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Old 01-25-08, 08:43 PM   #1
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story telling...

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story telling...

you know i got a little girl am im getting older...
now having a little man and my heart getting colder...
feel like im complet... guess my life gonna be ova..
im trying to get a crib, to have a place to hold ya...
i know you gonna be a little soildger and hold it down...
but dont make the mistake daddy did and put holes in clowns...
thats just a legal system thats trying take me for now...
dont think like me and smoke and sell them refer pounds...
or take from the rich in the street and be so proud
then talk about the crime sceens and be so loud...
they may be your 2 best men but 3's a crowd...
you dont need to learn how friends can be so foul...
i know you gonna attrack them hot sexy lady's...
but always strap up.. no needs for deases or extra babys...
always keep ya head up and stay on your focus...
cuz even them fancy store's i'll sell you something bogus...


there a couple things you need to learn...
how i struggle in life but prouds of the things i earn...
knowledge is power and these are thing u resive in return...
to improve and proceeds to yern for the top like under-sea worm...
your my reason for living... the light of my sun...
im delighted i won... and got my goal at the end my inspiring son......
yea... my inspiring son...
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p.s i think i will edit another verse soon.....
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Old 01-25-08, 09:30 PM   #2
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Liked this ransum, quite simple but enjoyed reading it........ Had abit of a shady feel to it. This was also alot different to much of whatelse you've written b4/recently.Liked the subject.Take it your back on for awhile now. PEACE
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Old 02-12-08, 10:53 AM   #3
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good looks fam....
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Old 02-12-08, 06:38 PM   #4
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closed... this is whack
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