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11-09-06, 12:39 PM | #1 | |
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Pre-Season: High-Dro Vs. Yung Red
IP: 8471 8CE5
This can be an Audio Battle or a Text Battle.
You two can discuss it. Rules: Two Minutes Minimum or 10 Lines Minimum Verses are due on Friday, November 17, 2006. Good Luck. |
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11-17-06, 11:43 PM | #2 | |
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: D6DD 9D10
you are.............................
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11-20-06, 01:04 AM | #3 | |
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: D6DD 9D10
he no-showed....i dropped TWENTY lines...quality lines...where muh points at?
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11-20-06, 01:38 AM | #4 | |
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
wack as fuck^^^.........
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11-21-06, 03:26 AM | #5 | |
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: D6DD 9D10
in case you hadnt realized, you are dumb as shit
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11-21-06, 11:28 AM | #6 |
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IP: 213D E6DB
you had some decent multis, the structure was a bit off, but the flow was alright, it got a little repetitive, you should have switched yoiur flow up a little bit, maybe introduced some commas instead of periods..... some slashes would have helped out the imagery in the piece though. Overall you had some decent punches, that faggot line just tore him one, even though its a bit played, you still pulled it off nicely id give it a 7/10 for that bar... that one line
......................................... ......................................... was just straight fire, multis, wordplay, personal... it had it all man.. even the structure was on point... definitely what won you the battle right there..... solid lines, you could tell you worked hard and it paid off in the battle.. goodluck in the upcoming ones. |
11-21-06, 12:05 PM | #7 | |
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: D6DD 9D10
yeah, man! i KNEW someone saw it like i did!
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11-21-06, 05:23 PM | #8 | |
The Paragraph President
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
lmfao @ this dude postin all that bullshit!
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11-27-06, 03:37 AM | #9 | |
L.E
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IP: A70E 7938
High-Dro wins due to no-show.
+2 Points to High-Dro. |
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