WELL

we can make it 15 -20 max.
3=ko, 5=win
bullshit bullshit

i'll chew u up and spit u out like tobacco,
coz ur a fuckin pedo just like wacko jacko/
i already kno dat u cant contest,
shit i may aswell give my mum a test,
ur a fuckin homo who wears a tank top vest,
i bet ur into all this family incest/
so wot u got 2 compare 2 me,
coz by now u kno i'm a lyrical "G",
i'm the 1 that holds the key,
2 unlock the winners trophy/
but fuck it i'm tired and still ripped u 2 pieces,
y dont u go pick up and eat sum dog faeces/
but i aint got beef wit u,
u just aint got a clue,
r my rhymes makin u blue?/
r my rhymes just makin u sick
cant u take it u prick,
i'll fuckin cut off ur dick, and put it on display 4 sum chick,
she'll b laughin at ur girth,
sayin "werent it that size at birth?"

aight check my shit

ya ta "DON" of romeo and juliet/no matter ya beat ya still aint cool yet
ya resite poetry for the one special girl/while i mack more than one-my horizin is plural --2

I'll start by braggin on myself and me/ta battle me ya shouldve paid a fee
my words are colonic/im wordz zo fast they call me zonic
my words blow atomicly/while theze niggaz role wit glee
relize im pure platnum/while ya just smaked dumb --6

im tha ace of spades/so as ya confidence fades
relize ya no joker/we playin poker
ya play by my rules/so as ya in a coma and ya mouth drools
understand my words on tha level of a college professa/so take ya best beat of ya dressa --10

ya cant beat my freestyle wit a stick/my vocal to quick
im so "ill" niggaz proclaim im sick/tick tick tick.....
ya wordz aint that slick/only reason ya throat gurgles is from dick
--13

ya dick so little and lackin/stuffin wit socks is tha only way ya look like ya packin
so as ya understan my punch on ya prick/relize ya just got stowed by a white "HICK" --15

o-oo i still got five lines lef/ill cook up somein so hot im tha new chef
smake ya in tha face wit a pan/only like a real "G" can
from rapbattle ya name will be bann-ned/ya azz just got canned
and it looks like ya like the poundin/the way im soundin
while ya caught unprepared like mike tyson against lewis/with tha end of my beat yall be left clue-less --20

uppin-damn that niggaz freestlyle aint that long!!!

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

aight i liked both verses but u did come up a bit short don that was a killer last line i luved that shit but i have to give it to chronic just held out for length and the flow was better,peace dawgs

chronicpeddler no doubt gets the vote....uppin for votes wit mindtheory hit it up

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Blessed wit Skillz

thx, that last line was dope. That last line

vote- cronic he staright got it he had better flow and better rhymes on this one battle goes to him...1

ps- can yall vote on ma battle wit lilbrick..1

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