Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
BASICLLY NO CHEATING...



since i fucked up the last tread i had to re-do my whole fucking verse....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-08-07 at 10:29 PM

Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 01:09 PM.

since i feel like you wouldnt do any better knowing what i drop i keep the same verse after all.....

good luck..


ransum came here to runin some plans cuz this dude a dumb man
and he couldnt spit phat if he inplated pun glans in hes Lungz MAN /
you'r done fam, lets see who'll get murder when i face ya slayers
cuz ransum i'll hit you with punches that'll leave you slumped like wack baseball players /
im strap'ed like napsacks, verbally spitting some sick rounds
an ya life guard skills agenist my flow i'll leave this kid drownd /
so trust me bitch you not on my level not even a small portion
these hallows aint sleepy they'll rip throu u'r polo shirt leaveing a headless horseman /
ya verse's be a mess and battling me you got some nerves
if victory is something he 'NOSE'.... then he'll leave with 6 stiches like nash vs spurs/
its ova ima kill this dude Lungz ya hold ya breath for shit
cuz only way u'll get a-head if you start booping for dick/
Prick.. my flow burns slower then candles, lyrically im something you cant handle
he'll say im fuckd.. but i'll see no acting like blind men turning to the porn channel/
so im a end like Fuck canada, Fuck lungz, fuck whoever else you think is better
cuz u'll Never Rock Me like bloods in blue an gray nit sweaters/
MOTHER FUCKAH....

and dont cry about votes either
cuz emcee i'll pass but that dont make you a reciver... FUCKAH....

dont hate on me after cuz im talking crazy
CUZ THIS IS JUST MY STYLE KID GET USE TO IT....

Lungz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 06:34 PM.

Like executing trailer home owners, I’m killing RV residents
I’m destroying Ransom(s) letters like burning kidnap evidence
The fire’s worsen as the flyers burnin! I got that higher cursin
And ya’ll watch how I stop ran some/Ransom like a tired person
L’s mouth lets out the flame fumes, on this site my name blooms
And watch how Lungz leave R cade/arcade like exiting game rooms
My punches forcin slumber, Eaten his paper like coursin lumber
And when I’m done Ransom be seeing 2-3 like Jordan’s number
With papers I’m brinin lighters, caz I have experience wit biters
Watch me beat on LW’s like the new Ultimate Fighters
Kill crews like cult termination, Spit with sick acceleration
Verse? Man, I own Sum’s like being good with multiplication
Ownin you like a foster, I don’t act I fight, like Kevin Costner
With me? Ransom never seein 3 like the 76ers roster
Got da malicious spit that’s baron, rock dem shit clothes ya’ wearin
Ransoms never getting green like Jean Benay Ramsey’s parents

Voted For: Lungz

Ah, ransum..sorry but this one goes to Lungz. He came with some punches..actually connected, nothin great but it got the job done.

v/ Lungs

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Fear

thank you for the vote lay...upping for more of the same...........

And watch how Lungz leave R cade/arcade like exiting game rooms

Watch me beat on LW’s like the new Ultimate Fighters



i dont know if its me but those seem to be bitten from some-where...

who is r cade???
and who is LW???

if ya can explaint his to me then its cool other then that i think its bitten....

Voted For: Ransum

yo this battle was hellah close yo......
RANSUM
wordplay4/5
punches4/5
multie5/5
structure3/5
16/20---GOOD JOB
bestline:so trust me bitch you not on my level not even a small portion
these hallows aint sleepy they'll rip throu u'r polo shirt leaveing a headless horseman

LUNGS
wordplay5/5
punches3/5
multies3/5
structure4/5
overall 15/20---goood job to kidd
bestline:::With papers I’m brinin lighters, caz I have experience wit biters
Watch me beat on LW’s like the new Ultimate Fighters


good shit both of you....lungs ransum barley won wit two major punches in the middle of his verse......

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LMFAO IS THIS KID RETARDED???


Let me explain for you lesser MC's *looks at Ransom*


Watch how i LEAVE R, R as in you, because your initial for Ransom would be R....CADE means abandoned...*someone told me explanations on thi site is for noobs, which is why i left no explanation*....SO i'll leave R abandoned Aka R Cade, Arcade is a gaming room....WORDPLAY....get it?


THEN...

Look under your fucking name, dont u see a little "LIGHT WEIGHT" under then RANSOM!!!!!!!!!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone knows that you type LW instead of light weight, so its a personal on you, and the new ultimate fighter season is a cast of lightweights...

And to Rizo's vote, again, i guess i will say decent vote even though its funny and i wouldnt accept it if i had a choice....1-1...uppin.

Voted For: Ransum

this was a close battle, but lungz you used the word "like" way to much and made me aggrivated, be more creative so u dont have to describe everything with like...you shouldnt have to do that.

ransum you had some good lines aswell as lungz..but as a verse whole ransum had more productive attempts at a real punch whether it was hard or not...

v/ransum

please rtf

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Wtf? so because i used the word "like" i dont get the vote, and he wins whether his punches are "hard" or not? I REALLY HOPE BETTER VOTERS COME INTO THIS BATTLE....

upppppppppping.....Lol, votes always take so long.