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checkin in
when is this due ??................................................ ................
.....or do we write them now??
holla

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i'm incinerating my opponent leave him more than a lilsmokey/
smash your teeth out and set u alight...even dental records wont help identify the debris/
this kid got the nerve to take me on so i'm smackin him senseless/
lil's a human vending machine the amount of wins he dispenses/
smokeys head is full of 'plain' cos it's like an 'air base'/
he went up for brain donations cos his verse is a pitiful charity case/
u don't get respect when your victory column reads like a New. B.Sucker.List (NBSL)
grabbing wins against weak ass rappers....until now.....cos ur dis-missed/
coming in 'first' my raps make you nervous and feel 'out of place'/
punches accelerate through your face and find a parking space/
i could be german the way i kill this jewish faggot with skill/
then leave his relations shocked like i sent them the gas bill/
u couldnt pick up your ability if your verses were phoned in/
this battles a wash out just set my machine on spin/
pussin out of spittin soon this punks verse will be late/
i tried to kidnap and gag the mothafucka but he even ducked-tape/
when i asked if stupidity runs in your genes.......smokey quoted me Levi's/
in bitch slapped i should have stated in the rules no herbs need apply/
comin with mongolised verses its enough to leave geniuses baffled/
tryin to be fashionable this cat came dressed to kill in a text battle


if you need any wordplay explained or anything else don't vote

aight here goes some comments on this....
dunnon if other cat is no showing or not but anyhow,....

here it is
strong opener however the next line just kinda fell apart

same way with much of this verse... mind you it was a good drop but you're capable of better
gotta work on tying things together with a consistent flow

when i asked if stupidity runs in your genes.......smokey quoted me Levi's/
in bitch slapped i should have stated in the rules no herbs need apply/

pry my fav. bar right there

like I said should be god enough for a win but not your best

this is essentially a freepost but listen up

lillsmokey I see you are in the forum so I'm guessing your dropping your verse here....

just wanted to let ya know my verse is up in rbbl

it'd be great if you could drop tongiht so we can get the voting started

imma strap ya ass to a rocket, so this boy can say he has been elevated /
split you down the middle like you was a dutch that needed to be seperated /
i bet the last time you got pussy was when you looked in the mirror and touched ya self /
punches i "E-Mail" to you give you physical damage to your health /
how ya boy gonna get on here just ta hype up an enternet crowd /
the only way you could be hot is if you lit a lilsmokey from a black & mild /
toke some weed den you choke, your a joke /
you should be rappin in a church- where you have the slightest bit of hope /
you get tossed around like a faggot whos dropped his soap on a rope /
enternet thug posten some racial slurs /
but after these toxic lyrics make you hypervenalate- i make ya burn /
cause the last thing you'll ever see is the shadows of a urn /................holla gotta go to night school
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yoooooo i cant poll but if i did my vote wud go fgee...both good lines i liked from fgee

smokeys head is full of 'plain' cos it's like an 'air base'/
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i tried to kidnap and gag the mothafucka but he even ducked-tape

this just made me laugh

you get tossed around like a faggot whos dropped his soap on a rope-but i liked it

uppin for dem votes
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yo...lilsmokey i kno i didnt poll but wud ya mind pollin in my battle in elite genst kid frozt

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lilsmokey post up ya verse against me ive posted mine.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................