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10-06-06, 10:26 PM | #13 | ||||
Met-A-4
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IP: 3240 794D
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes .................David Lama would be ashamed of you Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son ..............I could never father such a wack flow They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time ^tav i really liked this concept, but i didn't like the way u worded. vs. I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league? Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that ^i'm not quoting this cause i liked it, i just wanted to say that it had potential, but the punch was bland. plus i've seen shit similar to this. should'a worded it better for more effectiveness EDIT: btw, that parlay line was pretty dope DTH. u should'a had more creative shit like that. pretty straiight battle, no hate to either, but nuttin too impressive this week. tav's verse seemed as if it was rushed and some of the wordin on some of his punches were off. i mean, he had some pretty cool shit, but nuttin that had me thinkin "DAMN!" also, that oneduh line was meh. like, i dunno.. that shit didn't appeal to me at all. i honestly don't know what the point of it was tav. as for DTH, u had a good run as champ, but i honestly think this was a weaker verse on ur part. alot of ur shit was just statement'ish/ worded off/ seemed rushed as well. this could honestly go either way, but i feel that tav had the stronger quotables in his verse. so i gotta give it to him. v/ N. Tavarez
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10-07-06, 12:22 AM | #14 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 39F0 2EC1
N.Tavarez
You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league Good opener, fresh. got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do the way you butcher other peoples quotes .................David Lama would be ashamed of you Don't understand it. Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you lol, cool. I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither Cool. In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show 1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go Decent personal. Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son ..............I could never father such a wack flow Cool personal. Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids Good, I think... This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes Cool. So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe... U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show lol, nice. CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something ok. They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time ok... Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month I just used a Oneduh line in my no show verse, lol. Overall: Pretty consistent verse with lots of personal attacks. Towards the end you started losing steam though, which could have hurt you. We'll soon find out. DaTrusHurtz Now Nelson... I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you Good personal punch. U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted... ... the kind thats really easy Good nameplay. I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch Nice. BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth Cool. Seems like it could have been worded better. Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team Good wordplay. Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma I have Braggin Writes... ... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama lol, cool. Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer "Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year! Good personal punch. That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league? Cool personal. Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that Good wordplay. Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is These days I don't know why people even vote... ... for ANY of ur verses ok. The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming Cool. I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see You were still the champ... ... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie Decent closer. Overall: A tiny bit more consistent and didn't fall off in the end as much. Personals punch combinations were better and had more stand out wordplays. Vote: DaTrusHurtz - Close battle. Felt he edged consistency slightly and delivered a few more punches along with his personals. Snatched wordplay up as well. Good battle. |
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10-07-06, 11:19 AM | #15 | |||
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Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do the way you butcher other peoples quotes .................David Lama would be ashamed of you Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son ..............I could never father such a wack flow They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time vs I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted... ... the kind thats really easy Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league? I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see You were still the champ... ... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that This was a close battle... i liked alot from both of you and thought you guys did good. But seeings how i have the quotables at 7-6 tav im going to have to go with him. No hate against eithero f you this was very good.. and quite close V/Tav
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