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Old 06-15-08, 09:02 PM   #1
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VTL Week One Mag

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Introduction.

Well this being the very first week of the VTL's first season, I didn't expect much. I was
actually looking for what heads would actually show up and prove they were ready to
be in a league. I knew there would be some no shows, which there was. But now that
the no showers are gone. I feel we got a solid group of heads to build a foundation for this
leage on. I'm feeling week two is going to be a solid week. Everyone
show up, and drop your best.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:04 PM   #2
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Battle Reviews.


Satan vs. Gkillaz05

Satan won by no show. But he dropped a decent verse that I think even if G woulda showed he wouldn had been able to contend with it.

Burden vs Format

Format won by no show. Format dropped a no show verse and got his 3 points. And after he showed he's in the league to stay. I'm interested to see his verse this week, now that he gets a chance to actually drop a real verse.

Flash vs Born Swagg

Flash won by no show. This was probably one of the most expected no shows. Born signed up with only 25 posts, and didn't post since he signed up. So this wasn't actually a let down by any means. Flash dropped a no show verse and got his 3 points.

Ramcees vs Kaution

Ram won by no show. Ram only got two points because he actually didn't post a no show verse, but he did check in and say if Kaution dropped then he would match him. Ram has been getting better and better, I've been in other leagues with him and he shouldn be taking lightly.

Kirk vs Dickard.

Kirk won by no show dissapointedly. Kirk dropped a pretty decent verse, and I'm not sure if Dick saw it and figured he couldn beat him or just flat out didnt' show because he's not active. Anyways Kirk put his text skill on display, and will have a target on his back this week.

Lay Fear vs Flight

Flight wins 2 - 1. This was the only actual battle for week one. And not a dissapointing one at all. Flight posted first and right away came out with some decent hits. His opener was nice, and he followed it through with solid punches after. Only line I actually wasn't feeling from his verse was the pension line.
Lay came out with a clever opener, his second punch was good nameplay, and he fell off on the other two and then picked it up with a decent closer. Overrall Flight took this one with better consistency throughout and whoever he goes up against should watch out, because he's come out gunning.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:07 PM   #3
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Battle Predictions.

Lay Fear vs Format

This could go either way. After the no show win in the first week Format is probably ready to prove he is good enough to contend for the top spot in the league. And Lay's coming off a tough loss to Flight and the question is can he rebound from it and pull out a win.

Kirk vs Flight

I'd have to say this is going to be a pretty good match up. Flight coming off a win has acquired some momentum and will be hard to top if he drops like he did in week one. Kirk following a no show win will have to come out with his usual swagger and skill and drop his best to take this one. I'll say this might get a battle of the week nomination.

Satan vs Flash

Both are looking to add another win to their records after week one. Satan dropped an actual verse last week and is probably coming in this warmed up. But with finals coming around on RB he might spread himself thin
so it will be interesting to see who comes out on top in this one.

Ramcees vs LPMNDCTE

I battled LP in the Juno tournament, and he is a pretty decent head and has alot of potential. But I've also been in leagues with Ram and week in an week out he gives a hundred percent and is steadily getting better. He's not the type to no-show, and will be eager to display his skill in this one. This should be a good match up in my opinion.

dutch vs Yung MEDIkated

Both need to elevate, but have shown to be active battlers on the site. So this is a warm up week for them. I'm not expecting much out of this battle, and after Yung has talked up his skill alot I want him to ATLEAST show for this. Dutch is getting better and I think he might take this one if he puts in a little effort into his verse.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:08 PM   #4
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Top 5 Punches of the Week

Holy shit, dude. This guys really drag and the facts have connected,
Cause truth be told. Misstic turned into Dick in a matter of seconds.
-Kirk vs Dickard

but anyways, fuck you, you're way off course and i can tell you i'm a pro
you're from 'above me' which means you must've fell hard a long time ago
-Flight vs Lay Fear

Posted that highway of a verse kid, seems like your jus losin composure.
Cuz you do have miles of talent...that the rest of us are just cruising all over.
-Lay Fear vs Flight

But listen i'm a considerate dude, i feel bad your treated like tar for now
Cuz the second you post up a verse, your reputation pushes it father down
-Satan vs Gkillaz05

I'll trash talk your chick fast, bitch. even if it don't do me any good, D.
Cause to be honest, she's outstanding... on a corner where she should be.
-Kirk vs Dickard.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:12 PM   #5
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Battle of the Week

Quote:
Originally Posted by Flight
iron maiden live, wicked, but anyways

good ahead and take your time dude, i dont mind spitting first
cause it'll take more than iron man for anyone to marvel at your work
i'm confused about your name though, it has me wondering if you're worth it
hell i'm not afraid... its can you actually lay a decent verse kid
'don't try', i already knew that, i've seen enough of your whack lines
i can break open Lays faster than a party of fat guys
i did give you props though, had a few lines worth a mention
the rest was so old, half way through your verse qualified for a pension
but anyways, fuck you, you're way off course and i can tell you i'm a pro
you're from 'above me' which means you must've fell hard a long time ago


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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
aka'd? ko'd?..same thing.


Look..
Punchin right through you never showin mercy, see.
How will my punches ever land..if there STILL stuck in Flight currently.
You ain't on my grade scale, so don't even try and resort bars.
I'll be rippin up and hidin F, like I'm about to get caught wit a bad report card.
You'll get wharped hard, I'm tossing clout, so look who's admired now.
How ya gonna try an start a fire with ya verse...when dirt ALWAYS puts a fire out.
Actin like ya good, we'll see how ya fairing skank.
You are 'underrated' though,..your miles below anyone who's even barely ranked.
Posted that highway of a verse kid, seems like your jus losin composure.
Cuz you do have miles of talent...that the rest of us are just cruising all over.


Goodluck Pz.


This being the only actual battle of the week. This is a give me that it got
battle of the week. And even if it wasn't the only one it still was a pretty good battle.


No Show Verse of the Week



Quote:
Originally Posted by Kirk
G/L.

Contrary to his name......... This bitch ain't hard like morning wood,
I guess it's irony that Dick's broke ass is far from 'sportin' goods,'
This guy is quick to throw down....... and an apology won't affect it,
But if Dickard flips out........ It'll just clarify that my blows connected,
I'll trash talk your chick fast, bitch. even if it don't do me any good, D.
Cause to be honest, she's outstanding... on a corner where she should be.
If you're into a life of crime, bro. then I'm pushin' my rhymes hard,
Regulate this bitch with my lines just to put you 'behind bars,'
You'll get punched out like timecards.......... Honestly, Dick sucks,
I mean lyrically though... Don't get that and his past times mixed up,
Dick's whole verse is a downer.... Makes me tired and shit, brah,
It's a drag... not to mention thats what your whole attire consists of,
And when my verse hits you and it's time to be buried, son,
How can we 'dress' you for the viewing if you're already wearing one?
Holy shit, dude. This guys really drag and the facts have connected,
Cause truth be told. Misstic turned into Dick in a matter of seconds.

^Changed his name from Mystic to Dickard.


This verse was on point. And obviously this took no show shine.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:14 PM   #6
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Top 5 Power Rankings


1. Flight
This guy came out week one in top form and immediately placed himself
as one of the tough heads to beat. We'll be lookin for more from him this season.

2. Kirk
This guy is 17-0 for a reason. And his resume of heads he has beaten is enough
to earn him a top spot on this list. He's always a force to be reckoned with.

3. Lay Fear
When he puts his time into a verse he's dangerous. He usually has an over
confident swagger and words his punches well. But sometimes spreads himself too thin.

4. Satan
Satan dropped a verse well earnd of a top 5 spot. He sometimes has a problem with consistency but when he's on point he's always tough competition.

5.Ramcees
Although he didn't drop this week, I know he is top 5 material. He's got a way of
dropping dope punches week in and week out.




Closure.


Well the bar to top week one isn't very high, just hoping everyone will show this week and drop like you got some skill. We got some decent heads and I want to see some matches worth reading through.
Good luck.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:17 PM   #7
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Solid mag., dooooood.
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Old 06-15-08, 09:20 PM   #8
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Yeah thanks son,..haha you got mag next week.
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Old 06-16-08, 12:18 AM   #9
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nice job with the league man, keep it up.. hopefully you can get a successful league goin' on here
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Old 06-16-08, 12:29 AM   #10
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Yeah thats what I"m tryin for. lmao, not easy though. But I didn't expect it to be. S'all good
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Old 06-16-08, 12:31 AM   #11
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lay fear you should join the league... even tho ur the mod who cares i think we all trust you wouldn't pull some homo erotic shit if you lost a battle and take it like a man even if you should have won.. so word you should join the league it'd be more fun with you in it

and i can help writing mags... sometimes... just get at me a couple weeks in advance yo
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Old 06-16-08, 12:38 AM   #12
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J,..sigh. Didn't you read the mag? Lmao I'm in the league dude. Haha but thanks though.
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Old 06-16-08, 06:55 AM   #13
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Dope Mag...i hope we get some more sign ins, and less no shows
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Old 06-16-08, 10:05 AM   #14
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Flight shoulda had more in the mag....period. His bars were 100 times better than your recyled garbage Lay
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Old 06-16-08, 12:23 PM   #15
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Why do you have to start shit, man?
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