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Fear

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hmmm, 20 maybe.

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.

Sounds good.....

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not time tomorrow, so here it is..

i think we've had enough of dry verses, so please, just quit spitting
everytime i'm always left saying OK.... how the hell are you still winning
so i start my windup, i'll sit him down...aim straight for this dike's mouth
it's not like im trying to brag here... but K was meant to strikeout
shit, i've got a stronghold on this one, there's no way you're going to push by
yeah, you have the tidal, so its only fitting you get a big wave goodbye
and you can tell K wanted it bad, but he doesn't do it to be viewed 'champ'
so along with his heavyweight belt, he bought his girl some new pants
i strike quick, bitch i hit with fire, you just got lucky the first bout
i know this is my match to light up... cause yours is by far burnt out
its my time to shine, i'll smack ya silly, send your head for a long spin
for real, its not much to take Mr.Kite... actually, all you need is a strong wind
and you're shit is such a downer man, really, it almost bores me to death
cause you're verses are such an anchor man... i'll go watch that movie instead
see i step up my game, while Kirk'll just get desperate for licks
last week he just barely did lay-up... i could do those when i was six
you can see he's a Beatles fan, so he tries some big hits in his verses
but if he wants to create an impact like them... i'll make him one in the ground first
and i hear he has some writers block, lately those concepts keep missin'
so some advice, stick to what you know... topcials aren't suppose to have disses

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.

Ahhh, don't feel like writing. G/L.

Apparently some of ya'll want me to be like Taco, but dawgs, I'll remind you,
Why would I go El way? When it consists of grabbin' balls from behind dudes,
You're definetly on a roll. Bro, your best punches... well, all of them weak,
Cause your winning streak is just a shit stain in the drawers of the league,
This fag gets no pussy. Nowadays he ain't even sayin' that it's bullshit,
E.T. ain't had finger action since the 80's and even then it was with school kids,
Faggot. Yes, we have battled before. You thought I couldn't see you kid,
But now Flight... Its 'round two.......... votes that I'll fuckin' beat you with,
Ain't takin' this title, Flight. But go ahead and toss out a mean verse,
Cause if you EVER have this belt over your shoulders you'll be on your knees first.
I'll hurt this whore. And that quote in your sig. is words of pure,
You know EXACTLY what its like to be raindrops cause your verse is pour,
Ain't in my division, son. The truth is I'm winnin' cause I got a better word,
This is a heavyweight match bro... your chick would be a better competitor,
I didn't know you were a car guy. But looking back... well lemme think,
Guess you're right.... Cause this fag always does prefer a hot rod over anything,
Forreal, Flight. You never hurt me with your lines in this battle, are you kiddin' me?
You ain't delivered no champ pagne.... but you can pop a bottle for my victory.

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First off good champ match..I'll be the first to break this down.


i think we've had enough of dry verses, so please, just quit spitting
everytime i'm always left saying OK.... how the hell are you still winning
k.
so i start my windup, i'll sit him down...aim straight for this dike's mouth
it's not like im trying to brag here... but K was meant to strikeout
lol..good
shit, i've got a stronghold on this one, there's no way you're going to push by
yeah, you have the tidal, so its only fitting you get a big wave goodbye
sick.
and you can tell K wanted it bad, but he doesn't do it to be viewed 'champ'
so along with his heavyweight belt, he bought his girl some new pants
lol..k
i strike quick, bitch i hit with fire, you just got lucky the first bout
i know this is my match to light up... cause yours is by far burnt out
weakk.
its my time to shine, i'll smack ya silly, send your head for a long spin
for real, its not much to take Mr.Kite... actually, all you need is a strong wind
good.
and you're shit is such a downer man, really, it almost bores me to death
cause you're verses are such an anchor man... i'll go watch that movie instead
na..
see i step up my game, while Kirk'll just get desperate for licks
last week he just barely did lay-up... i could do those when i was six
streching..but ok.
you can see he's a Beatles fan, so he tries some big hits in his verses
but if he wants to create an impact like them... i'll make him one in the ground first
mehh..
and i hear he has some writers block, lately those concepts keep missin'
so some advice, stick to what you know... topcials aren't suppose to have disses
k.




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Apparently some of ya'll want me to be like Taco, but dawgs, I'll remind you,
Why would I go El way? When it consists of grabbin' balls from behind dudes,
lol.
You're definetly on a roll. Bro, your best punches... well, all of them weak,
Cause your winning streak is just a shit stain in the drawers of the league,
mehh..
This fag gets no pussy. Nowadays he ain't even sayin' that it's bullshit,
E.T. ain't had finger action since the 80's and even then it was with school kids,
haha.
Faggot. Yes, we have battled before. You thought I couldn't see you kid,
But now Flight... Its 'round two.......... votes that I'll fuckin' beat you with,
eh..ok
Ain't takin' this title, Flight. But go ahead and toss out a mean verse,
Cause if you EVER have this belt over your shoulders you'll be on your knees first.
dope.
I'll hurt this whore. And that quote in your sig. is words of pure,
You know EXACTLY what its like to be raindrops cause your verse is pour,
no..wordingg..
Ain't in my division, son. The truth is I'm winnin' cause I got a better word,
This is a heavyweight match bro... your chick would be a better competitor,
no.
I didn't know you were a car guy. But looking back... well lemme think,
Guess you're right.... Cause this fag always does prefer a hot rod over anything,
lol.
Forreal, Flight. You never hurt me with your lines in this battle, are you kiddin' me?
You ain't delivered no champ pagne.... but you can pop a bottle for my victory.
good closer.



dammnn...this is so cloosee...they each had 4 no or mehh ish punches..an the rest were all good..an they each had a sick bar..kirk your competitor chick line was whackk..an that pour line was worded horribly..I feel like ya rushed it a bit..an Flight that anchor man line was garbage haha..I actually think Flight edged this one out IMO..but we need more votes.

v/fli

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i think we've had enough of dry verses, so please, just quit spitting
everytime i'm always left saying OK.... how the hell are you still winning
simple, kinda corny.. I don't think it works
so i start my windup, i'll sit him down...aim straight for this dike's mouth
it's not like im trying to brag here... but K was meant to strikeout
this was ok, nothing special
shit, i've got a stronghold on this one, there's no way you're going to push by
yeah, you have the tidal, so its only fitting you get a big wave goodbye
title/tidal wordplay.. whilst to some it may work, to me it is forced or only works in the resulting factor that the reader has a speech impediment. so that makes this punch forced, so only ok
and you can tell K wanted it bad, but he doesn't do it to be viewed 'champ'
so along with his heavyweight belt, he bought his girl some new pants
a fat joke on a dudes girlfriend = PLAYED!
i strike quick, bitch i hit with fire, you just got lucky the first bout
i know this is my match to light up... cause yours is by far burnt out
this was ok, but kinda basic
its my time to shine, i'll smack ya silly, send your head for a long spin
for real, its not much to take Mr.Kite... actually, all you need is a strong wind
clever and funny, props..
and you're shit is such a downer man, really, it almost bores me to death
cause you're verses are such an anchor man... i'll go watch that movie instead
nah, not feeling this
see i step up my game, while Kirk'll just get desperate for licks
last week he just barely did lay-up... i could do those when i was six
cheesy again, you need to hook up some raw wording for these types of punches
you can see he's a Beatles fan, so he tries some big hits in his verses
but if he wants to create an impact like them... i'll make him one in the ground first
ok, but wording was off
and i hear he has some writers block, lately those concepts keep missin'
so some advice, stick to what you know... topcials aren't suppose to have disses
nah, not a good closer


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Apparently some of ya'll want me to be like Taco, but dawgs, I'll remind you,
Why would I go El way? When it consists of grabbin' balls from behind dudes,
fucking gay jokes.. nah, you gotta put a dope flip on them for it to work
You're definetly on a roll. Bro, your best punches... well, all of them weak,
Cause your winning streak is just a shit stain in the drawers of the league,
ehhh, i didn't really like this
This fag gets no pussy. Nowadays he ain't even sayin' that it's bullshit,
E.T. ain't had finger action since the 80's and even then it was with school kids,
eewww! nasty! but a funny punch, lmao
Faggot. Yes, we have battled before. You thought I couldn't see you kid,
But now Flight... Its 'round two.......... votes that I'll fuckin' beat you with,
lol, decent and had swagger to
Ain't takin' this title, Flight. But go ahead and toss out a mean verse,
Cause if you EVER have this belt over your shoulders you'll be on your knees first.
decent imagery there made it a clever punch
I'll hurt this whore. And that quote in your sig. is words of pure,
You know EXACTLY what its like to be raindrops cause your verse is pour,
wordplay was forced and the rhyming was simplistic
Ain't in my division, son. The truth is I'm winnin' cause I got a better word,
This is a heavyweight match bro... your chick would be a better competitor,
OMFG!! he dropped a "ya girl is fat" punch and then so did you.. minus 3 cool points for this
I didn't know you were a car guy. But looking back... well lemme think,
Guess you're right.... Cause this fag always does prefer a hot rod over anything,
nah, fucking gay jokes again
Forreal, Flight. You never hurt me with your lines in this battle, are you kiddin' me?
You ain't delivered no champ pagne.... but you can pop a bottle for my victory.
wordplay was moderately forced, but the punch was pretty clever


Ok, because it was the champ match I thought I would give it a solid breakdown. I don't know if Lay is trying to boost your morale by overly praising you or something... but, I honestly didn't think this battle was that great. I think both guys are feeling a little burnt out after going on some serious winning runs. Overall though, I felt there were too many ups and downs in both verses. The clinching factor for me was that Kirk seemed to show a small piece of consistency just before the middle of his verse where he dropped I think like 3 straight punches that all had me laughing. He had a more polished verse and showed a bit more creativity with his punches. I may sound harsh, but I know you both can drop better and I know you both will in the future. Also, please refrain from the played gay jokes and your girl is fat jokes unless you are going to put a real fresh flip on them.

Vote: Kirk

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i think we've had enough of dry verses, so please, just quit spitting
everytime i'm always left saying OK.... how the hell are you still winning
gay
so i start my windup, i'll sit him down...aim straight for this dike's mouth
it's not like im trying to brag here... but K was meant to strikeout
eh...
shit, i've got a stronghold on this one, there's no way you're going to push by
yeah, you have the tidal, so its only fitting you get a big wave goodbye
ok
and you can tell K wanted it bad, but he doesn't do it to be viewed 'champ'
so along with his heavyweight belt, he bought his girl some new pants
played
i strike quick, bitch i hit with fire, you just got lucky the first bout
i know this is my match to light up... cause yours is by far burnt out
ehh
its my time to shine, i'll smack ya silly, send your head for a long spin
for real, its not much to take Mr.Kite... actually, all you need is a strong wind
kite? his name is kirk..gay unless im missing suttin
and you're shit is such a downer man, really, it almost bores me to death
cause you're verses are such an anchor man... i'll go watch that movie instead
wack
see i step up my game, while Kirk'll just get desperate for licks
last week he just barely did lay-up... i could do those when i was six
this is not the flight im use to
you can see he's a Beatles fan, so he tries some big hits in his verses
but if he wants to create an impact like them... i'll make him one in the ground first
alrite
and i hear he has some writers block, lately those concepts keep missin'
so some advice, stick to what you know... topcials aren't suppose to have disses
bad closer


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Apparently some of ya'll want me to be like Taco, but dawgs, I'll remind you,
Why would I go El way? When it consists of grabbin' balls from behind dudes,
wackk
You're definetly on a roll. Bro, your best punches... well, all of them weak,
Cause your winning streak is just a shit stain in the drawers of the league,
not feeling that
This fag gets no pussy. Nowadays he ain't even sayin' that it's bullshit,
E.T. ain't had finger action since the 80's and even then it was with school kids,
ok
Faggot. Yes, we have battled before. You thought I couldn't see you kid,
But now Flight... Its 'round two.......... votes that I'll fuckin' beat you with,
feelin the flow shit was good
Ain't takin' this title, Flight. But go ahead and toss out a mean verse,
Cause if you EVER have this belt over your shoulders you'll be on your knees first.
i like that huahuah good punch
I'll hurt this whore. And that quote in your sig. is words of pure,
You know EXACTLY what its like to be raindrops cause your verse is pour,
ok
Ain't in my division, son. The truth is I'm winnin' cause I got a better word,
This is a heavyweight match bro... your chick would be a better competitor,
lmfao
I didn't know you were a car guy. But looking back... well lemme think,
Guess you're right.... Cause this fag always does prefer a hot rod over anything,
dont like this
Forreal, Flight. You never hurt me with your lines in this battle, are you kiddin' me?
You ain't delivered no champ pagne.... but you can pop a bottle for my victory.
pretty good word play

I don't kno wtf happen to flight or kirk i thought both of them coulda shoulda came harder than this but overall i gotta give it to kirk he had more punches and when i read his i felt it more. Flight your one of the sickest rappers in this league idk what happen but fix it i enjoy reading ur texts and laughing gluck next week

v/ Kirk

Flight..
i think we've had enough of dry verses, so please, just quit spitting
everytime i'm always left saying OK.... how the hell are you still winning
Word..
so i start my windup, i'll sit him down...aim straight for this dike's mouth
it's not like im trying to brag here... but K was meant to strikeout
I dig it.
shit, i've got a stronghold on this one, there's no way you're going to push by
yeah, you have the tidal, so its only fitting you get a big wave goodbye
Nice punch.
and you can tell K wanted it bad, but he doesn't do it to be viewed 'champ'
so along with his heavyweight belt, he bought his girl some new pants
Hahahaha, I usually hate girlfriend punches but this was good.
i strike quick, bitch i hit with fire, you just got lucky the first bout
i know this is my match to light up... cause yours is by far burnt out
Word.
its my time to shine, i'll smack ya silly, send your head for a long spin
for real, its not much to take Mr.Kite... actually, all you need is a strong wind
This was killer.
and you're shit is such a downer man, really, it almost bores me to death
cause you're verses are such an anchor man... i'll go watch that movie instead
Meh.
see i step up my game, while Kirk'll just get desperate for licks
last week he just barely did lay-up... i could do those when i was six
Okay.
you can see he's a Beatles fan, so he tries some big hits in his verses
but if he wants to create an impact like them... i'll make him one in the ground first
Not bad.
and i hear he has some writers block, lately those concepts keep missin'
so some advice, stick to what you know... topcials aren't suppose to have disses
Meh.

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Kirk..
Apparently some of ya'll want me to be like Taco, but dawgs, I'll remind you,
Why would I go El way? When it consists of grabbin' balls from behind dudes,
I don't think people got the football reference, I thought this punch was sick.
You're definetly on a roll. Bro, your best punches... well, all of them weak,
Cause your winning streak is just a shit stain in the drawers of the league,
Nah.
This fag gets no pussy. Nowadays he ain't even sayin' that it's bullshit,
E.T. ain't had finger action since the 80's and even then it was with school kids,
Hahaha, sick.
Faggot. Yes, we have battled before. You thought I couldn't see you kid,
But now Flight... Its 'round two.......... votes that I'll fuckin' beat you with,
Good.
Ain't takin' this title, Flight. But go ahead and toss out a mean verse,
Cause if you EVER have this belt over your shoulders you'll be on your knees first.
Ehhhh..
I'll hurt this whore. And that quote in your sig. is words of pure,
You know EXACTLY what its like to be raindrops cause your verse is pour,
Blah, could have worded this a bit better.
Ain't in my division, son. The truth is I'm winnin' cause I got a better word,
This is a heavyweight match bro... your chick would be a better competitor,
Nah, not feeling it.
I didn't know you were a car guy. But looking back... well lemme think,
Guess you're right.... Cause this fag always does prefer a hot rod over anything,
This was too easy.
Forreal, Flight. You never hurt me with your lines in this battle, are you kiddin' me?
You ain't delivered no champ pagne.... but you can pop a bottle for my victory.
A bit forced, but a sweet idea.

This battle was very close. Both verses consisted of some great punches, some pretty good punches and some weak punches. After breaking it down I have Flight edging Kirk out by about a punch.

Vote: Flight

i only got a few minutes to post but here goes. I gotta give this one to Kirk, though honestly it could have gone either way. i think that the constant high level verses are wearing on both of these guys cuz you can see that though they are dropping good, it's not as god as expected in every bar. kirk once again won this one thru his consistence, he stays at a level that is what's needed to win but eventually he'll have to bring the bar up cuz as you saw in this battle flight wasn't gonna go soft in this one. a close battle that could easily have gone either way, but i feel kirk got this one.

vote: kirk

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