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06-11-08, 09:43 AM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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SUPERVILLAIN vs DeadlyV
IP: 611A A12A
SUPERVILLAIN vs. DeadlyV
Topical Battle Rules: Topic: "Hip Hop" 10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting i'll check in after i see that you have done so. ummm, i guess we'll go from there. lol. have fun...good luck.  oner... ...the supervillain of crhyme... Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 06-16-08 at 09:43 AM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
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06-11-08, 09:53 AM
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IP: DA57 1E8E
DeadlyV has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-08 09:53 AM.
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06-11-08, 10:07 AM
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New to RV
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IP: DA57 1E8E
I'm travellin to the top of hip, hop, right, here...
Not stoppin till I pop another big, hit, next, year... The state of the industry is appallin I'm all in... People chat the same shit on TV but they ain't foolin... Damn Sellouts turnin hip hop to POP please stop!.. This shit never would have happened if they never shot tupac.. But things lookin better, slims on his way back in the game.. Got Dre commin out agian to once again, straight up the plate.. Supervillain who you kiddin you underwritten as the joker.. This hip hop games a killer an I'm in to win, I'll smoke ya.. Take your raps around the block an sell em onto soulja.. They no good for u so sell to him then pretend like you a soldier.. The industrys funny, but you'll never see it from the inside.. Once Deadly an the Reckless Doggs destroy it from the inside.. Hip Hops Changed! And there it ain't turnin back.. The only way to save it is to burn it down an start from scratch.. |
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06-12-08, 10:27 AM
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IP: 611A A12A
SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-08 10:27 AM.
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06-17-08, 05:40 AM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 611A A12A
"FROM COAL TO DIAMONDS"
"i'd like to thank New York...big up to the Bronx: it was the native source bringing life to Hip Hop, born between it's parks and it's basement boards as forms of expression, reflecting the restless needs of nameless sorts who would collectively bring change from unique ways of creative force that had aimed to turn the page and stray away from the "basic norm" so it was praised, attained some acclaim and then paved a blatant course thus the wave traced to it's major lore would break on C-A's famous shores through the aide of dj laced support, the influence relayed the blazin' torch to be embraced by the faceless scores awaitin' something worth waitin' for in short, they finally obtained a sort of escape through four innovative doors some viewed 'em as entertainment ports, others? as tools of trade for work those that went through the doors improved 'em...it truly upgraded worth the level of rappin', taggin', djin' and beat breakin' was raised...and soared i tip my hat to the pioneers, only through true dedication is elevation formed" ...supervillain of big bad crhyme sindicate...
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 QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE  "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown  R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-17-08, 12:49 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
IP: 934F A17A
polls brother.
your verse was enjoyable..i like the way u went upod selling it to the reader. Your flow was on point as always due to the multi rhyme scheme you used. Though i think sometimes because of that certain rhyme scheme with shorter verses its harder to get your meaning out as much as you wanted to. Which i thought was happening here..but you wrapped it up nice in the last line...over all a good piece should be enough to win it bro. deadly...seemed you clashed topicals and text battle...lol seemse u tried to diss your opponent? thats kind of weird to see in a topical battle..i felt your verse lacked a lot of anything in topical standards though your last 2 lines i thought made your verse go from whack ..to meh...so just try and stay on topic..establish a flow and try and get some if not imagery..get emotion..because flow and emotion can really sell a verse man...just keep that in mind and keep elevatin. props S.V. ..you big bad chrymie you 
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06-17-08, 04:08 PM
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IP: 2B8F 944C
Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
S.V. takes it hands down. Great flow great multis some inteligent work and an enjoyable read. I dig it keep it up man. DeadlyV, who takes shots at his opponent in a Topical? Thats tasteless. You should worked on making your words rhyme better. Plate and Game ? Soulja and Soldier?
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06-19-08, 04:53 AM
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IP: 611A A12A
^^^bumpage!!!
let's get these votes in. s.v. deadly, c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-19-08, 11:47 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
Sv gets my vote because his verse was better put together, good vocab., good multis, generic take on the topic but that's not really where you needed to shine. Actually was able to read SV's without feeling like I was wasting my life. DeadlyV, noone of this is hate but I could barely get through your verse. Nothing you said really made me want to keep readin'. Also, your take on the topic was pretty generic. It was just poorly written. Half way through it was like you were tryna battle him. I just didn't see where you were comin' from, man. No hate, you just need to work on some things. Vote - SV Return the favor, if you don't mind.
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06-19-08, 07:51 PM
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Whys That?
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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
IP: 651E B56A
nice drop, you will get the win, id vote but for obvious reasons I cant.
btw, were do you find these unheard of cats to battle? lol |
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06-19-08, 09:28 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 7E2D E959
I understand that I tried to battle, that was my mistake. You may as well close the battle and give it to SV. I forefit. The verse I wrote doesnt meet criteria due to my mis-interpretation. I wouldnt say no to a rematch tho. Jus to make up for this poor attempt. Let me know.
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06-20-08, 12:09 AM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 611A A12A
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^^^lol. homeboy found me. he responded to an open topical call-out...so i accepted. i battled yung because he was poppin' off about the fam...and i wasn't having that at all. i battled lay fear because he was the most active battler in the front lines...so...ummm...yeah. hopefully that explains some of my rational folks.p.s.- deadly, if you want to request the forfeit with the forum mod, cool. i read your p.m., so out of respect, i will rematch you if that's what you really want to do. if it does go down though, please make sure that you properly prepare and execute your piece accordingly bruh. you can pick the topic as well. if you are 100% sure that you still want to do this, get at me...hollar. one love, the supe esvee, cee-ess
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-20-08, 05:56 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 967B 85BD
yeh word up, This DeadlyV dude seems prety real. Compared to a lot of other new members (and old ones at that fact) he seems like he actually wants to learn.
Thats whats up, respect to DeadlyV |
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06-20-08, 09:15 PM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 611A A12A
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^^^yeah, the kid left me a personal p.m. which i won't get into right here in front lines, but i got respect for little homie and for what he's trying to accomplish. he's hungry and he's humble. so as far as a rematch situation goes...he gets special treatment. word. bumpage. s.v.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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