Battle

yall go vote on my battle vs roux and ill hit this one up wit a poll vote when its over.............................................. ....

aight here's my verse...


God asked you bow down he told me to ‘Rap-it’/ ur infected with ‘wack-hits’/ your punches are ‘lack-in’/ while im serving up ‘aces’ like my tongue is Andre Agassi’s tennis ‘Rack-it’/

you’re the white man and I got the ‘black-dick’/ and its all the way up your momma’s ‘fat-lips’

I can smell the sweet smell of victory fragranced with ‘jasmine’/ but your defeat/ is no great ‘feat’/ you’re a fucking ‘has-been’/ who ‘has-been’/ no more than a vanilla ice tryin to do ‘rap-pin’

‘Im-my-eyes’/ you see your career being ‘jeopardised’/ I’ll snap you neck tear our spine so you cant even be paralysed/ while I watch you ‘demise’

I’ll call witnesses from ‘Jehovah’/ chase you and ‘pull-u-over’/ get you DUI on my lyrics and then slap you ‘till-ur-sober’

I tear out your ‘kidneys’/ stick a knife is your throat and turn in ‘180-degrees’/ don’t listen to none of you ‘pleas’/ your krew ‘flees’/ as I slice threw your ‘kids-knees’

You just a ‘kill-joy’/ tryin to ruin my plans - rethink your ‘just-a-boy’/ use your girl as my ‘thrill-toy’/ you attacks are so weak they been labelled ‘nul-and-void’

Your commercial im the ‘main-stream’/ I bring you nightmares full of ‘pain-dreams’/ me and my boyz we called the ‘game-team’/ u aint nothing but a ‘lame-scene’

Cerealkilla is the prey! Your in water and I got you ‘land-locked’/ got u in my vision and I also got my ‘gun-cocked’/ my words they leave you ‘shell-shocked’/ you cant sit cos you ‘stand-rocked’/ I’d like to welcome you to the phrase ‘been-fucked’!

props, Dinai
go vote on my battle
against killa cobra
choose who u feel
is best, peace
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yo danai wanna battle?? if ya do set the shit up aight, make it unlimmited lines an shit then ill come an spit

u gonna spit or wat cereal????~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~B I'll battle u tomorra...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

C'mon cereal spit man!!! U were so horny wit this battle... And now u aint gonna spit???
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I'm about to swtich tha pitch with this inscription/
I'm no psychic but heres my prediction/
all your rhymes are either pre-written or bitten/
and they were pulled out your ass like a masked magician/

I'm a crazy-insane intellectual/
your a bible kissin' homosexual/
I'm a master at this textual/
your an unknown object like an extraterestrial/
I got lines longer than the trax of your intestinal/
your a novice and i'm a professinal/
bein' unable to rap leaves you unimpressionable/

fuck your "black dick on my moms lips"/
cuz I keep my white dick between your moms tits/
and let her lick the jizz off tha tip/

Cereal fed off his lines, real weak ass shit. Lines were too short. It flowed aight but wasn't what it could have been. Had a lot of played out lines I've seen before but worded a bit differently, while Dinai had nice multis, harder punches and elogated lines. Didnt flow too well but his punches and metaphors were still there.... Dinai gets my vote.

i liked crealkillas vocab in that one but the punches werent that hard...Dinai had the punches but the flow was off........
my vote goes to Dinai

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din took this easy that was tight kid liked it! good punches n good structure! the other guy was pretty whack though but keep it up, peace! dinai return the favour in my battle wiv sway! thanx dawg!

yeah i agree. Dinai wa betta. And cereal fed. And he didnt even feed well. Im not a fan of that so im votin for Dinai.

VOTE => Dinai <=

Meanwhilst return the favor and vote here.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47699

Yo......Din took it.....nice multi's, good vocab.....needs some work on the metas IMO.....but still a hot drop............

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