ight u no the rules...
but cuold ya spit first, cuz i gotta go do soem laundry dawg...
ight?
Post in the uhh prob 10 min?ight payce
oh yeah Unlimited barz...cuz i dont care...

slik loves "nelly", he thinks its cool to wear "bandaids", me ur not defeatin'/
cuz hes the real "pussy", get this man a tampon cuz i left him bleedin'/
A dying species is what ur rhymez be, i lay em to rest in a shallow grave/
Where they will remain locked away like ur gay tendency ways/
i unleash hate to rotate ur fate with the velocity to murder thee eternally/
nigga gotta have something loose in his cerebral cortex if they think they burnin me/
You wanna pop shit, then try ramming Wrigley's up ur bum/
My neighbor Nila's nipper Nitas got the noose to knock you numb/
When she raps she only says "shit shit fuck damn eat my poo poo"/
But i just have to admit shes got more style than you do/
and let me be the one to tell you nigga u aint shit/
im tryna help the war lords out, they need to get rid of this man named slik/
this nigga needs unlimited barz to try and defeat mystik/
bitch i'll do only 14 and leave yo ass twisted/

ight heres my flow...real quick...before i leave....

~Warm up~
Nigga think he can do his "magic" tricks and make me go "balistic"//
well i aint afraid to kick some kids ass who thinks he is "mystic"//
cuz u fuckin "hard ass pussy" and u like a "drag" and put on lipstick//
in rapbattles, everyone also knows u as the "dipshit"//

This kid thinks hes cool cuz he can rap wit my sig//
well ur just a fucker, and you'll never go "big"//
and my rhymes are like a "virus" they nothin but "sick"//
I jsut "injected" u with my venom, now comes the "paramadic"//

~Diss~

Now this pussy's face is turnin beat read as if he were "constipated"//
cuz hes embarresed that his rhymes are old, worn and "faded"//
i leave u like areosmith, cuz now u "jaded"//

now like 50 cent, i leave you confused with "21 questions"//
u ask me why im so good, you call me your "blessin"//
you call me your god, cuz u sit in that box and now u "confessin"//

~Finish~

I cant even understand what any of his "comprehension"//
I need to "school" him and teach him a new "fuckin lesson"//
Now u finally found the one u dont wanna be "messin"//
i just wasted my time wit a fool who cant rap wit out his "pre written"

You think u won, you cheerin, like another 50 cent "i gots a magic stick!"
fuck you nigga, u just lost to a rappa wit no dick//

Payce

uppin this shit...................................votes...... ....................Pretty good even though my verse was a lil weird, but i still thought it was ight wit da word play yo....Good batlle....Votes

ok.....
wordplay=Slik
mechanics=Slik
flo=Slik
punches=Slik
originality=Mystik
VOTE=Slik.......Slik stop using 50 cent....its gonna catch up to ya sooner or later.....magic trick....used that line on me, but this kid sux so u surpassed all that..........

return favor please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=carsonjet

aight i agree wit wot carson said completely, most goes to slik, flow wordplay punches etc......... so gonna have to go wit him in tha vote.......
vote: slik
return favour with me vs Insane Thug
-peace

slik had a much better flow, much better punches, much better rap. i go with slik. i just told ideal that i would battle him, so if he sets it up and we battle - hit me back and vote on it.

aight, slik had the rolled up and smoked it y'all.
betta punches word play ect. ..........................
..........vote - slik.............................................. ..

seein i hit y'alls vote on my battle with
grandia, aight peace..........................
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in depth critique...

mistik, kinda wasn't feeling it ya know... ugh, just something about ya post, tha disses weren't hard they were just, "uh, ok" disses...

they were basic, no real wordplay, simple flow...blah whatever...

Slik... you won this, but not by far, your verse was just a bit more edged than his, but none the less, needed some touch ups...

not feeling the way you played the 50 cent reference... but whatever... you got this.... peace

hey ill drop a vote on this if yall vote on my battle against rhymetendance's................................... .....................................

eyo, carson....did i really use taht against you? sorry dude, i totoally forgot...i wouldnt of ever used another line if i remembered....god damnit....now i'm just a loser hehe....anyways, this really did kinda suck....i did this right before i left for a basketball tournament....so i was kinda in a rush.....but thanks for the votes...

eyo, someone wanna throw me one more vote....cuz yo i need it to win....ight? cmon yall....HIT ME BACK!!!........................................... .................................................. ........