Battle Rules:

16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No Gayness

3-0 = Technical Knockout

^ that's coz chances are we'll be waiting 20 years for it to go the full distance, lol.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-16-09 at 09:41 AM

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YouAndWhatArmy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-09 09:41 AM.

NoCkTerNuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-14-09 04:03 PM.

I know you’re an alias, you fake, what name you tryin to preserve?
like Red Eye Express this kid trying to pose as a HERB. (1)
You battled before, I can tell, but your rhymes are wreckin
Changin names runnin from your past like witness protection
I read your posts everyone just wants to degrade you
Then again you probly changed you name cuz everyone hates you
So you want to be an herb, getting new names like loaners
that’s what you want, I’ll “smoke this herb” call me a stoner
I don’t know much about your past but I do know your fate
I ask Tony about your rhymes he said “they’re GRRRRRRATE” (2)
I’m like Nero you won’t want to cross my path (3)
3 votes for me none for you, percentage? I’ll do the math
lemme break it down I get all the votes and you get none
what’s left from my 100% that you’re getting son? (4)
I declare war… you ask me “you and what army?”
I’ll do you in like king…
…solo, 3-0 you won’t harm me (5)

(1) Red Eye Express is a UK marijuana magazine (or so I’ve heard)
(2) Tony the Tiger; Grate: noun- a harsh rasping sound
(3) Emperor Nero of Rome used to burn people on crosses to light the paths of his Gardens.
(4) 80% of the planets population = HAPPY because they have visited the basement.

The other 10% who haven't visited the basement = Emo fags. So no wonder they are all so suicidally depressed.
(5) King solo KO’d him, he asks me and what army... i do it solo

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NoCkTerNul VS. Da Problem Child

dang it... number 4 was supposed to be a quote... 80%-10%... ehhh! good battle man... alright let's get some votes!!

King Solo is Youandwhatarmy....dumb ass .

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are you serious!? damn it! read that wrong battle wrong... oh well. Why didn't you just vote and say that?

Yeah dude, I was in that league as two names.. got matched against myself. I only battle on the YouAndWhatArmy account now because for some reason battling has been disabled on this account. Good shit though.

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LOL! that's funny... dang I guess my question was answered. yea when i saw that battle i was like, this dude isn't new. who is he? haha. alright let's get some votes!

Wait so is TKO first to 3 or it has to be 3-0? cuz that's the rule already right? they should change it to first to 3. everyone's battle is stuck at like 1-3.

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

VERY close battle but he won this battle with better punches and and personal

YAWA was good too, one of the better starters on this site but still needs to work on some things

big upz to both

V/NOK


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- A technical knockout rule only applies to a 3-0 outcome. If a battle is at 2-1 and then hits 3-1, it stays open until someone gets 5 votes... or until it goes through 21 days of an inactive period. If that happens, you can get it closed by an administrator.

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Voted For: YouAndWhatArmy

Flow: tie
Multis: didn't see none
Punches: army
Meta's: army
Concepts: army
Opener: knock
Closure: army
Personal: knock
Enjoyment: army
Overal: army

To much to do on my g1 phone so I broke it down like this I will brake it down more if need it.

Knock.
You had some good bars and then you had some super weak bars such as you ask tony about he's rhymes and he said therrr ggggggrrrrrrate WTF? So you gave him a complament? That was just weak as hell and some concept could of been better if you fix your wording but this bar I thought was good was the witness protection bar and your last bar but you need more then that to win in this case.

Army
Better all around verse with better punches look more focus and connect better with fresher concept and delievery some parts of your verse did slack but all around pretty good.

Vote army

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