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02-07-07, 08:36 PM | #1 | |||
Skadoosh!
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Actor Battle: SwervEz vs. Appocolyptik
IP: 5338 849F
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association ============ SwervEz as MATT DAMON vs. Appocolyptik as BEN AFFLECK ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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02-08-07, 10:40 AM | #2 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 45F7 4F1F
check
i'll prob go about 16 lines Last edited by Appocolyptik : 02-08-07 at 12:17 PM. |
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02-08-07, 11:12 AM | #3 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: F97F AB0B
Word, whoever drops first. the second person has to match.
Good luck Last edited by Appocolyptik : 02-08-07 at 12:17 PM. |
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02-13-07, 05:34 AM | #4 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 349D 3BAA
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick Fucked off heroine... ...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy & If something ever Stuck On You... ...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are & The other's pale in comparrison... ...Just you when you're compared to your co stars |
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02-13-07, 06:30 AM | #5 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 45F7 4F1F
first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange.. i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin' and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore.. has affected your catching! the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end.. sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines sorry aobut it being late i was waiting for him to drop |
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02-13-07, 06:51 AM | #6 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 45F7 4F1F
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02-13-07, 09:39 AM | #7 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E70 836B
Vote - Appocolyptik
Well SwervEz you only had one good punch and that was the bar about "the good role". The rest was really disorganized and felt forced to me all together. Appoc, your verse had some decent punches in it, but a lot of it was fillers and some felt forced as well. But you had enough to edge it out. My favorite bar from your verse was the one about John Travolta and his bitch being greasy lol |
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02-13-07, 12:03 PM | #8 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 2D85 4230
Oh wow Sweverez showed? I dropped a no show verse not expecting him to drop...
But in that case let the votes commence, thanks for voting Syntax. |
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02-13-07, 12:52 PM | #9 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 45F7 4F1F
yeah i like keyed it in 10 mins lol
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02-13-07, 01:27 PM | #10 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: A793 8EA7
Appocolyptik:
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it Nice Opener Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick Fucked off heroine... ...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic nah Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all niice Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy & If something ever Stuck On You... ...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie haha, word. What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are & The other's pale in comparrison... ...Just you when you're compared to your co stars meh closer. You had a couple gay lines in there, but the rest was pretty decent, you def. ripped him apart. SwervEz: first battle... and i end up versing this faggot with a face so orange.. i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot decent opener sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role niice and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital meh honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin' and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore.. has affected your catching! nah the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end.. sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines bad closer You verse started off pretty good, and then it slowly fell apart. I thought you were goin' to have it after the first few lines, but then it just went downhill. Vote - Apoc. (He had the better verse in my opinon)
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02-13-07, 02:53 PM | #11 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: B18B 78E3
Word, it was a no show verse which explains the filler lines.
Thanks for voting |
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02-13-07, 03:36 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: E0AB 4BA8
Appocolyptik
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it ^- lol decent punch Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick Fucked off heroine... ...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic ^- Flow was a lil choppy n didnt hit that hard Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all ^-Alright Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy & If something ever Stuck On You... ...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie ^-Never saw it but ok What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are & The other's pale in comparrison... ...Just you when you're compared to your co stars ^- lol ok Swervez first battle... and i end up versing this faggot with a face so orange.. i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot ^- lol decent sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role ^- Good punch and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital ^- Was soft honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin' and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore.. has affected your catching! ^- a lil nasty but ok, fondeling balls is never cool! the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end.. sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines ^-lol ok Overal- I liked Swervez's opener better but Appocolyptik came consistant throughout with his punches, flow was ok for the most part, some stumbling in each but structure wise they were pretty equal, and originality i'd say Appoc had it. Vote- Appocolyptik |
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02-13-07, 06:19 PM | #13 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3519 4895
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy & If something ever Stuck On You... ...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie vs. first battle... and i end up versing this faggot with a face so orange.. i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot Blah, I didn't really like much of SwervEz verse and I thought this was pretty onesided. Appoc had more quotables, less filler and a more solid overall verse. Not much more I could say, but that's why he gets my vote. V/ Appocolyptik |
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02-15-07, 10:11 AM | #14 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy & If something ever Stuck On You... ...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie vs. first battle... and i end up versing this faggot with a face so orange.. i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role This battle was actually kinda close in quotables, but Swerv fell off hard in his last 3 bars after a nice start. Appoc was more consistent tho obviously a rushed verse so he got this. Vote - Appocolyptik |
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02-15-07, 10:14 AM | #15 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
Appocolyptik Wins 5-0, but doesn't vote. SwervEz votes on 3 battles. SwervEz Wins -2 to -3. Appoc, vote on 8 battles next week and the loss will be removed.
SwervEz WINS 1-0 Appocolyptik LOSES 0-1 Last edited by Nick Fletcher. : 02-16-07 at 11:52 AM. |
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