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Old 07-28-08, 01:22 PM   #1
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Flight (5) vs Wordz Ahgod (0)

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Flight vs Wordz Ahgod

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Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
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Old 07-28-08, 06:59 PM   #2
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chizzeck, 10.



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Old 07-29-08, 06:55 PM   #3
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son will not fucking show, last week he recieved a crushing blow
He should remain Flight, most females prefer it if he would just 'touch n go'
I dont feel like dropping coz he hasn't even checked
No homo, he gives me dome when I decapitate his head
This faggets hated in text I can tell by the way that he flexed
N' I aint talking muscles, I mean his butthole when his BF lays him in bed
battle me? Son aint even waisting his breath, Im breaking his neck
My balls r RVs pride n joy, his wife just likes the taste of respect
Power ranking flight?? yeah right, for that lay n I should fight...truithful
I'll post the outcome where everyone could see...Flights girl might come in useful

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10 quick no show lines
plus I might not have time later to drop soooo. g'luck if you do show man
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Old 07-30-08, 05:04 PM   #4
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ehh, i'll write something up quick
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Old 07-30-08, 05:22 PM   #5
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shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle
even with a no-show last week, we all know i'm going to take this dude
cause everyone wants to see me spit wordz... and bash, hack and break him too!
this kids a clown, he's so bad i could laugh until it hurts
cause the only way i say 'AHGod'... its after i read his shitty verse
i'll toss ya around, i'll give you a chance, just take it and stay down
so yeah, i'll put my handz up, right before i throw ya to the ground
over a year without texting... well, that just makes me laugh, queer
you said you would drop played... just lucky momma jokes weren't hot last year

and i'm out for another week
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Old 07-30-08, 06:42 PM   #6
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son will not fucking show, last week he recieved a crushing blow
He should remain Flight, most females prefer it if he would just 'touch n go'
The setup I felt was a little filler'ish and the punchline I just wasn't feeling. I thought the wording was a little basic and the multies thrown in didn't really have the desired effect.
I dont feel like dropping coz he hasn't even checked
No homo, he gives me dome when I decapitate his head
This was weak. The wording was borderline horrid and the punch was pretty played and too basic in general.
This faggets hated in text I can tell by the way that he flexed
N' I aint talking muscles, I mean his butthole when his BF lays him in bed
Nah son. You can't drop gay jokes unless you are bringing some nice wording or a tight flip on the shit. It can be done, trust. Just look at some of the veteran battlers in RBL dropping them fag jokes, but decent like.
battle me? Son aint even waisting his breath, Im breaking his neck
My balls r RVs pride n joy, his wife just likes the taste of respect
lol, ok I laughed at this. I thought the wording was moderate, the punch was a little corny, but it made me laugh so props.
Power ranking flight?? yeah right, for that lay n I should fight...truithful
I'll post the outcome where everyone could see...Flights girl might come in useful
HELL NO! Choppy flow, basic "your girl is fat" intended punch. That is basically what this bar came across as.


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shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle
Nah, not feeling this at all. I thought it was pretty childish like and didn't really read like a hard hitting punch.
even with a no-show last week, we all know i'm going to take this dude
cause everyone wants to see me spit wordz... and bash, hack and break him too!
I was pretty well known for bringing these types of punches into my LBL battles. I am a fan of them and this one was pretty good.
this kids a clown, he's so bad i could laugh until it hurts
cause the only way i say 'AHGod'... its after i read his shitty verse
nah, wording was off and the punch didn't really connect
i'll toss ya around, i'll give you a chance, just take it and stay down
so yeah, i'll put my handz up, right before i throw ya to the ground
again, not liking this.. the wording is too simple
over a year without texting... well, that just makes me laugh, queer
you said you would drop played... just lucky momma jokes weren't hot last year
could've been dope, but the wording threw it off again


Clearly, Wordz dropped a no-show verse. His mistake. Flight showed up and half-assed a lazy key to have just enough to win. Overall, I thought Wordz had a weak verse. He had nothing that was really great, but that one punch that made me laugh a moment. Flight had a better verse overall, but only by a margin. He did have that one punch that I myself am a fan of the type.. he worded and delivered it nice.

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Old 07-30-08, 07:13 PM   #7
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sorry, nick. like I said, it was a no show verse, he already posted and you already voted so I cant drop anything else, other then that I guess g'luck taco
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Old 07-30-08, 07:18 PM   #8
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^ Word. This is why you should always drop with the assumption that your opponent will show. Wise words to live by.
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Old 07-30-08, 07:25 PM   #9
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Yeah I mean I can't really do something about it, you thought he'd no show n posted a no show verse..then he posted a lazy verse jus enough to beat a no show one..so it wouldn be fair enough to let you write again..

but..I'll vote, I'm not really gonna break it down. I'll jus give a summary..well Wordz obviously figured Flight was no showing..which is bad to assume so early in the week..I mean you don't have to check until wednesday night utnil 12..an if you don't all that happens is you lose -2 votes..so its never smart to post a no show verse..jus for future reference...anyway wordz didn't try much..he did have that funny line the Pride n joy taste of respect line..that was nice..an flight had a few okayy lines..that took this one for him..

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Old 07-30-08, 09:35 PM   #10
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well Im in Japan right now and I dont really have access to a pc besides work so my time is currently a little limited but I'll put something worth reading next week.

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Old 07-31-08, 04:58 AM   #11
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shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle
^Alright.

even with a no-show last week, we all know i'm going to take this dude
cause everyone wants to see me spit wordz... and bash, hack and break him too!
^Decent.

this kids a clown, he's so bad i could laugh until it hurts
cause the only way i say 'AHGod'... its after i read his shitty verse
^Alright.

i'll toss ya around, i'll give you a chance, just take it and stay down
so yeah, i'll put my handz up, right before i throw ya to the ground
^Alright.

over a year without texting... well, that just makes me laugh, queer
you said you would drop played... just lucky momma jokes weren't hot last year
^Ehhh.


son will not fucking show, last week he recieved a crushing blow
He should remain Flight, most females prefer it if he would just 'touch n go'
^Ehhh.

I dont feel like dropping coz he hasn't even checked
No homo, he gives me dome when I decapitate his head
^Naaaah.

This faggets hated in text I can tell by the way that he flexed
N' I aint talking muscles, I mean his butthole when his BF lays him in bed
^Nah.

battle me? Son aint even waisting his breath, Im breaking his neck
My balls r RVs pride n joy, his wife just likes the taste of respect
^Naaaah.

Power ranking flight?? yeah right, for that lay n I should fight...truithful
I'll post the outcome where everyone could see...Flights girl might come in useful
^Ehhh.



I thought this was pretty one-sided. Flight was pretty consistent with his whole verse, not dropping any super dope punches, but dropped quite a few decent ones. Wordz is still rusty, alot of the concepts he used are pretty old and played and verrrrry simple. Flight took this easy, I think.

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Old 07-31-08, 05:49 AM   #12
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Wordz AhGod
son will not fucking show, last week he recieved a crushing blow
He should remain Flight, most females prefer it if he would just 'touch n go'
descent, but he showed so the personal has little credibility

I dont feel like dropping coz he hasn't even checked
No homo, he gives me dome when I decapitate his head
barely descent

This faggets hated in text I can tell by the way that he flexed
N' I aint talking muscles, I mean his butthole when his BF lays him in bed
descent

battle me? Son aint even waisting his breath, Im breaking his neck
My balls r RVs pride n joy, his wife just likes the taste of respect
dope

Power ranking flight?? yeah right, for that lay n I should fight...truithful
I'll post the outcome where everyone could see...Flights girl might come in useful
descent

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shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle
nice

even with a no-show last week, we all know i'm going to take this dude
cause everyone wants to see me spit wordz... and bash, hack and break him too!
nice

this kids a clown, he's so bad i could laugh until it hurts
cause the only way i say 'AHGod'... its after i read his shitty verse
dope

i'll toss ya around, i'll give you a chance, just take it and stay down
so yeah, i'll put my handz up, right before i throw ya to the ground
descent

over a year without texting... well, that just makes me laugh, queer
you said you would drop played... just lucky momma jokes weren't hot last year
descent



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In this battle, I believe that Flight had the stronger and more creative disses to earn him a win.


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Old 07-31-08, 07:27 AM   #13
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don't worry, i tried my darndest.
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Old 08-01-08, 11:27 PM   #14
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El Taco
shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle

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nothinn really

i kno he was expecting a no show and when he did show it was barely enought to pull out a victory

VOTE FLIGHT
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Old 08-03-08, 11:33 AM   #15
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shit, you couldn't build a better verse? i cut your chances with a sawzall
if i wanted to see wordz all thrown around randomly, fuck i'll go play boggle

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nothinn really

i kno he was expecting a no show and when he did show it was barely enought to pull out a victory

VOTE FLIGHT
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