the fag fucked up the first posts so im a post his verse my verse n that previous

thred...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46479

was there previous one

HERES HIS VERSE...As IN JSINZ FIRSt

Lets Start wit some HEAT...

Nice, who every lied 2 u musta really had u gased
Cause ur words dont school me like deaf kids in lecture class

Aiyo...


U lack lines in crunch time, so im bruising this fuck
And like armless hide-n-seek players ur loosing ur touch
Commence 2 cut this wack fuck til the blade gets dull
Share ur open thoughts, after ive slayed ur skull
Brace 4 words, my verbs blaze 2 prey on herbs
Beef wit me, like X-rays u wont display the nerve(s)
I stay superb, my havoc is far more than hell on earth
This prodigy of rhymes, been bringing hell since birth
So Kass’s done, cause my heats song 4rm big guns
Landing heavy on tracks like tread-mill sweat 4rm big pun
Ur peak sums where my potential starts 4rm, so dont post
Ur styles like mail-men on holidays, so i know u wont post
Fuck hopes, i killed those 8 lines back, thats y i doubt u
Silly wack...my teddy rucspen spits about the same as u
And thats lame dude, u’ll never be able 2 with stand plots
I’ll beat ur head on the monkey-bars, and drown u in the sand box
stand not, the pressure’ll make ur head knot, my scripture r sick
U lose bitch, but like blind photographers, I bet u didnt picture this...

ITE HERES MY VERSE_KILLAH KASSIUS

You Be Spittin Old Shit, N Babblin, Like A Senior Citizen With No Teeth,
Spittin Siemen From Dick, Im Merk Ya ~Jason~ Like Its Friday Da ~Thirtheenth~//
Jsin I don’t think Ya know Who Ya Facin, Yu Da Best Emcee When Ya Alone In Ya Basement,
But Here Ya Shits Old Like Mold With Shit Laced In-After I Merk You AI Cud Use A Piece Of Shit To Match You As A Replacement//
2months Ago Ya verses Were Pre Written N Numerously Rehersed,
The Way You Be Spittin Shit-Is Like A Toilet With The Function For Da Flush 2 Reverse//
~Deal Wit The Hand Ya Dealt With~, Im The~King~ N Ur A ~Jester~
Ya Crew Is Like Ya Punches They Are Artificial, Fake Punches Like A Wrestler//
I see Ya From ~Heaven~, But Ya A Different Type Of ~Angel~,
You Don’t Have Wingz, Ya Go Around Suckin N Havin Anal//(Tv Vamp show guy)
But I’ll Get My gat N Turn You ~Holy~-If Ya Wanna Be Down In Hell Deceist,
Ya Rhymes Be ~Fuckin~ No-one, If They Were Turned To Human Form They’d Be A ~Priest~//
This 11yr don’t Know How To Fuck He Got No Intelligence, So He Still ~Wanks~,
Just Like Good Rhymes To Him They Cant ~Cum~, He Just Shooting ~blanks~//
Im A Show This Newbie The Ropez, Tie em round his nek n Suspend Him From The Ceiling,
Its Like I Got No Nervz, Coz Nun Of Ya Punchez Im Feelin//

Killah Kassius took that one. Both were good but Killah Kassius was betta. Intelligent wordplay and better punchez. Two thumbz up.

Good stuff. Can c y ur 12-3

VOTE => KiLLaH Ka$$iu$ <=

hhaa thanks for da thumbs...wud ya mind pollin 2????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????

My Vote goes to Ka$$ cuz he had better punchlines n the other guys lines were too elementary

You Be Spittin Old Shit, N Babblin, Like A Senior Citizen With No Teeth,
Spittin Siemen From Dick, Im Merk Ya ~Jason~ Like Its Friday Da ~Thirtheenth~//

2months Ago Ya verses Were Pre Written N Numerously Rehersed,
The Way You Be Spittin Shit-Is Like A Toilet With The Function For Da Flush 2 Reverse//

These were my favorite lines

Please could you vote on my battle vs. Trix please

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KK... it'sexplained in this battles other thread.. basically he had better punches........................................... ...........

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Do i really gotta break it down


KK took this easily and other cat really didnt come with great punches

ya i like killa in this 1, just think he had harder punches n more,
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vote - jsin.. he threw soem ok punches.. i couldn't get myself into flowing killa's verse and the punches weren't as great as these people are making them out to be.. i'm here to help you all elevate.. first killa.. learn a better way to structure your line.. no need for these hyphens or whatever to show multis.. if people dont notice them when reading then they shouldn't be voting.. and make sure your punches are strong and stand out more.. jsin came mroe complex but with the simpler punches and i feel he took it.

peace out

yeh yeh watever..........i see thats been workin for u well "1-0" lol..this fag ruined my KO...balls........................................ .................................................. .........................