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Old 04-05-07, 01:17 PM   #1
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11. Out Writechas (1-1) vs. 12. DiZzy (1-0)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Celebrity Rapper Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the rapper you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's rapper. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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Out Writechas as Jay-Z

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DiZzy as Nas


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
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Old 04-05-07, 01:35 PM   #2
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check,, this topic is gonna be crazy
ether part 2 ya smizz me
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Old 04-05-07, 07:50 PM   #3
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Old 04-09-07, 09:38 PM   #4
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Old 04-09-07, 10:46 PM   #5
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^same

ima drop tomorrow
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Old 04-10-07, 09:31 PM   #6
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Old head back outta retirement,, you aint jordan my dood

left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste
you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base
n you sayin YOU the best,, mann i cant stand this nigga
only reason ya eaten more than otha rappers is cuz ya mouth is bigga
rocawear aint sellin,, kids aint wearin that weak shit
why would they wanna dress afta an old man tryna be hip
yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake
you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn
hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn
i even had ya girll dogg,, yea i no its greezy
just no im not sayin good bye. jay when i tell you B E Z
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Old 04-10-07, 09:32 PM   #7
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i didnt have much time to write so i keyed somethin so hopefully you do the same n show my dood 1
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Old 04-10-07, 10:55 PM   #8
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time to get my grown man on

im just curious mr. jones, whats it like bein in my shadow
prolly the same feelin as when u lost the first battle
new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude
how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you
to graph your career, i would photocopy your right eyebrow
cuz ya first album gave u light...then..then..completely wiped out
Hip Hop Is Dead? the bitch ain't dead just cuz she want no part of you
maybe your shocked someone ACTUALLY took your pic, or ya retarded to
no need to thank me, Black Republican is and was a street hit
but it's sad tho when papoose did a better job on your beat than you did
and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her
Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later

IT'S YA BOI
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Old 04-11-07, 02:13 PM   #9
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dam no votes? whats good
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Old 04-11-07, 10:35 PM   #10
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vote motherfuckers
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Old 04-12-07, 12:39 AM   #11
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yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake
you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn
hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn

these were good,the birthday cake was a creative concept

V$
and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her
Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later
new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude
how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you


these were aight,the takeover line was ya best IMO

well this was a very close battle,but ima hafta give it to dizzy cuz he came a little better.

\\// DiZzy
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Old 04-12-07, 12:59 AM   #12
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left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste
you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base
cool
yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake

vs

and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her
Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later

close shit, both verses were inconsistant, I liked the quotes and nothing else really. Dizzy was a little more consistant.
Out could've won if he executed some of his concepts better I think, but as it is I gotta give it to Dizzy

v/ Dizzy
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Old 04-12-07, 04:35 AM   #13
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diz

left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste
you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base
you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn
hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn

out

new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude
how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you

i got dizzy winnin this. out had that one line that was simple but true. it hit. nothin else really. dizzy's 45 line was ok, the game line was ok. the baldin shit was roflz though. wasnt real creative or anything but it was witty as fuck. loved that line. gotta give it to him.

v/ dizzy
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Old 04-12-07, 11:11 AM   #14
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yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake

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new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude
how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you

Some close shit here. DiZzy had the line of the battle with that 45 line, surprised I ain't seen it, that was some funny shit. Out, that line i quoted was real talk, a nice personal. You had a lot of personals, but I felt most of them could have been executed with more wit. Just having personals isn't always enough, they gotta be funny too. DiZzy only had 1 line which I thought was quotable, but almost every line he had was at least average to decent. Out you had some stuff which was too simple/obvious like the opener and the line about taking his pic. I got DiZzy winning.

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Old 04-12-07, 07:31 PM   #15
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DiZzy wins 4-0.

DiZzy WINS 2-0
Out Writechas LOSES 1-2
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