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Old 04-08-03, 06:18 PM   #1
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W2 DIZZY D [0-0] VS Crook Ed [0-0]

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Old 04-08-03, 07:40 PM   #2
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Check, Im doin 10 bars since Im guessin this man'll no show..
 
Old 04-09-03, 09:59 AM   #3
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LOL, why you think i wont show??? Checkin in. I never miss a battle esspecially not one in a league or tourney.
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Old 04-09-03, 07:31 PM   #4
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Yo, lol...Sorry, thought you'd no show cuz Ive never heard of you, thought you were a newb..

Ayo-
Dam Right hes Dizzy D, Knockin em 360 degrees
Sure you'll beat me, right after Amish people start usin electricity
And Look! His record in the Past is accurate up to date
Well lemme give you a glimpse of the future.. can you say, 64 and 8?
Why do you state that wack shit in ya sig..must be a herb fa real
Im sure KING O and FireSquadGangsta are extremely ill
And you run with a mafia man they musta made a mistake
Elmira?! Who would roll with D, he made a whole city Bitch Made
And you claim you make assasinations toward American cultured Races
And yet your a white boy, Before I kill you...you gunna make a suicidal escape?
Fuck this ape, copy and paste his verse that took hours of time
Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines
And to the herbs on this site, Please dont follow this Wack Bitch
I mean he even reps a Fuckin crew that aint even Established

lol...

Add em up...Post when you can... you'll die when you do..

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Old 04-10-03, 12:41 AM   #5
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LMAO. Wow you should of studied on me. I heard you was an ok emcee. You really should of came harder. Be up in a little bit.
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Old 04-10-03, 02:12 AM   #6
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Ayo....

Contradiction to your afflction proves you wrongly predicted, heavily addicted to your self esteem leaves you intensely restricted//1
Inflicted from your whole nervous system leaves you blinded from wisdom, confining your bodily functions prism making you suffer in great cataclysm//2
Great anguishing torture, throwing punches in shells out of a mortar, making your head crooked with third degree burns like an african scorture//3
Eternal blood dripping and organs ripping is all thats left of tha corpse, eclipsed bandages manages to slow the process but it still vastly absorbs//4
Swelling fails to cease, heavy pressured under spot light with no release, darkness over~comes.....your survived by your DNA on tha soaking sheets, rest in peace//5

5 bars equal to 10 lines so same as he did.
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Old 04-10-03, 12:56 PM   #7
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Vote Crook Ed

He actually attempted some punches.. Some were nice

Dizzy-D no disrespect or anything but you basically dropped on Open Mic... Its good to use volcab but not if it doesnt say anything

Ed
Fuck this ape, copy and paste his verse that took hours of time
Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines
And to the herbs on this site, Please dont follow this Wack Bitch
I mean he even reps a Fuckin crew that aint even Established
 
Old 04-10-03, 04:41 PM   #8
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Dizzy-D no disrespect or anything but you basically dropped on Open Mic... Its good to use volcab but not if it doesnt say anything

Yup......

Crook Had Some Punches But None Really That Caught My Eye...
But HE Did Have Punches....

My Vote Rook

Retun the Favor....
Vote On My Battle Against .Sand.
Peace
 
Old 04-10-03, 05:40 PM   #9
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same views as above
dizzy what u playin at??seen u throw punches but u didnt have any man...
crooked won this purely cos he had some

Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines

liked the play on russian there was good
didnt have any oustanding punches or anything but at least u had some Dizzy d that was good stuff but not in battle
 
Old 04-10-03, 05:58 PM   #10
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WTF? dizzy what was u thinking, lemme let u in on a little secret, PUNCHES WIN BATTLES not hella word play and nice vocab
but if this was in open mic i'd give u two thumbs up lol
u lost, u had no punches Crook ed won becuz he had punches
nice verse tho dizzy, dat was sum good shit homie

vote crook ed, his opener was dope , it made me laugh
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Old 04-10-03, 05:59 PM   #11
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lol.. I didnt try to hard... Good battle Dizzy..
 
Old 04-10-03, 08:19 PM   #12
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mane i didnt try lol. I would of ripped you but i made a bet that i could rip your wack ass verse with out any punches. looks like i fuckin lost 5 dollars. But yea i figured i lost and if any you people knew what those words meant you would see that my shit was intense and ripped him in everythang except punches and personals. But i guess good job even tho that was a wack ass verse you had lol.
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Old 04-10-03, 08:56 PM   #13
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Think what ya want altho your opinion doesnt count, I dont expect herbs to understand my ish...But anywho, I win!

Good luck to you in up coming rounds... And if we battle again Ill make sure to rip worse..

LMAO, claimin it was a bet.. what a cool guy...

Can you say.... Battle??
 
Old 04-10-03, 09:24 PM   #14
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well there seems to be quite a debate over who won this battle. well here's a crazy thing i learned on other sites it's called explaining your vote i'ma try it like this

fav. lines(pick a punch from each guy)

crook-"Dam Right hes Dizzy D, Knockin em 360 degrees" great way to open a battle nice and direct punch

dizzy-"Great anguishing torture, throwing punches in shells out of a mortar, making your head crooked with third degree burns like an african scorture//" not much of a punch but the multis used my lord!

breakdown of rest of match

flow- crook ed gets this he's was just there and easier to find not that dizzy wasn't good just you know

punches- close here outside of the opener crook didn't have much i'd have to say it's a tie

mutlis- dizzy every line had something rhyming and it was alot of high sylable stuff too not rhyming bat with cat or nothing dizzy gets this

volcab- you know i gotta give this to dizzy with all of those multis and big words

overall- dizzy d took this bout the only thing that really hurt him was crook's opening line aside from that dizzy had it the whole way through
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Old 04-10-03, 11:45 PM   #15
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I beg to differ . . .



DIzy didnt have any punches . . . punches and wordplay wins battles . . . Crrok had some, D had none . . . Crook wINS . . .


The only thing DIzzy got Crrok on was a nice flow, but I wasnt feelin all the big words tho, it makes ur style seem artificial, and it just looks like ur tryin to hard . . .


GOOD battlE GentLemen . . .


Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines

best line of battle^^^

everything else was . . . blah . . .

Eternal blood dripping and organs ripping is all thats left of tha corpse, eclipsed bandages manages to slow the process but it still vastly absorbs//4

worst line of battle^^^
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