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05-01-03, 05:51 PM | #1 | |||
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29 Phrantik [0-1] vs. 28 Evolve [0-1] No Show Match.
IP: B3AA 3CFC
Check In By.... Friday
Post By.... Sunday Vote By....Tuesday Topic Breaking the ice.
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05-01-03, 11:28 PM | #2 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
done.
sorry about last week. family emergency.
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05-02-03, 09:05 AM | #3 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
Im in. Was mad busy. Sorry.
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05-02-03, 09:33 AM | #4 | |||||||
one wink
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IP: B691 B3C4
I trust both of you,
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05-02-03, 10:48 AM | #5 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
im gonna be busy today and i dont really come on on the weekends... so i keyed this real quick so i didnt no show... THANKS SANDS
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- the phone rings.. i answer.. its her .. i say: "I cant fucking believe you would do this to me. I gave you everything & this is how you repay me. What makes you think i ever want too see you again. I hope you die!!" .. heart once bold is now closed and cold skin meant to touch is now too rough to hold love's not for sale, well thats tuff.. its sold didnt mean to bail, but my trust is old sick of your shit, crapped out w/ the dice you rolled story untold, bitch thats life.. now im telling it whats his name?? you know.. shit, i heard you yelling it can imagine how many times.. fuck, you should be spelling it but thats irrelevent, neither here nor there because just like life, love isn't fair what?? you wanna talk.. whore, dont you dare!! come at me with that bullshit, dont even pull it love came fast, but right now.. it will come quicker w/ a bullet your full of it, i gave you 5 years of my heart little did i know it would take 5 years for you to tear it apart I CANT BELIEVE IM A MARK, a bullseye bombarded with darts **tempature rises as thoughts of murder conceptualizes** me--aight, i'll bite.. when would you like to meet?? her--by the lake, tonight.. but only if you let me speak me--ok, alright.. but you have to promise to keep this discreet is this bitch crazy, wants to meet .. she just played me i dont even wanna live!! and she wants to sarinade me!?!? ive heard that song before... AHHH.. SO FUCKING ANGRY!! i cant take this shit, this is it.. she's done, finish it gonna have to get my point across, take a stab at this shit so as i grabbed this bitch & looked in her eyes one last time held her mouth as she cried each tear represented each one of her lies each moan equaled every guy she boned and let inside with only rage on my mind, i let the blade rise said bye, then it started to sliddddeeeee...... *****NEWS FLASH****NEWS FLASH*****NEWS FLASH**** January, 27 2003 Authorities in New Jersey say they have recovered the body of a girl who was reported missing in the beggining of December. She was found in upper New Jersey at Pompton Lakes. She was descovered early this morning by some campers in the area. She was spotted in the lake, but authorities said it took some time to get her out because the lake had Frozen Over.... and to get her out they had to ............. BREAK THE ICE!!!!!! |
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05-02-03, 11:03 AM | #6 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7CF8 7E08
^ Dope Kid!
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05-02-03, 03:59 PM | #7 | |||
Sand
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IP: F059 FBD4
AWWW SHIT!!!!
MAD DOPE! lets see what tik comes with...
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05-03-03, 08:08 PM | #8 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: 5153 3B92
waiting for phrantik
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05-04-03, 09:03 PM | #9 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
..Break the Ice..
BadNews I’m a doctor on my break reading a book about fears When I take time to think about mine over the years I keep thinking of diagnosin’ sluts, whores and queers I cant tell ‘em they got aids cause I fear the tears… Its about 4 pm its getting late One last patient left on my plate A young woman about 24 Come in and locks the door He eyes are dark, her face pale And she cant stand up without holding the rail Sick, and weak what does she want from me “Doctor, please help me.. I think I got HIV” Shit! Oh no! Worst dreams come true.. Think.. think… what the fuck can I do? “Darling sit down, let me do a blood test” Try to remain calm… ill do my best Checkin’ DNA, lets see what I’ll find HIV positive horrid thought run in my mind She just sits there, numb, nothing to do Just hopin for the best, what else can she do I ask about her sex life as I recheck the door “Doctor, I should have told you… I’m a Main street whore” How’m I gonna tell her… I gotta be nice… “Excuse me, im sorry, but I gotta break the ice” You have HIV, I don’t know what to say But im glad you came to see me right away I urge you not to have sex; don’t spread the disease I hope you make the right decision, don’t fuck.. please!! “I’m Poor” she screamed, as the world echoed a tear She started crying, even before I said she had less than a year “Shhhh… don’t cry..” try to calm her down then she see’s the medical report and shes even more let down “I’m going to die” she yelled as she reached for her pocket she pulled out a knife attached to a locket Cut her wrists and ran away from me Ran down the hallway as her soul was set free The locket opened and it showed a little boy About 4 or 5 huggin a stuffed toy She had a child, no way he can be alone So again bad news, he’s in a foster home A week passes and I go home at 5 And they know I got news, they see it in my eyes I tell ‘em again I gotta break the ice And again, I have to pay a terrible price The blood from her wrists dripped into a cut Into my veins, the disease of a slut I’ve been diagnosed with HIV And this time my worst fears are only about me…
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Last edited by Phrantik : 05-04-03 at 09:45 PM. |
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05-04-03, 09:26 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
ill vote when its done^
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05-04-03, 10:18 PM | #11 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
-up-
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05-05-03, 12:44 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
damn... this was a close ass match but I have to give it to Phrantik... he fuckin came ill with the suspension and everything. Damn good battle. Good job Tik and evolve
Vote - Tik pz |
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05-05-03, 01:54 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
i'm goin with Evolve on this one
but it was a close call.......both had nice flow, both had good ideas and developed the verses......liked the twists at the end too just liked Evolves better and the way he told the story nice work from both and please vote on mine with dirtboy cos its gettin slept on |
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05-05-03, 05:59 PM | #14 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
1 - 1
u p p i n
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05-06-03, 02:05 AM | #15 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
up... please vote~
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