NO LINE MINIMUM
10 BARS MAXIMUM
NO FEEDING
NO CREW VOTES, OR HATIN VOTES
CLEAN BATTLE
YOU SPIT 1ST
YOU HAVE 1 HOUR

Brooklyn Mouth stuffed in "Laxative packages" thats why he Spits Crappie../
and now he's finnaly battlin a real true Vet so Brooklyn can finally "DIE HAPPY"..//
I’m tired of da “child” making lyrical FOOTNOTES..../
while he couldn’t Write proficient taking the SYLVIAN approach//
I Spit uncontainable Flames, u blaze like a diminutive ROACH.../
. Crip? Nobody understand ur “Hand Signals” like a Dominican COACH//
im the JUDGE in this small tussle, but also a massive destroyer/
and ya lines just DON'T APPEAL to me like PASSIVE LAWYERS!//
ryhmes is what im about, so you dont even wanna test one/
sh!t, I could MARRY YA MOMMA...and you still couldn't STEP-SON!//
lookin ‘raped-wit-scars’, his ‘brainblock’ like Junior ‘Weightlifters’ cuz he ‘Weights’(waits)-for-‘Bars../
Rtik ‘(Runnin’over) Brooklyn like ‘Poor Families’, cuz he cant ‘take-the-(Charge)’//
...Pull ya card ain't sayin shit with wack-and-lost-words../
I smack-and-toss-nerds and my Punches have ya seeing more Stars then Red carpet at-the-Oscars//
Brooklyn got less Mic presence (presents) than Jews on Christmas/
Try to spit, i'll embarass your dopest game, you Couldn't Drop A Hot Verse Skydiving while engulfed in Flames!//
ya fate-is-slim if you put ya Faith-in-wins...meet me and Lose-your-Religion
choose-ya-prison....hype ends ya crooked-fate . . .
looks-is-great...but Brooklyn verse is all Cheap Talk...like Discount books-on-tape//
i drop facts-mac...compare with me? your steez-is-worse . . ./
can't stop-my-tactics...'UNLOCK'-ya-wackness...its the only time ya 'KEY-ya-verse//
bring-the-hearse... with balistic punches slay-this-gay . . .
the sports-intense..Pour-cement on ya Trail of Wack so you can really Pave-the-way//

please vote cuz its gettin slept on and ill return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48569

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

you went over the line limit so i guess you dont know what a bar is, oh well...i said fair but i'll take this chance......

“Ik” is quite obviously corrected as ‘Ki’ in terms-of-‘ski’ll/(his username tells it all)
my every verse-is-ill cuz like a “death sentence” the “words’ll-kill”/

Ill serve-him-pills to stop-the-pain and like clumsy kids holding injured animals Ill “drop-this-lame”/
he always drops-the-same variety? A quotation is not-a-change/

while he “bares”(bear) his “emotions” ill “pause”(paws)-his-“heart”/
He’s a recovering alcoholic cuz he got “scared” when he “saw-the-bars”/

look...Whining-on-AIM? Trying's-a-waste...Ill put the “lines-in-ya-face” so you can “see what-im-sayin”/
Ill cut-your-brain-in to flaming-bits, the only time “Articulate” is “deadly” is when he “ain't saying-shit”/(Articulate...an adjetive meaning “spoken”)

Im carrying-pine Im varied-and-tight, your verse is scary-with-fright?../
Your rhymes is like “attack of the killer fruit” you’re just “berry”’d(bury)-“alive”/
Barely-alive I give fairies-the-knife your best choice is to commit-suicide/

or omit-losing-lines which means get rid-of-the-whole-verse/
I’ll kill you in after-life like spitting-a-“soul-curse”.. /

Im Rippin-a-hole-first through your neck-to-your-chest the tech-will-dissect tendons-to-heads/
So like “water animals” in “blankets” just “duck-n-cover”/
No location? “screw where you came from” like busting-rubbers when I “fuck-ya-mother/(Screw evrywhere you came from..Fuck ya mother..get it?)

We cant come-to-terms, Ill “step on bibles” n “run”-a-“verse”, the gun-will-curse-you…/
I disperse-crews and hurt-dudes and burst-through your chest-“cavity” with the best-savage-“teeth” and “drop you” like I wanted to “test-gravity”/

GO BATTLE BUT i AM GOING TO HAVE TO GIV THIS ONE TO:

MY VOTE: G UNIT


FOR BETTER PUNCHES AAND BETTER WORD PLAY
DONT FOGET TO GO CHECK OUT MY SHIT WHEN ITS FINISH!!!!

yo good battle but my vote has to go to........ G Unit.. nice spit.. better flow and punches...return the favor and hit mine up! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48291

I like both battles to tell you the truth but as in every battle, there has to be a winner, and though ill, only the illest can survive so Ritikulate, i think you need to go deeper and hit him wit better punchlines. Good flow though

G Unit - 22-1, ppl are curious as to what kind of shit you write, and if ever they questioned you all they need to do is see shit like that. Great ryme. nice flow, lyrics, punches, metas everything, and the finisher was fuckin ILL. it looks like your gunna add another win under ure belt, nice. (you forgot to put in your vote on my battle, so in all fairness, vote on mine man)

All around good battle tho

Vote = G UNIT BROOKLYN

yea G unit one this....

yo G unit, peep...dont worry its not a vote....its a Invite

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48524