RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Back Stage > Concluded Tournaments > 1-2-1 Punchline League
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 11-19-06, 08:24 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
Group C: PicturePerfect (3-1) vs. Cielasek (1-3)

IP: BE48 95D9

Its week 5 of this 7 week season. It's time to distance urself from the competition. There were some cool punches last week, but some of you still need to step it up! Drop nice or risk not making the playoffs.

Battler #1: Ab0ve
Battler #2: PicturePerfect

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-19-06, 09:20 PM   #2
Cielasek
New to RV
 
From: California
IP: 87EA 62A5

uppin...you forgot to change my name to this DaTrus

sorry 'bout that.. its fixed - Trus

Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 11-19-06 at 09:31 PM.
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-20-06, 06:08 PM   #3
M&rk
10:23 till i'm 86
 
M&rk's Avatar
 
From: Michigan
IP: 246F CF62

check.............
__________________


Big Pic- Whore of the World ( youtube video)


Jesus saves, even from paranoia

myspace.com/marktimothyschafer
my reverbnation.com page
Send a message via AIM to M&rk Send a message via MSN to M&rk   Reply With Quote
Old 11-23-06, 04:47 AM   #4
Cielasek
New to RV
 
From: California
IP: 87EA 62A5

Sorry...just got home...I will drop now... I know I am about 2 hours late...sorry

I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-23-06, 03:18 PM   #5
M&rk
10:23 till i'm 86
 
M&rk's Avatar
 
From: Michigan
IP: 657C 7A0F

imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
__________________


Big Pic- Whore of the World ( youtube video)


Jesus saves, even from paranoia

myspace.com/marktimothyschafer
my reverbnation.com page
Send a message via AIM to M&rk Send a message via MSN to M&rk   Reply With Quote
Old 11-23-06, 05:13 PM   #6
Cielasek
New to RV
 
From: California
IP: 87EA 62A5

I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-23-06, 07:38 PM   #7
King Solo
Skadoosh!
 
King Solo's Avatar
 
IP: BD83 5678

CIELASEK
I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
This bar was weak because of two things really, his name is no longer picture perfect and second, even if it was.. that nameplay was played to fuck months ago. The punch wasn't there really... the wording wasn't even strong enough to make it remotely cool.

BIG PICTURE
imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
Personally, I thought the reeboks concept was nice but it could've been worded better. Still though, it was the best line of the battle. The second bar you dropped was just too simplistic to have any real affect.

CIELASEK
I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
Finally, this bar was weak. The wording was weak and the concept itself was a poor attempt at feeding from picture and it just came across as playground material from the 3rd grade or something.

Overall, picture had the only bar worth reading, the others were just weak and so he wins the battle. VOTE PICTURE
__________________
Send a message via AIM to King Solo Send a message via MSN to King Solo   Reply With Quote
Old 11-24-06, 07:12 AM   #8
Roger Glocks
Middle Weight
 
IP: 3B3F ACD1

cieslak

I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE

^^aight this was aight..nothing spectacular simple but good

picture perfect

imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes

^^aight im feeling this

i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either

^^ok this was alright ...average tho

Cieslek

I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch

^not feeling this ...pretty weak

picture perfect took it with that reebok line ...cielasek had a chance but messed it up with that last line

vote-pictureperfect
__________________
3WST.
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-25-06, 09:03 AM   #9
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
Spektikul's Avatar
 
From: Canada
IP: 7C6D 1B8D

CIELASEK
I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
This name play couldnt be more played, i think the very first battle P.P. had someone used this shit, no good.

BIG PICTURE
imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
lol, this was pretty creative, but not that hard of a punch

i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
LMAO! nice.

CIELASEK
I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
This was okay, not the greatest use of feeding tho

P.P. got this one cause his bars actually werent all that bad in my opinion, Cie came played as hell in the first one, but his 2nd bar was a bit better, but like i said, not the best use of feeding.

V/P.P.............
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-25-06, 10:28 PM   #10
Te Ora
Light Weight
 
IP: 5163 CDCF

I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
^ ehh nah. his name isn't picture perfect
I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
^ nah.. not hard enough to be that simple

vs.

imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
^ yea not bad
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
^ i think this is a decent feed because his punch assumed your name was picture perfect

v/ Big Picture.
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-25-06, 11:20 PM   #11
grams
Light Weight
 
IP: 7699 FD3A

I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
--ehh,..didnt like it

vs

imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
--this was ok
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
--decent, kinda funny

vs

I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
--ok feed but could have been much harsher

vote-pic
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-26-06, 12:46 PM   #12
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 2FB2 BF34

I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
DIDNT FEEL IT CUZ THAT BEEN PLAYED ON PIC SINCE FOREVER
I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
BETTER BAR BUT NOT WORDED EFFECTIVELY TO BE REALLY MEAN

VS

imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
DECENT CONCEPT NEEDED BETTER WORDING
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
NICE FEED AND GOOD PUNCH


PIC WAS MORE CONSISTENT BETWEEN BARS
V/ PIC
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-27-06, 03:41 AM   #13
Diet Coke
 
IP: 80CD 6B68

Cielasek
I am strong dude, watch me leave you broke with no money in the purse
N yeah people love 1-2-1 league, cause it's never a picture perfect VERSE
Seen it before, played shit..
I won't reeboks cause I like nikes...now you're whored, kid
Don't talk about the things....that you can't afford bitch
No, this was whack.

Picture
imma nok yo ass out... u aint strong look at what u write be
after this punch u won't wanna reeboks like all u wear is nikes
Wasn't worded too well, cool concept though..
i can't pronounce his name so i can't play off this cheater
and by the looks of his last punch he can't play off mine either
Not too bad, I feel it..

Vote: Picture
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-28-06, 12:56 AM   #14
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
IP: 2AC9 5FB1

PicturePerfect WINS 4-1
Cielasek LOSES 1-4
  Reply With Quote


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:20 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.