Lets do this shit I drop first like 10 min, or quicker.

So once again I spit first, giving this kid the time he needs
But it’s all good after this verse he’ll be on his buckling knees
Praying for Forgiveness and beggin’ the lord please;

“Keep Ice Kareem away from me, he could cut me up with ease
It’s like he’s friggin hurricane and I’m just a weak sea-breeze”

Bring your sorry-ass rhymes, If you can even write’em yourself
Your generic style can find a spot next to ya career on the “no-talent” shelf

But I think I can turn things around for you maybe redirect your career
Now I know it’s a challenge finding a real job for fudge packin’ queer

But I here your mother’s hiring…

All these Independent women though, when will they accept their peers?
Your Mom for one, think’s she can suck 3 dicks and still work both cashiers…

Don’t even want a thanks man I’m really all about my peeps
Just remember Ice Kareem when your ringing in cash receipts,
To 48 year old men who just had your moms down on one knee
Hmmm… now that’s kinda sick, but atleast you aint no wack MC

Now I tried to tell y’all I had flow but it was falling on deaf ears
Try listening next time and I wont have ya walkin out in tears

You claim to be soldier, but you why fuckin lying
Your not 50 cent bro,
You’re a 13 year old punk from Wyoming named Brian

....your up herb

You think cause your black
That your shit won't be wack
Well you ryhmes are off track
I just laugh at you while I sit back
And count my chips
eating BBQ chips
drivin my whip
bitches all over my dick
To bad for you cause you don't get pussy
All the ho's be like " Ice Kareem, he's a wussy"
Motherfucker take it easy
You know for sure that DOC's of the hizay
Ya feel me?
This songs a heater
I know your a fag you dirty ass eater
You're also a hillbilly
You love incest sex
Motherfuckers be payin me with a blank check
While you speak Klingon and watch your Star Trek

you can post your rhymes now herb

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I did .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................

Ice Kareem took this easy. All together original, better wordplay and hell better punchez.

Vote => Ice Kareem <=

Vote here now plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

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How do I post up a battle???????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????

Well I am out so see ya later............................................. ...............................................

I sent you a pm on how to do it,

everybody vote, comeon

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Yeah i got the message. Thanks. C'mon everyone get voting.
What the fuck are you people doing? Out Boating?
Herbs need the votes cause he can't let Kareem win.
He's a cool guy, I'll give him that but his ryhmes belong in a garbage bin.
Osama Bin Laden.
That's Kareem's role model.
And did you guys hear? The dudes heads hollow.
He ain't got nothing in there to bring to the table.
Everyone can tell that the shit he posts is a fable.
Just like Cinderella, this shit's hot, I'll melt ya.
Ya got one ounce of fear then ya better call ya Ma Ma.
Motherfucker this ain't a rematch.
Cause the first ain't over.
I just feel like ryhiming, to battle my shit you'll need a four leaf clover.
I recall you talking some trash about my mom.
Well that's ok, at least I don't have my thumb up my bum.

GTG see ya later hater............................................. ..................................................

My thumb up my bum... man this kid's gotta be jokin'
I've spit better rhymes than that while I was chokin'

Your rhymes aint unique and your style sounds outdated
Take a look at me yo, my shit is original... stuff I created

Take your tired rhymes home, cause after this ya gonna see
My style if fuckin Priceless and your shit wouldn't sell for free

Now I'm gonna put this battle to sleep and y'all can finally rejoice
Cause losing to me is like you jackin off, you aint got no other choice



.....Come on people vote on the original battles

hahaha whats wit all these extra verses? herb i actually thought ur 2nd was better than ur 1st tho lol. anyways i cant vote so peace.