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Old 07-21-08, 05:58 PM   #1
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*Contendership Match* Lay Fear (12) vs. King Solo (7)

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Lay Fear vs. King Solo

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

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10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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Old 07-21-08, 07:42 PM   #2
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Old 07-23-08, 10:41 AM   #3
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Oh yeah, This is Lay Fear's check. Hes on vacation.
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Old 07-24-08, 04:15 PM   #4
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I'm here, 20 is cool.
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Old 07-25-08, 10:25 PM   #5
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Lay got the extension. I ain't gonna be able to get to this tomorrow at any time so I guess I'll have to key some quick shit up for ya so there ain't a no show.


Here it is....

Lay Fear, congrats for winning the John Paul Nigro Tournament.
But, you still suck monkey testicles.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher on 04-20-06
I’m a smoke this drag queen, yeah.. the secrets out my son
Yeah, whilst I’ll fuckin’ lay D – he just dresses like one.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear on 06-17-08
I toss clout, your renderd and when it comes to this bout, surrender.
We haven seen a Lay-D matchup this questionable since the talks about ur gender.


^ ur fucking garbage son! But if ur gonna steal my style you hoe
at least keep it fresh n stop flippin wordplay I used OVER 2 years ago
ur nuthin but a fraud whore, now I put you up for the slaughter
a legend amongst his peers? & yet one push leaves him face down in the water
seriously bro, ur rep is a joke. u bring nuthin but losses where u from
& if u hit this site with some W’s.. it was followed by a .RAPVERSE.COM
ur final against 2v was like a trip through the years, droppin lines in bunches
there was the 80’s vs. the 70’s, & then a trip to the 60’s to find lays punches
plus, ya mom’s a fugly bitch.. if she was a whore she wudn’t make one cent
& YES! we know she’s on the game..
..coz her fat ass had to come as downloadable content
also, your girl tells me ur ass is straight pussy ‘n’ ur dick has zero clout
& you only stay hittin’ that ass at night until she fucking lays you out
nah, ure gay really..& never raisin ur game, so I’ll blaze ‘n’ rip
coz ur ass aint made a transition since ur boy tried to spice up ur relationship
this guy’s secretly a scrawny nerd to, he ain’t ever set to maul
& if his skeletal frame was in the hood, he’s packin a scythe bringin death to all
^ never done drugs either, whilst me I pop the rare E’s
so tonight, if Lay picks E..
..its coz his skills are a myth & he likes to hang with fairies
now fuck predictions! everyone knows I’ll win coz I keep shit fresh ‘n’ recent
but I’m hopin you lay doubt this time coz at least he was halfway decent


fuck you.
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Old 07-26-08, 02:43 AM   #6
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fuck quotes..







an judgin from ya verses I'v seen..

you been average, I still don't feel this whores worthy.
but he ALWAYS..
produces sick concepts..that he jus murders with whackness an poor wording.
this faggot acts tough, an noone in his family is good.
an yeah he's a Fletcher,..his occupation usually has to do with him handling wood.
ya rusty n need to catch up..ya custom title won't be remembered good..
nicks always tryin to get up to date.....so why respect a penis that never could?
eager to go twenty..I got plenty that'll leave you scorching.
no need to Strech ya verse out - it'll be carried out on a Strecther with you shortly.
this fags the queerest, he knows the truth sucks..
cuz his idea of a Knapsack.. is gettin tired n restin his head on a dudes nuts.
your no prize son, you'll be quick to die next..
cuz Nick'el assume he's worth alott..an end up only amountin to five cents.
style can't compete with mine, it'll be viewed as bias.
that verse would ONLY Pacify ..... was actually opposed to using violence.
I'm throwin punches..so how's it lookin then.
IF Nick stands up for his Rights..it'll jus be to get knocked down by my Hook again.
cartoons paint a picture..facts state you ain't nothin bitch.
I shoot for the stars - all three or four circlin ya head while recoverin from my fistt.
thinkin your important..while I jus laugh he's shakin..
cuz yeah Nick IS a king..this isn't a battle I consider it an assassination.


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Old 07-27-08, 04:50 PM   #7
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Fucking Vote Motherfuckers!!
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Old 07-27-08, 05:05 PM   #8
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lmao at us voting on battles an everyone disregaurding ours. bastards.
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Old 07-27-08, 05:06 PM   #9
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you been average, I still don't feel this whores worthy.
but he ALWAYS..
produces sick concepts..that he jus murders with whackness an poor wording.
lmao @ me thinking the same thing in a less harsh way that you stated, Fletcher is still tho +1
this faggot acts tough, an noone in his family is good.
an yeah he's a Fletcher,..his occupation usually has to do with him handling wood.
lol ayea this is played out
ya rusty n need to catch up..ya custom title won't be remembered good..
nicks always tryin to get up to date.....so why respect a penis that never could?
lmao dope, +2
eager to go twenty..I got plenty that'll leave you scorching.
no need to Strech ya verse out - it'll be carried out on a Strecther with you shortly.
aahh dope shit also +3
this fags the queerest, he knows the truth sucks..
cuz his idea of a Knapsack.. is gettin tired n restin his head on a dudes nuts.
see the concept was dope but ur set up sucked, shoulda worded better sorry broo
your no prize son, you'll be quick to die next..
cuz Nick'el assume he's worth alott..an end up only amountin to five cents.
lol PLAYED
style can't compete with mine, it'll be viewed as bias.
that verse would ONLY Pacify ..... was actually opposed to using violence.
i get the worplay, it's nice +4, and by the way it was iller when i said something like, he's pussy, wanna be a pacifist butill pacifist in his face
I'm throwin punches..so how's it lookin then.
IF Nick stands up for his Rights..it'll jus be to get knocked down by my Hook again.
this good but not enough to quote, wording was kinda funny
cartoons paint a picture..facts state you ain't nothin bitch.
I shoot for the stars - all three or four circlin ya head while recoverin from my fistt.
worded horribly
thinkin your important..while I jus laugh he's shakin..
cuz yeah Nick IS a king..this isn't a battle I consider it an assassination.
nah man

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^ ur fucking garbage son! But if ur gonna steal my style you hoe
at least keep it fresh n stop flippin wordplay I used OVER 2 years ago
no, i used the lay-d shit too i think, better then that, and mad people used it vs. Lay Doubt on RB before you ever did lol...
ur nuthin but a fraud whore, now I put you up for the slaughter
a legend amongst his peers? & yet one push leaves him face down in the water
lol this was ok but not good enough to quote
seriously bro, ur rep is a joke. u bring nuthin but losses where u from
& if u hit this site with some W’s.. it was followed by a .RAPVERSE.COM
lmao sick i like this, +1
ur final against 2v was like a trip through the years, droppin lines in bunches
there was the 80’s vs. the 70’s, & then a trip to the 60’s to find lays punches
SICK lol +2
plus, ya mom’s a fugly bitch.. if she was a whore she wudn’t make one cent
& YES! we know she’s on the game..
..coz her fat ass had to come as downloadable content
lool this was ok i cant quote it tho cuz ur wording didnt go wiht the concept
also, your girl tells me ur ass is straight pussy ‘n’ ur dick has zero clout
& you only stay hittin’ that ass at night until she fucking lays you out
lol nahh this is kinda played too
nah, ure gay really..& never raisin ur game, so I’ll blaze ‘n’ rip
coz ur ass aint made a transition since ur boy tried to spice up ur relationship
don't like it
this guy’s secretly a scrawny nerd to, he ain’t ever set to maul
& if his skeletal frame was in the hood, he’s packin a scythe bringin death to all
this is ok, guess ill quote it +3
^ never done drugs either, whilst me I pop the rare E’s
so tonight, if Lay picks E..
..its coz his skills are a myth & he likes to hang with fairies
lol pixies, i get it this is aight +4
now fuck predictions! everyone knows I’ll win coz I keep shit fresh ‘n’ recent
but I’m hopin you lay doubt this time coz at least he was halfway decent
lmao +5

I got nick taking this 5-4, yo Nick you stepped it up right at the end with 3 dope line in a row which you really needed because before that i thought you'd have no way of winning, then when lay fear came out the gate with 3 quotes i thought forget it he's got it buttt he fell off after that. Guys try and be more consistent and work on your wording a lil bit more, y'all beasts tho

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Old 07-27-08, 06:56 PM   #10
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you been average, I still don't feel this whores worthy.
but he ALWAYS..
produces sick concepts..that he jus murders with whackness an poor wording.
Haha, not bad.

this faggot acts tough, an noone in his family is good.
an yeah he's a Fletcher,..his occupation usually has to do with him handling wood.
Eh, alright.

ya rusty n need to catch up..ya custom title won't be remembered good..
nicks always tryin to get up to date.....so why respect a penis that never could?
Hahahaha.

eager to go twenty..I got plenty that'll leave you scorching.
no need to Strech ya verse out - it'll be carried out on a Strecther with you shortly.
This was alright.

this fags the queerest, he knows the truth sucks..
cuz his idea of a Knapsack.. is gettin tired n restin his head on a dudes nuts.
Alright but coulda been worded better.

your no prize son, you'll be quick to die next..
cuz Nick'el assume he's worth alott..an end up only amountin to five cents.
Naaaah.

style can't compete with mine, it'll be viewed as bias.
that verse would ONLY Pacify ..... was actually opposed to using violence.
I like this one.

I'm throwin punches..so how's it lookin then.
IF Nick stands up for his Rights..it'll jus be to get knocked down by my Hook again.
Not bad.

cartoons paint a picture..facts state you ain't nothin bitch.
I shoot for the stars - all three or four circlin ya head while recoverin from my fistt.
Alright but worded shitty.

thinkin your important..while I jus laugh he's shakin..
cuz yeah Nick IS a king..this isn't a battle I consider it an assassination.
Nah, crappy.

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^ ur fucking garbage son! But if ur gonna steal my style you hoe
at least keep it fresh n stop flippin wordplay I used OVER 2 years ago
Naaah.

ur nuthin but a fraud whore, now I put you up for the slaughter
a legend amongst his peers? & yet one push leaves him face down in the water
Ehhh, alright.

seriously bro, ur rep is a joke. u bring nuthin but losses where u from
& if u hit this site with some W’s.. it was followed by a .RAPVERSE.COM
Alright but coulda worded it better.

ur final against 2v was like a trip through the years, droppin lines in bunches
there was the 80’s vs. the 70’s, & then a trip to the 60’s to find lays punches
Alright, but again coulda been worded better.

plus, ya mom’s a fugly bitch.. if she was a whore she wudn’t make one cent
& YES! we know she’s on the game..
..coz her fat ass had to come as downloadable content
I thought this was stupid.

also, your girl tells me ur ass is straight pussy ‘n’ ur dick has zero clout
& you only stay hittin’ that ass at night until she fucking lays you out
Naaah.

nah, ure gay really..& never raisin ur game, so I’ll blaze ‘n’ rip
coz ur ass aint made a transition since ur boy tried to spice up ur relationship
Nah. But kinda made me smirk.

this guy’s secretly a scrawny nerd to, he ain’t ever set to maul
& if his skeletal frame was in the hood, he’s packin a scythe bringin death to all
Naaaaah.

^ never done drugs either, whilst me I pop the rare E’s
so tonight, if Lay picks E..
..its coz his skills are a myth & he likes to hang with fairies
Alright, but again... worded horribly.

now fuck predictions! everyone knows I’ll win coz I keep shit fresh ‘n’ recent
but I’m hopin you lay doubt this time coz at least he was halfway decent
Haha, alright.

This was a pretty close battle. Both verses were alright and you both had about the same amount of alright punches, but Lay's hit harder because he had pretty good wording on the majority of them. Nick, you had some decent concepts but the wording just threw off their direction. Lay, might wanna work on your consistency still. You got either really good lines, or really shitty ones. But, good battle guys, this could prolly go either way.

V/Lay.
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Old 07-27-08, 08:05 PM   #11
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I have a feeling right, I won't say what it is... but I am going to see if it plays itself out.
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Old 07-27-08, 08:38 PM   #12
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I've also got a feeling.
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Old 07-27-08, 08:40 PM   #13
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I've got a feeling, a feeling deep inside
Oh yeah, Oh yeah. (that's right.)
I've got a feeling, a feeling I can't hide
Oh no. no. Oh no! Oh no.
Yeah! Yeah! I've got a feeling. Yeah!
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Old 07-27-08, 08:59 PM   #14
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Yep, it played itself out.
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Old 07-27-08, 09:14 PM   #15
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What happened?
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