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Old 03-04-03, 11:02 AM   #1
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ereh fo tuo ti ekam lliw I (please read all)

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I met someone on the corner, the first time so its an important day
Im at deaths door, but shes taken a shower before the date
Heard this monster put outs, so Im praying on hitting next
Cause Im so desperate, I tried to use 9/11 for pity sex
I dont plan on being a father, not even gonna try once
So I plan on meeting this bitch at a dumpster in nine months
Thats how I choose to abort.. Just think of it as an early fate
If God cares so much, hell have bottle n diapers at the pearly gates
The girl of my dreams is my mom, thats scary see
So my alarm clock has kept me from incest every week
In my dreams she was beautiful when I had her in bed
In real life she was so ugly prostitution had her in debt
I will make it out of here ereh fo tuo ti ekam lliw I
Ereh fo tuo ti ekam lliw I I will make it out of here
School bullies would target victims then laught at em
But why werent they laughin when they brought bullets back at em
Columbine students acted sad, man that was some wack shit
You know damn well they were happy to get outta math quiz
I know ur thinkin theres no point to what this verse states
& ur right, sayin shit like this got me here in the first place
I will make it out of here ereh fo tuo ti ekam lliw I
Ereh fo tuo ti ekam lliw I I will make it out of here
To tell the truth Im an optimist, so this shit is silly
Hell maybe those airplanes jus wanted to kiss the buildings
And the abortion stuff, even though thats not planned
Maybe the baby jus wanted to skip life & shake Gods hand
& when my mom abused & had blood soakin my mouth
Maybe she was practicing incase someone broke in the house
& at Columbine when they walked in an started shootin
Maybe they forgot that life wasnt Memory Card included
My mom always told me that I was such a mistake
She named me bastard, & my dad helped me live up to the name
My mom had me thinking that he was a worthless faggot
But maybe he just went to work & got caught in eternal traffic
This verse was written in a notepad, but the worse part is
The asylum walls is where the words in this verse first started
Well most of it was on the walls.. Im being honest here
Except Ereh fo tuo ti ekam llliw I was written on the mirrors
I was observing life and wrote down all the shady ways
Now I wish I would of stayed in the crazy place
Im plannin on ways to fake insane,.. to be escapin lifes hell
So I ran out to the city naked.. chasing my tale
The asylums coming to take me back, Im hopin for years
Ereh fo tuo ti ekam ot tnaw tnod I.. is what I shoulda wrote on the mirrors
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Old 03-04-03, 12:03 PM   #2
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UP
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Old 03-04-03, 12:46 PM   #3
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dude some deep shit
nice word play and too kept to a topic
nice work

peace
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Old 03-04-03, 01:21 PM   #4
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You Ever Heard Of A Cat Named Fracture..?
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Old 03-04-03, 01:23 PM   #5
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no
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Old 03-04-03, 01:27 PM   #6
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Oh! So You Just Bite Pieces And Don't Look At Who Wrote Them..

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Old 03-04-03, 01:40 PM   #7
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fuck you you lien bitch i didnt bite shit asshole
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Old 03-04-03, 06:35 PM   #8
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Get the fuck off RB... We don't want any wack herbs like yourself that bite you pussy ass bitch... now bow down and bow out...

pz bitch
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Old 03-04-03, 11:51 PM   #9
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LMAO!!!
Stepping to N? LMAO! Damn kid...Biting and sayin shit to us? You must be Hurrb!


You want to know why this is open still?
So people can make fun of you! HA!
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Old 03-05-03, 12:49 AM   #10
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*makes fun of the poet*
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Old 03-05-03, 01:34 AM   #11
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mmm knew it was too good to be true... i usually say keep rhymin... but in this case... dont...
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Old 03-05-03, 10:36 AM   #12
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you stupid shits i didnt bite ask him for proof wheres the fuckin proof fuckin bitch's show me a damn link i wrote this ish
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Old 03-05-03, 07:44 PM   #13
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http://www.rhymenreason.net/forum/click.php?bannerid=1

now let everyone else decide if you're a biter or not bitch... it's all word for word you fuckin moron don't step to me and act innocent and shit neither just bounce!

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Old 03-05-03, 08:08 PM   #14
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Maybe he is fracture.. and he wanted an alias...
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You Ever Heard Of A Cat Named Fracture..?


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He said he's never even heard of Fracture
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