rules:
first to five votes win
3-0 is Ko
no crew or D/R votes
10-15 bars max
must reply within 3 days or it counts as a no show.
I'll spit first.

I keep fake emcees Boxed in, As my toxins drop in to Sever and Peel//
Locked in, got D’s frame, twisted up as a Skeleton key//
Why violate so reckless, is it because you’re full of filler like cabinets of dentist//
or because you Got yo mind so wrapped in my sentences, you look like arabs in prison//
after this battle and my post i’ll have you beggin for votes cause you know you’re defeated//
Desperate like "My Shits Nice Please Re-Read It"..//
Failed to bless it, like mimes screaming "Bless You" after sneezing//
Your chest wheezing like fat track stars, fall on the track hard//
Leave with ya back scarred, came to rap and spar, with Pø!$Øn, da illest lyrical all star//
I'm more like C-sections, you catch crack navels, sunk in my flow like Japanese Vessels Vs. The U.S.S's naval---sub, lines repetitious like making a dub//
Grab a hold of my line and give it a tug, it's War//
Devour your core, dwell in your sores, I settle the score//
Lay foes with hot spits, Disgraced lands in a Hospice, end up in a Hospit--al/
Metaphorical cannibal, you stepped up to an entity that's un-fathable/
Your rhymes are like one legged people, ‘un-stand-able’...//
Get ya epidermis sandblasted fresh off my pure velocity//
Honestly, I think I've killed more catz than ‘curiosity’//(curiosity killed the cat)
I'm word smart, my impact will detach you from ya birthmarks//
try to stop me? you'd rather be ridin shotgun with Dale Earnhardt..//
One bar breakin-ya-chest-in in a eight-of-a-second//
I'm verbally hazardous..//
Which makes you beatin me more miraculous than the resurrection of Lazarus//(when Jesus raised Lazarus from the dead)

dawg ive had it leave you blasted in a pile of black ashes...
faggot you rappin is like landmine victims acrobatics...
fumblin static fallin over bars like a fucking faggot...
disastrik my punches leave more sores than jurassic...
the baddest ready to lay it down the cold hard facts to you...
then punch your stomach so hard your ribs fall out the back of you...
persuasive enough to make your spine turn its back on you...
yous a gay ass dude twisted like bloods singin blues...
shit tryin to get a win here by me not seein like sand paper not slick...
i knew poison was bitch so next time you wanna go man to man chick...get a dick


poison you think ill win this one we will have to see...
oh geez look at the line comparison my 10 your 23...


*edited for a typo*

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i think you might have gone over the bar limit...

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omg fuck nightdemise fuckin mutalated u (poison) if i were u afta dis shit i would stop rappin. o ya,dis wuz da line dat knoked out poison : "poison you think ill win dis one we will have to see...
o geez look at the line comparison my 10 your 23..."

thx play...

we need poll votes!

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aight tha poll didnt work for me,so hea's mah vote.Ima give it 2 Mr. Poison,even tho he violated one of tha rules (bar limit)he had sum ill lines and vocab

"Get ya epidermis sandblasted fresh off my pure velocity//
Honestly, I think I've killed more catz than ‘curiosity’//"

^^dem wuz nice.Yo tha otha dude...ur's mighta been short and sweet,but Poison had betta wordplay & flow.Good job from both of yall tho.Stay ^
-Avi

avirex...the poll didn't work for you because you aren't allowed to vote yet. Read the rules. If you would like to become a registered voter just PM me (you have 200+ posts so you are eligible). Only mods and registered voters can vote in the polls (to prevent newbie votes)

uppin again...lookin for poll votes...

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uppin for more votes

uppin for poll votes ... thx

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how do u become an eligable voter cuz - it says i cant vote yet!

i'm feelin plays words, poison must of had some cuz dat shit u spit was shit! damn it stinks somebody get him some TISSUE!
night dude dismissed u!

my vote=night

uppin for poll votes

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