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03-16-07, 01:53 PM | #1 | |||
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15. M The Literal (1-0) vs. 16. Trey MethodZ (0-1)
IP: 6C02 AD00
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association Prisoner Picture Battles ============ [SIZE=3]M The Literal vs. [SIZE=3]Trey MethodZ ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 03-16-07 at 02:45 PM. |
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03-18-07, 02:44 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7952 4A1C
Check, fifteen.
EDIT: Just to clarify, I don't mean fifteen lines, I just needed to hit fifteen characters so it would take my post. Last edited by M the Literal : 03-19-07 at 12:52 PM. |
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03-19-07, 12:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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IP: 0FDA 614C
checkin match me
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03-19-07, 08:45 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 7952 4A1C
Face down - a position that you're used to
Getting whipped just like the wrong end of a pistol Let's get this clear as crystal - you're prone because you like it Try to tell everyone you're hard? We don't buy it The only thing raw about you is your back You're a sick motherfucker, ya get off on the whipcrack With a switch - you're the only willing prison bitch Straight up fillet* you like you were a landed fish Bet you wish that the spectator would join in We know you ain't talking cars when you say "I like rims" Ya won a medal for the Best Tossed Caesar They'll understand - take a breather, 'cause I bet your knees hurt * - fillet/flay |
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03-19-07, 11:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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IP: 0FDA 614C
see some ppl go to jail cuz of felonys..some just to get hard
the expression on ya face sum's up your reason to go behind bars you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different he get's takin advantge of...cause you too frail since you literally play the roll of being a stuffed kid in jail or maybe jails ya life, you may enjoy it what the hell he aint taking about phones when you say i need to cop a cell got ya arms up, cause your controlled by a fag named jim could the guy with his hand up ya ass be ya man or you cheating on him if you not sucking dick, that cell to you is a bore the bar in the middle of ya face shows exactly what your waiting for
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03-20-07, 04:22 PM | #6 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 6D43 3382
you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different vs. Nothing Pretty blah battle here, you guys gotta step it up as there was like no creativity in this battle at all. Uhh, there wasn't anything particularly quotable in this battle, but Trey had the best bar and was more consistent so I'm giving this to him, but you guys gotta add more wit to your bars rather than just stating shit so blandly. Vote - Trey Methodz |
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03-20-07, 04:26 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 82DE 174C
M-some good rhyme schemes, multies, and flow, but i just wasnt feelin the overall vibe...opener and closeres were also mediocre...i think this verse had a lot of potential but you stayed on the whole "perverted prisoner" thing way to long...
Trey-alright...i thought the other verse focused too much on the perverted and sexual part of jail but this entire verse is based on that...some alright rhyme schemes but thats about it...i wasnt really feelin ne punchez or the opener or closer or vocab or wordplay...this verse could be improved a lot overall-id say M took this battle...both had some decent things in their verses, but M's was just slightly better...Trey also had a lot of random punches and lines (ex: "fam named jim")...closer than i thought itd be tho v/M the literal |
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03-21-07, 10:33 PM | #8 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3519 4895
you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different ^^ Only good punch of the battle. M came wack, but at least he had good flow. Everyone of Trey's bars was better so again, I don't have anything other than that to say. This was a clear victory. V/ Trey MethodZ |
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03-21-07, 11:41 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 7952 4A1C
I'll have my links up tomorrow.
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03-22-07, 01:37 PM | #10 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 72EA 7D38
Face down - a position that you're used to
Getting whipped just like the wrong end of a pistol ^^mehh Let's get this clear as crystal - you're prone because you like it Try to tell everyone you're hard? We don't buy it ^^nah.. bland as hell The only thing raw about you is your back You're a sick motherfucker, ya get off on the whipcrack ^^no With a switch - you're the only willing prison bitch Straight up fillet* you like you were a landed fish ^^nah, ok concept tho.. Bet you wish that the spectator would join in We know you ain't talking cars when you say "I like rims" ^^lol, ok Ya won a medal for the Best Tossed Caesar They'll understand - take a breather, 'cause I bet your knees hurt ^^iight wording pulled up in the end, in the begginin tho it wasnt harsh or had any cleverness to it. but then the concepts started showing so i'll give you that. vs see some ppl go to jail cuz of felonys..some just to get hard the expression on ya face sum's up your reason to go behind bars' ^^iight you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different ^^ok he get's takin advantge of...cause you too frail since you literally play the roll of being a stuffed kid in jail ^^lol, ok or maybe jails ya life, you may enjoy it what the hell he aint taking about phones when you say i need to cop a cell ^^ok got ya arms up, cause your controlled by a fag named jim could the guy with his hand up ya ass be ya man or you cheating on him ^^nah if you not sucking dick, that cell to you is a bore the bar in the middle of ya face shows exactly what your waiting for ^^lol more impact here, alot of more thought out concepts and the wording wasnt bad at all, it was actually comical.. pretty coo punches v/Trey MethodZ |
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03-23-07, 11:09 AM | #11 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 2AC9 5FB1
Trey Methodz wins 3-1
Trey MethodZ WINS 1-1 M The Literal LOSES 1-1 |
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