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Old 07-28-08, 01:21 PM   #1
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Intangible (5) vs LPMNDCTE (4)

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Intangible vs LPMNDCTE

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- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
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Old 07-28-08, 04:10 PM   #2
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checkin in...................................
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Old 07-28-08, 04:52 PM   #3
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lmfao check....
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Old 07-28-08, 06:42 PM   #4
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He's drunk, so watch the whiskey erupt, as I slap the shit outta this sissy mutt
This bitch been InTan so long I swear this dude has gotta be as crispy as fuck
& I don’t care bout the point totals, best believe that I ‘ve desecrated the best
Cuz if your coming with goodwill, It’ll be followed by a premeditated death
You just cant fuck wit me in text, Lay..please put Intangible back on the benches
dam right your writings aren’t realized, they’re defined by ur own wak definitions
I butcher fakes like you, n eat em…guess I gotta get back to my rapture ways
See I could definitely devour Tangi…. But that fruit leave a very nasty aftertaste
Ugly fuck..your marked as a loss…as for the title, you not even giving a chase
Its hard to hide the obvious when its written all over your face
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Old 08-01-08, 10:40 PM   #5
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Verses due by Saturday Midnight.
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Old 08-02-08, 11:08 PM   #6
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i came from a visit from my g fathers if u wanna dq me go ahead if not ill drop
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Old 08-02-08, 11:17 PM   #7
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go ahead an drop your verse.
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Old 08-03-08, 12:03 AM   #8
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ya lose'n streak? of course it begins! punches lunge-in ya face, distort'n ya chin!
i'm straight-this-herb's-gay...it's like you "rape-ya-wordplays" by the way ya "force'n 'em in
get scarred nearly face'n-death, you proved ya place-in-text, so wack I should slap you silly
bad word'n...shitty flow...like "broke grocery scanners", it's "hard to read ya bars clearly
‘Weak jabs’ with simple plights…so fuck what this bimbo types..
The only time his ‘PUNCHES CONNECT’…is ‘downloading Kimbo fights’!
What did this bitch expect?!...he's never ripped the vets, or even spits correct...
You'll miss respect...Cuz 'you logging off RV's', is the only way L Dis(s)-Connect'!
Your bars are never felt whore!!!....I’ll leave his health tore, and make his self sore…
Watch him melt more…His whole ‘career is a waste/waist’, so that’s the only thing he'd ‘need a belt for’!!
Flow and go savage....he's new to rv!, a don't know with no status,
I blow and show ravaged...cuz only time you 'Met-A-Fo(u)r', it was a 'Chick-Below-Average'!,
He stalls on the text...for votes?, he calls on the vets...
Falls on his set...L's a 'bad soccer goalie', he only 'has balls on the net',
He's a 'cartoon', only a 'drawn spawn'...this battle is on!.
He's long gone...The 'Iraq' of our Rap'Verse', L's always getting 'bombed on'!...
He's new to the game...but acts of invincible novice...
Plus he 'explains punches'....like 'sitting in a principal office'..
LPMNDCTE, I don't have respect, I kno why he made that name up?! so I can murder every letter in the alphabet
After the beef done he goin to thing I'm spelling Iverson B/c I'll leave this kid hooked up to an IV in the ER SON
Like A Game Of Advanced Tetris Your Punches Dont Fit Bud, Your A Faggot Dancing In Thongs & You Think Your A Legit Stud? Pfft! Only Time "We'll See This Pussy In The Polls/Poles" It Was Working Full time In A Strip Club'....
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Old 08-03-08, 09:04 AM   #9
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I'm not going to search through your verse for anymore bitten shit. But check it out.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=124384

Word for word. Later, bro.
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Old 08-03-08, 09:17 AM   #10
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Hahaha, what a fucking loser.

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Old 08-03-08, 09:36 AM   #11
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im rican theoryz rolf cant use my old shit?
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Old 08-03-08, 09:37 AM   #12
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my gfather is in the hostiptal and i needed to put something together quick i had no time so i used one of my old lines

if u want i can go on rican theoryz and post fuckin noobs
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Old 08-03-08, 09:59 AM   #13
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It's funny because you bit Catastrophe1.

Fucking loser.
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Old 08-03-08, 09:59 AM   #14
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Lmao, you bit from Catastrophe1. Not Rican Theoryz... Lmao.
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Old 08-03-08, 10:06 AM   #15
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hhhhhhmmm...thats disapointing.

He's drunk, so watch the whiskey erupt, as I slap the shit outta this sissy mutt
This bitch been InTan so long I swear this dude has gotta be as crispy as fuck
lol..
& I don’t care bout the point totals, best believe that I ‘ve desecrated the best
Cuz if your coming with goodwill, It’ll be followed by a premeditated death
ha solid.
You just cant fuck wit me in text, Lay..please put Intangible back on the benches
dam right your writings aren’t realized, they’re defined by ur own wak definitions
k
I butcher fakes like you, n eat em…guess I gotta get back to my rapture ways
See I could definitely devour Tangi…. But that fruit leave a very nasty aftertaste
na..
Ugly fuck..your marked as a loss…as for the title, you not even giving a chase
Its hard to hide the obvious when its written all over your face
k..kinda weak closer.

overall a good verse from LP..it woulda won either way. Good shit, LP.

v/LP by default.
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