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Ransum 5 83.33%
Artik Phrost 1 16.67%
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Old 06-18-07, 03:53 PM   #1
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Artik Phrost vs Ransum

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Old 06-19-07, 01:11 AM   #2
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Artik Phrost has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-07 01:11 AM.
 
Old 06-20-07, 01:34 AM   #3
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Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-07 01:34 AM.
 
Old 06-21-07, 02:08 PM   #4
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Wordplay Massacre

Check It-

..He's Getting Chewed! When Phrost Start Swinging Ya Finished Dude
Cuz My Punches Hit "Ran Down To The Sole" Like Im Fighting With "Beat Up Tennis Shoes"!!../


This bar is filler cuz I'm pressed for time.. Still He Aint Got Expressive Lines
And "Sending Me Notebooks To Iron", Is The Only Way He Leaving Phrost "Pressed For Rhymes"!!../

Bring Tha Noise? Shiit, He'll Be Hushed Right Before Im Storm In
so wen the thoughts start formin-
I Wont Need To "Speak On Living Arrangements Of Residence Assisants" To Leave "RA, Dorm It"!!../ ( dorm it/ dormant..relates to hushing him)
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Old 06-21-07, 07:38 PM   #5
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U'r HEART TIC LOST... flows off track.. like u'r CAR FLIP OFF...
cuz moving to alaska..... 'Only Time We Feel' ARTIC-PHROST...
this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...
shouldnt had tryed me child... u'r style out dated like '6T On 12 YEAR OLDS'...
Cuz RANSUM I'll stop this Bitch Flow... quicker then BIRTH-CONTROL..... MOTHER FUCKAH...

GO HARD OR DONT COME AT ME AT ALL YA HERD ME...

good luck....


last bar... 6t is a baby size a kids size mainly for 5 year olds or 6 depending how big your child is...
 
Old 06-21-07, 07:41 PM   #6
Ransum
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nice drop.....
only thing is your flow be kinda choppy...
which take away fromy ur punches...

decent wordplay...

much respect ma!.... stay up....
 
Old 06-22-07, 03:12 AM   #7
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kew drop...
obvious plays on Artic Frost is played though.
and the birth control line.. but oh well.


vote, biatches!!
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Old 06-22-07, 09:01 AM   #8
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Voted For: Artik Phrost

overal, this battle was..ehhh

Artik

..He's Getting Chewed! When Phrost Start Swinging Ya Finished Dude
Cuz My Punches Hit "Ran Down To The Sole" Like Im Fighting With "Beat Up Tennis Shoes"!!../

--This bar was madddd played..sorry bro

1/5


This bar is filler cuz I'm pressed for time.. Still He Aint Got Expressive Lines
And "Sending Me Notebooks To Iron", Is The Only Way He Leaving Phrost "Pressed For Rhymes"!!../

--Dont say that bar is a filler bar, makes the bar look weak...the Iron thing was pretty cool, just the first line made the bar look lame

3/5

Bring Tha Noise? Shiit, He'll Be Hushed Right Before Im Storm In
so wen the thoughts start formin-
I Wont Need To "Speak On Living Arrangements Of Residence Assisants" To Leave "RA, Dorm It"!!../ ( dorm it/ dormant..relates to hushing him)

--This bar was fucking sweeeeettttt...the bar was dope

5/5

Total
9/15

Ransum


U'r HEART TIC LOST... flows off track.. like u'r CAR FLIP OFF...
cuz moving to alaska..... 'Only Time We Feel' ARTIC-PHROST...

--Bar was ehhh, the style of your whole verus was fucking really odd...
2/5

this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...

--I dont know if this bar is played, but i haven't ever seen it...the only thing is, why would he be fucked ballroom style??? The last part of the bar was good tho

3/5

shouldnt had tryed me child... u'r style out dated like '6T On 12 YEAR OLDS'...
Cuz RANSUM I'll stop this Bitch Flow... quicker then BIRTH-CONTROL.....

--I'm pretty sure that the birth control bar is mad played, but still, i haven't seen it lately, but i know i have seen it. It was a ok bar, but you still ...the wording is really off and it hurts the overal effectivness of the punch...

3/5

Total:8/9


Overal: It was a really close battle, but Ransum you need to work your wording...and Artik stop forcing words to rhyme that really shouldn't be there, it makes it sound dumb as shit

Vote: Artik
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Old 06-22-07, 07:39 PM   #9
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thanks for the fedd back and brake down of the vote....

i digs it...

aight upp'ing or more votes......
 
Old 06-22-07, 07:47 PM   #10
Ransum
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this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...

--I dont know if this bar is played, but i haven't ever seen it...the only thing is, why would he be fucked ballroom style??? The last part of the bar was good tho


basicly..

despret newly weds... useally you wait till the night to fuck on ya honeymoon...
you dance in a ball-room...they useally have this at your wedding..
when you dance you useally wanna fuck shorty who you grind'ing with...

probley made ya more confuse but it relates to each other...
 
Old 06-22-07, 09:24 PM   #11
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yeah, i see what your talking about now...problem is that the connection between the too is soooo vague that it lacks any substance in your punch...

just to let ya know..

btw...this is the first battle i've ever broken down a vote like that, so feel speical you lil whores...

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Old 06-27-07, 12:05 AM   #12
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real nice... punches were creative....u had good word usage.....the last punch was a little forced but still good....9/10

this battle was close i feel phrost got this one though....her punches were more creative
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Old 06-27-07, 12:09 AM   #13
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feed back on ransum....

i liked your punches in this one and the multis went well with them....just felt they needed a little more though....stilll good shit 8/10

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Old 06-27-07, 12:43 AM   #14
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shit i fucked up i was suppose to press "post vote" under phrost not feedback first lol....my bad i dont know how to change it....
 
Old 06-27-07, 11:50 AM   #15
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Voted For: Ransum

uhh..I"d have to say this goes to Ran for havin punches...that weren't strechted as fuckkk...an were actually..not gay

v/ran


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