sup.

20?

g/l.

nah type busy
16 at most

i might drop 20 or more on second thought, it IS the last week of LBL
whoever drops 1st sets the limit then

24.



it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle
you're history, forgotten - you're shook in your lines, too
you must have a gay past cause you like to put it behind you
no one wants to go near this e-thug, we know that ya fake
with an AIM list of gangstas,
always seeing blocks over ya name
don't even front man, and don't ever doubt the win
i punched Tav,
& he dropped a verse; cause i beat the crap out of him
my advice: only drop the sickest lines with a dope flow
forget it... that'd mean i'd end up winning by a no-show
Comedian scars with stealth whenever i harm your health
i will bruise and batter this mantle he's on the shelf
you've got no intelligence at all... i'm the winner here
i just have to take a stroll in your mind to be in the clear
hispanic, mexican - the list goes on, who you tryna kid son
i'd use racial disses,
but i'm having trouble trying to pick one
i'm honest, now that i'm here no one respects ya clown
it's ironic, now that the bar is raised your rep goes down
you got two careers!?! what you dropping is wack man
pick yourself off the floor
it's your job as the the trash man
your gunplay is horrible... quit lying ya punk
you always call shotgun because you tryin' ta front
my writtens abuse, Comedian will diminish this dude
i'll split you in half, Nelson,
but the full one's my finishing move

Your making progress but the type that I notice is different text
Cuz 'read more battles' is code for "Let me see who rhymes Im flipping next"
Dog if THIS is the result, your future is bleak as fuck
Improvements? ya verse is the Greatest hits of our weakest stuff!
So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded
Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded
Fucking garbage, N.Tavarez get ate by this herb? Never
Your such a nobody, U make Nicole Ritchie appreciate HERS better
This kid always gets feedback when spitting, he's really fresh
They hear his verse, and leave Comments to help with his shitty breath
Ya girls a slut too! you'll catch her hanging where the sleezy mingle
Thats why you'll always go getter.........Like the Jeezy single
You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you
But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do
Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick
Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip
Them jeans is mad fucking tight kid, enough to scare dudes
The way he rock capri son, you'd think the juice guys make fashion wear too
30 lines? this aint Cypher! Im quicker to roast this queer
And you wont get the win^ Like when Nick Fletcher decides to post in there
In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised
This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves
Im'a treat you like a Jay album.....And leave you done
U get dropped if you tryna take my Kingdom, Come
BITCH!!!!

Ok..

I got N.Tavarez taking this battle. Comedian only had one good bar that stood out to me. I don't think Comedian should've been in a champion battle because he is obviously not ready..

N.Tavarez's verse, the beginning had some heat, but after that it was like falling asleep because that shit got boring and had no hard hitting punches at all..

Favorite punch from each contender:

Comedian:

"don't even front man, and don't ever doubt the win
i punched Tav,
& he dropped a verse; cause i beat the crap out of him"

N.Tavarez:

"So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded
Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded"

The only reason Tavarez won this is because of the quotes he posted up and his first 3-4 bars...without those he would've lost this battle due to dropping wack. Comedian only had one good punchline that I liked, the rest where not hard hitting..

Not being a dick or hating on you two..just stating what I thought and how I felt about reading the verses.

Vote - N.Tavarez

it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle
no one wants to go near this e-thug, we know that ya fake
with an AIM list of gangstas,
always seeing blocks over ya name

vs.

So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded
Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded
You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you
But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do
Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick
Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip
In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised
This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves



.. to me that "beat the crap out of u" line is played as shit.

comedian didn't come that great. his opener would've worked better with something other than castle imo, but it was still fresh so i liked it. his downfall was having too many played lines. the mantle wordplay, the no show punch, raise the bar, trash man hav all been done before. n.taverez jus came with an all round better verse and takes this one easily.



v/ n.taverez

^ Never have there been any truer words spoken.

I'll hit this up with a vote tomorrow. Decent battle though.

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it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle

vs.

Your such a nobody, U make Nicole Ritchie appreciate HERS better
This kid always gets feedback when spitting, he's really fresh
They hear his verse, and leave Comments to help with his shitty breath
Ya girls a slut too! you'll catch her hanging where the sleezy mingle
Thats why you'll always go getter.........Like the Jeezy single
You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you
But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do
Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick
Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip

Overall you could see who won This battle comedian you had alot of played concept yet aii wording but Tavarez came with some new concepts stuff i never seen before ....in the barsa highlighted .....so overall

my v/ N.Tavarez

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3-0 me
got one vote will do others later today