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scanz 4 44.44%
phenom1 5 55.56%
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Old 11-02-07, 12:41 AM   #1
phenom1
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From: Mojave, CalifornI.A. 93501
phenom1 vs scanz

IP: 1B1D 61C5

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Old 11-02-07, 12:42 AM   #2
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Old 11-03-07, 04:59 AM   #3
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Old 11-04-07, 07:02 PM   #4
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From: Mojave, CalifornI.A. 93501
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(((((WORDPLAY)))))....................

This Guy-Is-Crap-To-Me!! So Dont `Jump To Conclusions` Cuz You'll Be `Ahead Of Yourself` With A Blinded-Sanity
Cuz Every { Bar Leak Or Never Return } Like QUESTIONING THE WHEREABOUTS OF SCANZ'S-FAMILY
{ Barley, Corn - Ever Return? }

This Whack-Is-My-Shooting!! Cuz Only While `Watching NASCAR On Acid` Will We Say Ur `Tracks-Are-Quite-Moving`
And He Be In His { Grave All Together } Without COMBINING ROBBERIES WITH BLACK-N-WHITE-MOVIES
{ Grey - Vault - Together }

This Battle Is Similar To`Trying To Locate Your Lines On A Bumper While Driving` Cuz Ur Verse?-We-See-Passed-It
Diss Him? He Vanish, You Never See It Return Like FOREVER RIDDING ALERGIC-REACTIONS

(((((WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES))))).......................

Scanz? Like Pedophiles Acting To Classy Music My Punches Get{Boxing}-To-Strip-Boys
With Close Ups Aiming At D I {Collide A Scope At The Target}Like Shopping-For-Kid-Toys
{ Bach Sing }{ Kaleidoscope - At The Target }

You Ill-Faggot? Nah! Blaze Be Sure To End This Trick Quick As If I Kill-Rabits
Cuz I'll End Up With The Last Laugh Like Im Joking On His Skill-Status

Scanz's Latest Text? Like 'Disorderly Conduct On Officers' He Should Give It {A-Rest}-With-Spits
Bombs Knock Him Off His Feet The Way I{Missile Toes Off End}Like He Was Boyctting Christmas
{Arrest}{Mistletoes Offend}

This Bitch? Like Warcraft Confusions I Have Him Sub-Missioned-Somewhere
Beat Me? He Best Keep His Fingers Crossed Like This Be Positions-Of-Prayer

Throwin Shots Wit Ya Punches? Like Sterile Sex Nothin But Blanks-Come-Out
I Keep This Dude Running On Empty Without Racing On Ya Bank-Account
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Old 11-04-07, 07:04 PM   #5
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If Yall Dont Get It Then Please, Do Me A Favor And Don't Vote
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Old 11-05-07, 07:25 PM   #6
scanz
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fun facts: -Comes from ballerstatus (other rap site)
- First post was something from here he saw on another site by "redrum" (seen on ballerstatus)
-first reply was by humancrack (300jg member) reply was "...your a fag from ballerstatus. gtfo."
- he wanted to text for the B.E.S.T. (look in crew tryouts)




shit this kid with the gunners? when u take your test?
the word i heard is the kid wanted to text for the B.E.S.T.
this fam wack. and human crack already told you.
u a fag. 2 bars and i already exposed this dude.
u bout to lose to me. 4 wins, ima add the losses.
cus u fake dude... like peppermint chocolate.
ur artificial flavor dont have me hooked on the "trend".
u flow like a pencil your style snaps when u try to bend.
u cant flip words, u aint a real rap-addict.
u rap like a faggot...this kid came from ballerstatus....
ur first post was good. but i dont think u wrote it...
i think u posted it cus u thought redrum stole it...
im quicker to think, im creative off this rap shit.
only new-bs like you... to me u a bitch plus a dick.
and i got more personals... ur other battles had none.
so get ur ass back to ballerstatus and say hi to redrum...

done......
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Old 11-05-07, 07:27 PM   #7
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skimmy shit... lol good luck... drop some votes peeps!
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Old 11-09-07, 12:41 PM   #8
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Voted For: scanz

ummm seeing as how Phenom1's verus made no fucking sense.....like all your punches were just..holy shit...i couldnt' even read your fucking versus dude......you need to have better structure to even try and do a versus like that...

Scanz...your versu was lame as shit, but i'll say that you won due to the fact that your versus wasn't like, complete shit, like Phenom's was
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Old 11-09-07, 03:28 PM   #9
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lmao.. right... this is another reason why i dont battle much. lmao
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Old 11-12-07, 02:45 AM   #10
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From: P-Ville
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Voted For: phenom1

Okay, lets see how I can break this down....

Phenom1: You have great wordplay. It's actually very refreshing, and for once, the explanations are needed. Multiple syllable rhyme scheme, descent punches, you got yourself a nice verse. Very lacking in personals, however, which could be your downfall.
Score: 7

Scanz: A lot of personals, but your structure is beat, no real wordplay, and you have no complexity. It's a simple verse, and once you make it heavy and complex, your punches will carry some weight. Add some bigger words to the personals.
Score: 6

Much love.
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Old 11-12-07, 01:10 PM   #11
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word thanks for the feed. and the fact that i lost by a point cus i dont no shit bout wordplay and that makes me feel better.. makes me know atleast i got some skill
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Old 12-09-07, 01:04 PM   #12
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thanks......uppin for votes............................
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Old 12-13-07, 04:39 PM   #13
Big_O
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Voted For: phenom1

Phenom1

Very well put 2gether, Good Flow, nICE mETAPHORS...
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Old 12-14-07, 08:14 PM   #14
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good shit thats all i can say! I like how you described everything!
 
Old 12-18-07, 07:39 PM   #15
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Uppin............................................/
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