here you go bitch its time for me to so u wut a VET does t a little BITCH like you.....here r the rules 5-10 bars 10 max
(2 lines = 1 bar).....check in and bothverses duesomtime tmorrow.....i kno ur probably sleepin wit ur mom by now...pussy ass here we go 1

im festin your brain, testin, more as im dressin/
relaxin and tossin the hex threw your body, kill you while your restin/

cause to me its like you "lost your drive" or "PARKED IT"/
like you've gone stupid and it "cost your team" when you lost ya "sting" like CHARLOTTE/

your FORBIDDEN VERSES are full of worthless shiit like the insides of WOMEN'S PURSES/
i got your "back slashed" more than the ENDS OF VERSES/

messin, internal organs so drastic youll be havin your own ass kicked/
fire brew, from a storm that has decapitation for main assets/

more mediphorical rage and mayhem caused by atmospheric preasure/
I'll have doc gay give u a histarectimy, yah ring a bell ANAL PLEASURE/

i know your rattled you don't wanna battle your the war protester who starts the MARCHES/
your blood "marks-the-scene" so much your mom got ya carpet steamed after they removed your CARCUS/

you think you EXCITE MICS nah you're like chedda bob and i'ma teach ya to WRITE RHYMES/
cause i push flow like PIPE LINES and "punch crooks" like i FIGHT CRIME/

omg buddy dont even respond, this dude is killa. r u fucking stupid why would you even battle him???

Dawg you think you hard.
Motha fucka i'm bout ta leave ya bitch ass scard.

You like Ja rule, so emotional Tryin ta make a diss,
But every fuckin punch ya throw they are a miss!

You ain't got no skills,
You like a fish, I'll cut off yo fuckin gills!

You 20-3, ya bout ta be 20-4, Fuckin whore,
Battlin me i'll fuck up ya whole world!

Most say opposites attract,
But for you, ya like ta get dick smacked!

Dawg you think you hard still,
What the fuck, i'm light weight and you juss got killed.

Juss like last night when i was wit yo grl,
I left her in thrills.

Dawg you so poor,
You can't even afford Viagra Pills.

Dawg you don't wanna battle me,
I'll leave ya shook, All u can do is stand there and look.

No one can believe it,
You juss got beatin by a fuckin Rook!

X ecution,
I ain't mean ta piss ya off,
I juss wanna battle da best.
Hope ya understand dawg.
I juss doin what i gotta do!

wtf is with all the exclamation points and the constant use of the word "dawg"?
anyways.....rap you ripped him. you showed just what a rookie can do.
































sike. you were wack as fuck and got your ass handed to you.

vote=x ecution

Who says rookies can rap.
Ya'll come on we need votes up in here.
irrelivance, vote poll!
Yo i appreciate it if ya'll would vote for me tho!
Even tho i'm a rook,
I wanna see what this dude say after i leave him shook!

haha x ecutoin deffinately took it, there is no way you had a chance, whoever gave you that vote must be outta his fuckin mind, not to be rude but your rhymes coulda been made by a kid in grade school, e ectuion had TREMENDOUS wordplay,
vote=e ecution

yo kerrdezzy,
you say "your rhymes coulda been made by a kid in grade school", but check it out I AM!
I'm 14!
but mean.
I taught yo grl what Four Play really mean!

Dawg you fucin suck dawg dawg dawg REMIND YOU OF ANYONE?? O WAI DAWG DONT MAKE MY POOR AS TAKE UR GILLS !!!

Yo, Rap...

You got some nice spit...
But it didn't come close to X Ecution...

Not even in the same ballpark.
Barely the same fuckin sport...

X Ecution for the vote.

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well for 14 its not bad but x killed you, he ripped off your dick and handed it to your 14 yearold ass

thaNks for all the votes people........but can yall please vote.......................thanks alot for the 2 votes already im lookn for the KO so lets get me some more votes please so i can put this bitch ass rook out......and by the way m 14 too and u just sck no offense but u really need to step up wit ya shyt 1

i thought X Excution took this with ease, though im not hating on rap, you tried but the best way to learn is battle top heads, but battle weaker oponents thats your better chance at the moment, your not on X's level just yet but if you continue to rpove yourself you might have a chance in the future.


good battle people Vote : X Excution.

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yo well spat x he did'nt come close to you
aiyo check my shit against him
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3278#post413278