LFS vs. Ramcees

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.

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check, Lets go 10...

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sure. check. g'luck.

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LFS, the greatness.

*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?

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if u grant me ext. ill have something up tonight...

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Extension granted. Verse due by saturday midnight, try and have it up asap though.

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Fear

this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook

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*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
eh na, wording killed it.
you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
k.
Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
no, not creative..
The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
cock, cum, pussy, lines are all playeddddd to death.
i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?
good closer.

vs

this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
lol k.
looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
eh na,..
Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
k.
Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
solid.
dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook
weak closer.


This was kinda close battle..came down to who had the harsher verse really..they both had their ups' an downs' but Ram came harder..

v/Ram

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Fear

this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
^Ehh, pretty played.

looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
^Alright.

Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
^Nah.

Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
^Nah.

dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook
^Nah.




*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
^Like Lay said. Wording fucked it up.

you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
^I liked this one.

Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
^Nah.

The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
^Haha. Played but funny.

i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?
^Alright.

This wasn't a very good battle. I think that Ram prolly rushed his verse, and I know LFS rushed his. In my opinion, I think LFS barellly edged this one out for the win. Ram had maybe one or two lines that were okay but his consistency was where he fell off. LFS had quite a few alright and funny lines and won this with his consistency, IMO.

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*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
stupid wording, ruined the punch
you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
getting personal, although could've been better
Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
eh, this was.. well, lets say it.. garbage
The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
too simple for me
i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?
wording let it down because the concept was cool


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this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
OMFG!! PLAYED!!
looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
wow, self-glory with tired wordplay.. woah, peep my wordplay
Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
again, too played
Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
u've dropped played shit all through so far and then have the nerve to call his shit played.. that in itself rendered this bar not good
dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook
LMFAO!! the only decent bar you had.. but it was a golden one!!


Wow, this is a hard battle to call because both verses were generally weak. They both seemd to be rushed. LFS was elevating weekly, he had to have one off week. Ramcees has dropped some nice shit before, but this was just straight garbage. His entire verse was played to fuck apart from the last bar, which was easily the best bar of the battle. Yeah, I guess I'm a sucker for those corny yet comic lines. Fuck if the other guys didn't appreciate the hilarity, lmao. However, LFS was only let down in most parts by his wording. He showed some ok concepts, had an ok personal and his verse just wasn't as played and that is why I think I have to give the win to him... barely.

Vote: LFS

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this week just didn’t wanna work, so I decided… screw it
ill just drop something wack…but then this kid beat me to it
lol this was ok but played
looki bitch, ill run u da fuck over…cuz ya obviously aint worthy
N yeah im on the verge of re-tyring…I aint gettin my rims dirty
WACK soooo played man lol
Ya shits abserd b,.…..but thats ok, im known to entice readers
so ill avoid words like ass....unless im describing ur facial features
lol this didn't even make sense
Oh n I read that shit kid...ya rhymes are played out, and boring
prolly thinks RV loves him…cuz we finishing his sentences for him
.....i dont get it, this was dumb lol
dude honestly, u are a challenge, thats' why i cant do this by the book
cuz we all know...the wheelchairs the hardest part of the vegetable to cook
i get it but it's dumb lol...
vs.

*sigh* i didn't even wanna battle this week but at least it'll be short,
battlin this fag, i'll call him parquet cuz the ball's in his court,
lol nah not that great
you're the perfect examplae of the bigger they come, the harder the fall,
the last time you drop'd decent was vs Flight, cuz it's the last drop you have at all!
lol this was ok
Bitch I'm steppin over you and heading straight to the goal,
Hurtin ya feelings ,go ahead and wipe the shit off your soul,
nah too simple no punch
The disses is comparative to Earth, fuckin heat to the core,
My sentences make this pussy blister like vaginal sores,
lmao this is ok
i got a question for you son, there's some knowledge that i seek,
how's you go from a contendor's match to zero points in two weeks?
lol mean..

v/LFS

yo Ramces ur concepts are straight, your wording sucks tho, work on that you coulda won this easilly