Intangible vs LFS

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.

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Fear

checking 2 1 2 1 2

lets go 20 + lines

I can do 20. Mind if I dropped by Saturday though? I can't guarantee it by Friday but I'll try. lol

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i dont mind at all

found some free time in my hectic ass week. lol have fun.

whew, finally lay did me a favor this week, he lined up an herb for me,
i'm thinkin his name must reflect his skill, cuz I don't perceive any,
so far i've gone hard against the best, dude you can't expect a win,
you could just delete your verse, you're already used to the recycle bin,
thanks for the extension but i won't use it, you won't die another day,
i know his name's Tang, but when i'm done you'll be callin me OJ,
i mean look at the evidence, no one in vtl see you winnin dude,
seriously the only one who picked me to lose this battle was you,
i hope you value those 3 points cuz this week it's not gonna flux,
cuz unlike last week this time your opponent is actually showin up,
in fact i got a way for you to win, here's some advice that works,
go run along and log on to AIM and ask kirk to write your verse,
it's good i got to battle you though cuz at least i get to improve,
i'm your messiah into a loss, just say "jesus christ" when you lose,
i hate to sound broke, but if you get any votes someone was smokin,
but i could give you a handicap by droppin late AND not votin,
should i lower myself to you, i mean that's a large diff in skill,
with as many battles as you ask for i'd hope you picked up a lil,
let me wrap this battle up now, i wanna see how you manage,
besides you're intangible right, at least the punches won't do as much damage...

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Come on man I thought JTR and Flight already did enough
What's LFS stand for any ways? L oosing F ucking S ucks
If you go by statics after this battle you'll be 0-3
Don't give me this bull shit that you got more votes than me
You claim that you better at text, who am I even dealing with?
Dude your rhymes remind me of safe sex, Im just not feeling shit
Mike Jackson look a like, who you think you fucking with?
Intangible nigga no?, you can't come and touch the kid
You's a skater my dude that hair and braces gotta go
I kno everyone must be thinkin, "Why is Rick James rhymin for?"
You a easy one I don't need Kirk? aparently
We can all see you loosing here (hair) my bars are 'Kemo Therapy'
You look like a bitch that needs to get a slap
When I looked at your picture
I thought it was an original photo of michael jackson when he was black
Vtl underestimated me and picked you in their favor
Imma prove to them Im a GIANT and you just another Patriot player
Man this guy is an asshole can't even beat his own dick
he can stick a knife in his asshole and couldn't kill shit
Sorry Lay but this battle was a mismatch its not rap bitch
It's fuckin pointless L's better off punchen a Cactis
or drinking gass and chewing on some matchsticks
I can sleep on this fag so I'll call this cat matris
Daryll pick a spot and I'll let your blood get spilled there
You'll be gangsta when you roll in a wheel chair
I get high but I still see shit clearer, if you wanted easy comp
you should of spit in the mirror.
Next December imma ask for a pistol for Christmas
Put LFS on my hitlist get him packaged and fedex the witness
Imma rap hitman taken out herbs is buisness
lay fear do us all a favor and next time get me some competition.

LFS you can DQ Intangible for using a picture, or you can deduct 2 votes. It's your decision.

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Fear

i didnt kno u can't use picture if its gna be like that u can sign me out alll these homo rules rap battling is rap battling stop being so pussy about shit

LFS do what u want if u decide to let this have noting agaist me then illl stay in vtl if not then i don't wanna play with people who sound like my 2nd grade principal

whew, finally lay did me a favor this week, he lined up an herb for me,
i'm thinkin his name must reflect his skill, cuz I don't perceive any,
^basic
so far i've gone hard against the best, dude you can't expect a win,
you could just delete your verse, you're already used to the recycle bin,
^meh
thanks for the extension but i won't use it, you won't die another day,
i know his name's Tang, but when i'm done you'll be callin me OJ,
^don't like the wording
i mean look at the evidence, no one in vtl see you winnin dude,
seriously the only one who picked me to lose this battle was you,
^haha
i hope you value those 3 points cuz this week it's not gonna flux,
cuz unlike last week this time your opponent is actually showin up,
^solid
in fact i got a way for you to win, here's some advice that works,
go run along and log on to AIM and ask kirk to write your verse,
^nah
it's good i got to battle you though cuz at least i get to improve,
i'm your messiah into a loss, just say "jesus christ" when you lose,
^ehh
i hate to sound broke, but if you get any votes someone was smokin,
but i could give you a handicap by droppin late AND not votin,
^decent, self glor though
should i lower myself to you, i mean that's a large diff in skill,
with as many battles as you ask for i'd hope you picked up a lil,
^basic
let me wrap this battle up now, i wanna see how you manage,
besides you're intangible right, at least the punches won't do as much damage...
^ decent

^^i dunno, seems like you rushed it too much, there was a few decent ones, but alot of your punches were on the weaker side, some had potential, but poor wording kinda skewed them a little, i thought you could do better

Come on man I thought JTR and Flight already did enough
What's LFS stand for any ways? L oosing F ucking S ucks
^basic
If you go by statics after this battle you'll be 0-3
Don't give me this bull shit that you got more votes than me
^feeding.. and basic
You claim that you better at text, who am I even dealing with?
Dude your rhymes remind me of safe sex, Im just not feeling shit
^kinda played
Mike Jackson look a like, who you think you fucking with?
Intangible nigga no?, you can't come and touch the kid
^not a punch
You's a skater my dude that hair and braces gotta go
I kno everyone must be thinkin, "Why is Rick James rhymin for?"
^i actually laughed at this.
You a easy one I don't need Kirk? aparently
We can all see you loosing here (hair) my bars are 'Kemo Therapy'
^not bad, but forced... half a feed as well
You look like a bitch that needs to get a slap
When I looked at your picture
I thought it was an original photo of michael jackson when he was black
^you actually already said he was a michael jackson look alike, so, basic
Vtl underestimated me and picked you in their favor
Imma prove to them Im a GIANT and you just another Patriot player
^decent actually
Man this guy is an asshole can't even beat his own dick
he can stick a knife in his asshole and couldn't kill shit
^nah
Sorry Lay but this battle was a mismatch its not rap bitch
It's fuckin pointless L's better off punchen a Cactis
^basic
or drinking gass and chewing on some matchsticks
I can sleep on this fag so I'll call this cat matris
^nah
Daryll pick a spot and I'll let your blood get spilled there
You'll be gangsta when you roll in a wheel chair
^lol nah
I get high but I still see shit clearer, if you wanted easy comp
you should of spit in the mirror.
^nah
Next December imma ask for a pistol for Christmas
Put LFS on my hitlist get him packaged and fedex the witness
^lol what?
Imma rap hitman taken out herbs is buisness
lay fear do us all a favor and next time get me some competition.
^self glor

^^well, you had a few decent lines in there, but not enough to overcome how much useless lines you had in there, alot of shit was played too... plus you didn't read the rules, so, either way, i have LFS taking this by a little, seriously could've gone the other way if Intangible had a less dribble and maybe one more decent punch

v/ LFS

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.

i don't really mind the picture thing but if i have to pick one i guess i'd take the vote deduction. but it's not a big deal to me.

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i mean look at the evidence, no one in vtl see you winnin dude,
seriously the only one who picked me to lose this battle was you,
let me wrap this battle up now, i wanna see how you manage,
besides you're intangible right, at least the punches won't do as much damage...
i hate to sound broke, but if you get any votes someone was smokin,
but i could give you a handicap by droppin late AND not votin,

vs

Vtl underestimated me and picked you in their favor
Imma prove to them Im a GIANT and you just another Patriot player
You a easy one I don't need Kirk? aparently
We can all see you loosing here (hair) my bars are 'Kemo Therapy'

Guys try an come a little more clever next week..Intangible you really stepped it up from what you dropped last week..your on the right path..an LFS this was one of your better verses..although consistency didn't seem to be your strong suit, take ya time..decent battle.

v/LFS

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Fear

oh and not that it's a big deal but the AIM line was cuz a few weeks bak he IM'd Kirk bout helpin him with some verses to battle. in case that sways anyones though. and ironically the verse he used to battle kirk was recycled. i shoulda just stuck to my link battle ways. lol

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