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05-10-03, 06:21 AM | #1 | ||
BANNED - Pink Slipped
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First Rap Diss... help please
IP:
i wrote a dis to all the wanna-bes out there. any advice or feedback on it?
Ok you 8 mile eminem fan wanna-be-MC's// its time you see me then turn green-wid-envy// at me, the L-A-B R-A-T MC with high dignity// i kickin, splitin-and-shittin// at yo chickens-with-mittens// Drop a real verse, instead of posin// because hip-hop-pop is your chosin// you's are all shit and shat// couldnt rhyme fat-cat-with-a-hat-sat-on-a-mat// together in a line, the lesson is rap dont want teeny's in its youth// so sit back down in kindy class and read up on your Dr. Zuess// you teeny-boppa, no clue of big-poppa// listen to this oz-hip-hoppa// no cuss words in these dissin ties// cause little skill requierd to make you french fries// burned up, so shut up// regroup and hug up// i dont need to be a magical mystikal mage// to call you up and embarress you on theatrical stage// so sit behind you keyboard and write or type// use your school friends for lines and at night-come-and-fight// before you diss at the lab rat firstly check youself// cause those rhymes weaker than an anarexic's health// |
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