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09-13-07, 01:04 PM | #1 | ||||||
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The English Lesson, Pt.1
IP: 919A D22D
Yo....
The following lesson is a select selection/ Of verbal vernacular spectacular, verbal herbal garlic keeps you back like Dracula/ No reflections, just dissections of urgent insurgentsies/ To burgle insurancees, wack cat turtles when he's seized/ Disdydococonesia mixed with pneumonia and amnesia/ Reverse oscillation of nuclear stations end up freezin' ya/ The acceleration of microbe particles and ions and protons/ and neutrons for radiowaves to boost on/ Teutonic vibrations with vociferous warnings/ The smell of coniferous trees mixed with the morning/ Periodical table of elements turn hesitant/ And my spectral presence suggests I'm heaven sent/ My microphone static is so idiosyncratic/ With syntax that juxtaposes when you look at it/ The story's mandatory for personal glory/ Could you cue up some subterranean Mediterranean for me?/ I'll reciprocate, but only if I gotta/ Accutely accurate due to the enlarged Medula Oblongata/ The spoken reunification leads to revelations/ That cyphers couldn't solve without reverberations/ Raps start to sound somewhat erroneous/ While MC's get vexed and act sanctimonious/ The intense choreograph makes it simulcast/ Use graphite or unrefined dye when I sign your cast/ Unanimity is unusually heard without undenomination/ Understanding is understaffed with too low an undervaluation/ Benzine flows that smoulder slow like a cigarette/ Interfere with the mind's temple in the form of a ziggurat/ If you don't comprehend these words then I suggest you study your text/ You'll be positively dispensed if you think you can pass this English Test/ ----------------- Aight...if some of this doesn't make sense, don't try and call me on it, K? I didn't use no dictionaries/Thesaurus for this shit...It's my vocab skillz alone, so give me a break! |
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09-13-07, 08:53 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 9204 9119
ehhh im not really feelin this...i like the vocab and all and i understand the concept u were tryin to come with....but it all seemed forced it wasn't a smooth read....if this was like a keystyle i would say take some of those vocab words out cause its really not needed...i like how u tryin to be creative though bring something different....keep doing what u do though just my opinion....7/10 ~1~
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09-14-07, 02:45 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 919A D22D
Word up, I hear ya homey. I was on some Canibus shit, just smoked a blunt and was listening to "Poet Laureate Infinity", lol. You right tho, it was forced.
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10-05-07, 04:41 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 5BA2 D85A
Try sayin that three times fast
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10-11-07, 12:36 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: 30B6 8894
You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.
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10-14-07, 06:32 AM | #6 | |||
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IP: 30B6 8894
Closed, Moved And Stored.
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