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21. Vitticus (0-1) vs. 22. Faime S. Quotez (0-1)
IP: F956 A220
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01-01-07, 07:22 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 0CC6 57C3
check, i'll go 16.. good luck
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3131963 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3131950 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...957#post3131957 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3131963
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Faime S. Quotez
The Scholar
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01-01-07, 09:59 PM | #3 | ||||
Trill OG
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IP: 80DC D70D
Check...........
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01-04-07, 05:10 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 8EFC 6764
I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. . ....which proves they didn't read your battle last week! No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw you made the Top Punches... even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list! Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg? her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. . ....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers! You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude ^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose! This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
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The Scholar
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01-04-07, 06:33 PM | #5 | ||||
Trill OG
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IP: 80DC D70D
Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses? If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell Well I see you tried this week... Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle? Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same You shouldn't even be ranked... He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you
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01-04-07, 07:34 PM | #6 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: B66A 4983
FAME
I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks they said I had the wackest battle. . ....which proves they didn't read your battle last weeK ight No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! not really a harsh diss Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw you made the Top Punches... even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all not really a harsh diss Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list! ok i see what your tryin to do now, take his punches away from him, ill consider that in my final vote Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag not feelin it Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg? her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. . ....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers! lil humour You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude ^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose! ight This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu not feelin it, should really close with one of the better bars of your verse VITT Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses? ight lil humour If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell Well I see you tried this week... Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell ight Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage ehh Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win end rhyme Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit ehh Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle? Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows ehh w/play Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can ehh Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" lol Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag ehh I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same You shouldn't even be ranked... He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name ehh I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you not feeling it well id have to give this to fame, although i think vit had the best bar, he dropped 22 lines to fames 16, when fame dropped first, which is fucked as i think if Vitt had of took some of the bars out he prolly could of took this, but as it stands fame would have to take this for better consistancy, and i cant really make a choice on which bars to take outta Vitts verse to make it fair, V/Fame |
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01-04-07, 07:41 PM | #7 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 7E01 785E
Faime S. Quotez
I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks they said I had the wackest battle. . ....which proves they didn't read your battle last week! ^^Shitty wording. The punch is kind of weak, too. No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! ^^Blah, plain. Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw you made the Top Punches... even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all ^^Okay... still not very hard hitting. Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list! ^^Bad. Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag ^^Lame. Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg? her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. . ....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers! ^^Okay. You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude ^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose! ^^Could have hit a lot harder, good concept - poor delivery. This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu ^^Wack. vs. Vitticus Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses? ^^Predictable nameplay, decent delivery. If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell Well I see you tried this week... Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell ^^This could have been flipped SO much better. Really watered down. Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage ^^Lame. Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win ^^Lame. Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit ^^Blah. Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle? Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows ^^I liked the concept, not the execution. Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can ^^You should have tried dissing yourself in the set-up... or something - just to tie it in. Pretty gay. Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" ^^I'm digging the hell outta hte concept, but the delivery is shitty. Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag ^^True, but not hitting. I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same You shouldn't even be ranked... He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name ^^What? No.... I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you ^^Gay. This battle was reallly weak. However, I think Vitticus barely edged it out due to his concepts. Both had reallllly bad execution that took away from the impact of the punches. Vote: Vitticus oh yeah: Quote:
so you might get dqed :/ |
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01-05-07, 05:02 AM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 670E 9063
No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! VS. Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" This battle was really poor, and I only quoted bars based from the quality of this battle. Faime tends to focus on the same concept in his verses all the time and half his shit comes out like a statement. You need to be using a fresh concept for each bar not using one concept for half a verse and then another to finish the shit off. And Vitt, man... you really need to work on your wording because right now it just ain't working. I'm finding it difficult to find the flow of your verse and whilst it is TEXT... you should at least have some sort of flow going.. try using some multies in there. Right now it just seems like your verse is a long run on paragraph. Anyway, Vitt was better and he won. V/ - Vitticus |
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01-05-07, 09:15 AM | #9 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 936B 8EF6
Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses? .........played concept alot of people use against faime S qoutes If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell Well I see you tried this week... Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell /......sort of filler to me ... Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage .....Decent nothing specail though.. Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win ......Same as above.... Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle? Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same You shouldn't even be ranked... He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you the rest of your verse was jus basically a little of played concepts and a nice personal in one bar but nuttin worth mentioning Vs. I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks they said I had the wackest battle. . ....which proves they didn't read your battle last week! No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! Both ...Nice pair of bars to open up with ... Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw you made the Top Punches... even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all Nuttin special.... Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list! Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag Both bars couldve been worded better..... Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg? her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. . ....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers! Lolll......funny... You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude ^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose! Facts are always nice punchez... This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu Decent ender... Overall man your verse was basically better than wat your opponent was dropping so thats why i give My V/ Faime S Qoutez.
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01-05-07, 04:58 PM | #10 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 600A 6F23
Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag OK JAB AT HIM You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude ^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose! GOOD SHIT VS Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses? OUCH!!! Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can KINDA FUNNY Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?" FOR SOME REASON LMAO @ THIS CAUSE I CAN PICTURE THAT VOTE: VITTICUS Fame’s main problem was he kept refering to the mag like that was all he had. There’s other ways to get personals. Vit, your shit is waaaaay too stretched man but you had the better punchline concepts. I’ll give the Ideas Credit to make up for the shaky wording and the blatant bitchmove way of winnin battles by spittin way more lines than the other guy.
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01-05-07, 07:04 PM | #11 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 1A2F 05AD
No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. . ....and got mentioned for only one of 'em! VS. Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can Faimez can't seem to find any new concepts and just drops the same ones every week and they read like statements, which is never a good thing, Vitticus struggled with his wording and this was reflected in the huhnikka line. However, seeing as Vitticus attempted to be witty with his punches instead of spitting out statements all over his verse he won. V/ Vitticus |
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01-06-07, 12:04 AM | #12 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: F956 A220
Uppin over no-shows
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01-07-07, 01:26 AM | #13 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: F956 A220
Vitticus please start posting your links so I don't have to search for them.
Vitticus WINS 2-0 Faime S. Quotez LOSES 0-2 |
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