word, check. g/l nucca


Flash and Ken'pho can't vote on this

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check....... yup yup

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Axe

spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker

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Axe

his pic:

http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/31/phillycannonz.jpg

now look...

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit

EZ

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spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz


get out my leauge

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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
^haha. nice man. good personal
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^oh shit! a lil harsher wordin would'a been good here, but this was nice..

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^nice concept, but the wordin wasn't too harsh man. should'a thought this one through more..
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
^cool, but i've seen concepts like this before..

well, pretty one sided here. philly had two fresh personals/punches. i really liked that. his second punch wasn't as harsh as it could'a been, but it made me chuckle. Spul, u had the potential with ur punches, but naw homie. and honestly, i think someone's bagged on philly's hat before over at RB in a battle or maybe in just one of his pic threads, lolz. and the 14 letter line, i've seen shit like that before and i dunno, just wasn't hittin as hard as philly's punches. pretty cool champ match, but i gotta give this one to philly.

v/ Artistik

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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
Lmaoooooo, wording was perfect here
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
sorta nonchalant wit this punch. just like i dont give a fuck, i know im nicer than you typa wording. good shit

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
I REALLY liked this fuckin concept. pulled it off iight but i think this coulda been much harsher
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
nah not feelin this at all really, seen the concept too many times.


damn, artistik took this sorta easy mayne. props to both but damn at the c-section punch.

v/ philly

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^^ LOL, that's a good one
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
meh, this one's ok

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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
Lol, this was good personal
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
I actually thought this was really not hard and didn't see the punch

So ya

Spul had a better line then Arts best line and his closer was blah but so was arts so

v/SPuL

cuz I always vote for him

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v/ Philly

I know there is a rule about one line voting... but I'm not breaking anything down bar by bar...
but yeah.. Spul didnt attack that pic well enough...

spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
LMAO... nice personal
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
This was nice.. liked the shit... n yeah he awlays pointin in his pictures

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
This was good.. Liked the setup punch was good
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
Never seen this... was good but seems a little off

Yeah i know it aint count just posting feedback


this was a good battle close and everything... i think that Art took it slightly but likek i said this is just feed so besta luck to whoever wins.

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat

vs

nothing

spul had the only good line in this, everything else I just wasnt feeling. not bad for a 2 liner vs 2 liner, but yea spul got it

vote - SPuL

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if it needs to be explained

every other line beside the one I quoted was whack

so just put whack, not feeling it under them for me.. lol

I dont feel like copy and pasting shit and then bolding shit under it haha

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
lmao word i hate those hats everybody rock em now in the city

I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
nice never seen this good punch

solid two punches from spul 1st was better than 2nd

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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
meh its decent punch but i dont think spuls mom actually had one so it didnt really connect

spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
best punch for you was good liked this one

overal its really two solid punches from spul vs 1 good one from art i didnt like that c-section shit too much
v/ spul

p.s. take it or leave it, personally i got shafted last round so i dont consider none of you the champ since i feel i beat you both......so before anybody says shit too me
about voting spul just be fucking happy im voting and hope i dont sign up for the next season....btw THANKS DTH!!