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Old 06-30-08, 07:09 AM   #1
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Week 4 Mag - Heatin up

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Week 4 Mag - Heatin up.

-Intro
-Battle Reviews
-Battle Predictions
-Top Five Punches
-Battle of the Week
-Verse of the Week
-Verse of the 'Weak'
-Top 5 Power Rankigns
-New Faces
-Outro




Intro.



Well this was another decent showing for the VTL despite only having one no show. There was a few close battles and some pretty decent verses dropped. I still have to urge more voting, you need to be voting on atleast 4 battles. I haven enforced it yet, even though there is a rule against it. But if you guys don't pick it up this week I'll have to start deducting votes for people that dont vote, because its not fair to the people who do take their time an vote. Anyway, this has been another successful week thanks to the members in the league. An now that there is contendorship matches goin up these next few weeks should start to get interesting an its gonna become evident who wants it more.



Battle Reviews

Kirk vs Ramcees
This was alot closer than the votes may have shown. And if anything can be taken from this battle, like I said week one, Ram cannot be taken lightly. Kirk came with his usual wordplay and clever punches that have seem to got him this far already. He had some decent punches throughtout despite coming out with a weak opener. Ram on the other hand came the complete opposite, he came out strong with a funny opener an that immediately set off his verse. Although after his first few quotables, he had a few bad flips on some alright concepts. In the end, Kirk edged this one out with the consistency he brings in week in and week out.

Flight vs Format
I was on the fence on how this one was gonna turn out. Until the verses were dropped it really lived up to my expectations. Format had to post early, and his verse came of no dissapoinment despite the limited time he had. He quoted last weeks mag, an then flipped it to come out with a respectable opener. He fell off with his next two punches. However, he picked it up with his writers block line, an his sick closer. Format came in knowing what he had to beat - I expected him to come harder. Right off the back Flight took the concept Form used and flipped it on him which was a good opener imo. Then his second bar was dope, right away I thought Flight had it, but after that it seemed he really fell off. Idk if he thought his first two bars would be enough to take it or what. This was the closest battle of the week, an luckily this battle got the votes on it that it deserved. Format ended up winnin barely 3 - 2. Good battle by both.

Lay Fear vs Flash
This was kind of one sided. Due to the fact, that Flash had alot of personals that didn't land because they were false. He assumed Lay was someone else from RB an to that. His core punches missed. Lay came out with his usual swagger, had a good opening flip and came pretty consistent throughout despite one weak line. Overall it was a ok battle, and ended up Lay takin it 3 - 0.

LPMNDCTE vs Yung MEDIkated
Well what can we say, does landslide come to mind? Yung dropped verse, and seemed to open up dissing Lay instead of LP. After that he didn't even really have any decent punches at his disposal to go at LP with. LP saw what he was up against, an dropped an avg verse an took this one easilyyyyyyyy.

Satan vs JTR
This was this weeks let down. Satan bein one of the more talented heads in the league, and JTR bein one of the most respected battlers on the site. JTR talked it up, an there was alotta hype around this. J had his well known cocky attitude coming in with promises of "whoopin satan"..buildin up the inevitable no show battle. Meh, both heads are still in the league after we had a talk with J an he apologized and should come out gunnin this week with something to prove.


Battle Predictions


*Contendorship Match*
Kirk vs Format

Format's coming off what some might say is an upset, and Kirk is still riding on his 3 - 0 winnin streak thats lead him to the top of the league. He's got alot of momentum built up, an thats hard to beat. Combined with his skills an effort he puts into his verses this is gonna be a tough match up if Form dropps like he did last week. If Form works on wording his punches a lil better an uses come good concepts in this one, this is gonna be a close one down to the wire. But I think Kirk will edge this one out with his usual consistency.

*Contendorship match*
Lay Fear vs LPMNDCTE

After week ones loss, Lay's been on a roll the past two weeks. With wins over two decent heads already he's lookin to make it three. His arrogant style an witty punches have carried him to where he's at. An it'll be put on display here. LP's coming off an easy win an is ready to prove he can compete in the important matches. After his win, an some losses to some good heads L's squeezed into the contendorship an he'll be lookin to prove to everyone that he belongs in it.

Ramcees vs Nitrogen
I don't really know much about Nitrogen. But I know, if he wants a chance at winning this he better come direct, and at the top of his game. Rams not one to be mettled with, an after last weeks nail biter I'm positive he's ready to elevate himself an do it to a degree where there is no question who the winner is.

Flight vs LFS
Flight has been through two close losses in a row, despite his win in week one. He's faced three good heads an this might be his week to pull through an prove he's still got his top dog status. I think Flights quite capable of droppin dope if he puts the time in, an I think he'll take this.

Flash vs Yung MEDIkated
Flash is coming off a loss none the less, but Yung hasn't proven that he's ready to compete with the heads in this league yet. I think Flash will take this if he comes with a worthy enough verse.

Satan vs Mauvais Loup
I'm hoping Satan will show this week, if he does this will actually be a pretty good battle imo. Mauv has been elevating on RB an is lookin to assert himself in a league and is eager to battle. Satan is coming off a no show, so I'm not quite sure what to expect out of him in this bout.

JTR vs BigChase
JTR no showed last week, but if he shows this week Big is gonna have some problems on his hands that I don't think he'll be able to wash off with any amount of soap. I don't really no much about Big so I'm gonna go with J takin this one.


TOP FIVE PUNCHES



f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
Format vs Flight

read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
Flight vs Format

Honestly, bro. You get on pussy. Why? Simple, you must suck,
Because last time you hit a g spot, they beat you the fuck up.
Kirk vs Ramcees

fuck it man..I don’t know any good nameplays to stomp it
but it surely rolled off my tongue…a lot quicker then ur mom did
Ramcees vs Kirk

Yeah I dropped F last week..but another one this week to clown too.
But you haven even climbed up enough to reach the status I beat HIM down to.
Lay Fear vs Flash


Battle of the Week


Quote:
Originally Posted by Format

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
Flight vs Format

Form proved he can drop with the best of them.


it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top


vs

Quote:
Originally Posted by Flight

fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters



Verse of the Week

Quote:
Orignally Posted by Lay Fear



Quote:
Originally Posted by Flash
blah last week was bull shit...




There's some truth to it, but your always spittin ass first.
But I don't get why you'd start a check..by summin up your last verse.
An I come live an direct, always expressin terror enthralled.
Shit. cuz I could snap a Flash..without usin any type of camera at all.
Actin like ya girls innocent, she ain't got nothin to reminicse about.
Ya girls legs are like belt buckles..they open up right before dick gets whipped out.
Shes gotta Uphill battle at gettin clean, an this segment is ripped.
Fucka whore. Cuz she'll Mount'n, Rushmore dudes STILL beggin for dick.
Enough of this cocky shit, I'm the king so how'd you figure it homie.
Cuz that high horse you seem to be ridin on..is more like a miniature pony.
Yeah I dropped F last week..but another one this week to clown too.
But you haven even climbed up enough to reach the status I beat HIM down to.


G'luck.



Verse of the 'Weak'


Quote:
Originally Posted by Yung MEDIkated

Little Pussy Mothafuckaz Never Do Come Through Elevated
ok so now i understand your name..1
you got so much fear you layed here
hoping lay fear would protect your fame...2
king me while i check mate
then beat your chess til i get board like checkers........3
how can he be better than me when off the record
this is his record(0-0)....4
bitch i'm not hot
i'm cayanne pepper, chilli and peppers....5
so give this young man a glass of water6
he stepped in to hells kitchen and just got slaughtered...7
he thought he could fuck with the medikated8
my level so high my skills get escalated9
but we already know
(Little Pussy Mothafuckaz Never Do Come Through Eleveted)10


-You really need to work on settin up a bar structure, if you can't notice how everyone else is writing. This isn' audio, battles are based on what you read..saying somethin then flippin it into a diss or punch. Work on it an elevate.


Top Five Power Rankings


1. Kirk
Mr. Consistent, this guy has proved week in an week out he deserves to be up here. He's undefeated so far, an is lookin to get the 4th win this week to slingshot him into the champ match.

2. Lay Fear
After the openin season loss, he has made a complete turn around. His overly confident an clever style is what he brings to the table week in an week out.

3. Flight
Even though this guys had two rough weeks, he's still dropped worthy of a top 3 spot. He's always dangerous an a force to be reckoned with.

4. Format
Climbin the ranks, he's proving each week he's not just an avg head of the league an he's top five material. Yeah, go ahead an underestimate him.

5. Ramcees
After a tough loss, he's still a respectable top 5 ranked head an is gonna be tough for anyone to beat. Witty an funny, good luck if you go up against this guy.


New Faces

-LFS
-Mauvais Loup
-BigChase
-Nitrogen

We got some new talent entering the league, an they'll be lookin to show us what there made of an make a immediate impact on the league this week. Welcome, show up an drop your best.


Outro.


We have gone from, there is no chance at havin a league on RV. To actually having a active league as far as battles go. We got some talent an its apparent each week everyones hungry for the wins. There's been close battles each week which makes each week even more suspenseful. You never know who's gonna come out on top. I just urge you guys to vote on battle more, or I will HAVE to enforce it with vote deduction, I'd hate for some of you to lose because you can't leave some feed on someones battle. Only takes a few minutes. Overrall good week, an with the contendorship matches up this should be a interesting next couple of weeks. Pz, goodluck


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Old 06-30-08, 09:23 AM   #2
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Good shit, d00d. I got it next week.
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Old 06-30-08, 09:39 AM   #3
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Lol thats straight, we might as well just switch off every week.
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Old 06-30-08, 05:11 PM   #4
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straight shootin' lay, thanks for another mag.
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Old 06-30-08, 08:04 PM   #5
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thanks man, are you in the league under a different name?
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Old 06-30-08, 10:44 PM   #6
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yeah, flight's pw is a bunch of numbers that i get too lazy too look up, no worries though, i'll just be posting in chat and what not with this name
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Old 06-30-08, 11:59 PM   #7
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Lol I was jw, you can post under Germ in your battle tooo. Ha you gonna post early this week? I like readin ya verses.
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Old 07-01-08, 12:25 AM   #8
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lol @ verse of the weak

That shits hillarious

Good job lay, always a good read
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Old 07-01-08, 12:34 PM   #9
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haha..yeah we try to spice it up a bit so its not like reading the news. thanks though.
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Old 07-01-08, 03:07 PM   #10
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Yung should put that in his sig.


2x VTL Verse of the Weak
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Old 07-01-08, 08:31 PM   #11
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lmao, yeah true. Rep that shit.
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Old 07-01-08, 08:49 PM   #12
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Quote:
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Yung should put that in his sig.


2x VTL Verse of the Weak





he still insists that he is great...


go figure...
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Old 07-01-08, 08:57 PM   #13
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that faggot can't fuck with me...i'm undefeated!
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Old 07-01-08, 10:31 PM   #14
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lmao your un-beat anyone too.
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Old 07-01-08, 10:35 PM   #15
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that's off-topic.
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