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10-03-09, 08:51 PM | #1 | ||||
Maggot
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Jmedz-Introstyle ft. its cj
IP: 0ABC 464B
( Its CJ )
All i need is time...time time time all day everyday park on my grind try to make my money thats all thats on my mind bunch of fucking distractions on the sides on my way up bottom to the sides slippn in passed them bottle bitches up serve them then trash them sins i commit my pleas for faith jmedz our flows are chased my mind is crazy lost and cant be traced google it search it no results found try to bite my shit sniff it like a hound down on the ground holding up my crown im king of the world silence bitch dont make a sound your ears are bleeding, my words shoot rounds down in the ground with a casket round it eh hah yo jmedz uh huh yo ima murder this beat put it in the ground WOW understanding me is like mass murdering a town how? what who where and when all these questions asked again they all praise me the hip hop world always trying to commit my sins But ima beat killer that is what i do i take two knock a fucking birdie but this beat is what i gave to you it sticks like glue in your mind all the time inside hah yes higher then the rest son they always try to get with C because jmedz on this fucking beat i kill them like i kill them got this uzi looking like swiss cheese ....and more i just dont feel like typing it.
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10-03-09, 08:55 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 44A4 CBC6
This Was Good Shit Here If It Was An Audio Piece, Wasn't Really Feeling It As Text Cause The Easy Vocab And Structure And Shit...I Think You Should Drop It In Audio It'll Be Better Bro....For Sure
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10-03-09, 09:17 PM | #3 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 651E B56A
2 links or fuck off!!!!!
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10-03-09, 10:33 PM | #4 | ||||
Maggot
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IP: 3240 794D
ok thanks ill put a link up this was freestyled too we should be re recording it but who knows. quality of my mic is horrible his is nice.
http://www.myspace.com/jmedz93 - There you go.quality of my mic is horrible his is nice. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248535 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248497
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Rip H.P. and A.M.H. Rep The Pep Rap clicks online? Wackkk. -The B.E.S.T. Crew? haha ya'll niggas on some eli porter shit. Last edited by Its CJ : 10-03-09 at 10:56 PM. |
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10-03-09, 11:05 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 44A4 CBC6
Yea I Could Hear You Guys But Barely...One Thing I Did Notice Is That Some Of The Flow Was Off Beat For Both Of You Like You Tried Forcing The Flow To The Beat...Didn't Work Out To Good The Beat Was Good Though Bro...But Maybe Try Fixing Some Parts To Make The Flow Fluent....
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10-04-09, 12:32 AM | #6 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 651E B56A
2 links to other peoples open mics you have left feedback on, not two links to your other open mics.
why the fuck do I bother with the brainless? |
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10-04-09, 12:35 AM | #7 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 651E B56A
infact, fuck it, this is weak and doesnt even deserve to be open. We dont want your lame freestyles that you for whatever reason, decided to post as a text open mic. we want dope, thought out text peices. Artisticly worded and written.
Come back when your ready to drop something worth reading. |
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