Ok...setting up...
For the voters...
The rules are No flippin with a 20 line max...
That's it.

Let me get my shit together and I'll drop in a second or two.

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aight no written rhymes son holla dont play that shit i aint gone flip nuttin on you i keep it gangsta on yo ass swolla back wit yo rhyme

It's on...
Thumping...
Who's sharpening a knife up in here?
Oh yeah...
It's me...
Now I'm using it...



Like Idi Amin to a tribesman, this rhyme is going genocidal...
The lyrical torture's to hard to take, I'd suggest getting suicidal.
These disses aren't gonna kill ya quick, I'm dragging out this interrogation...
Leave you bleeding and leaking from wounds, deeper than your worst expectations.

Like Pol Pot to a Killing Field, I'm going Vietnam on your ass...
Have you pulling a P.O.W. then an M.I.A. Have your peeps asking, "Where he at?"
Your might spit alright, your shit might be tight, you'll win your Purple Heart...
But it'll be awarded posthumously, this rappin Rambo blew you apart.

Blowing your ass up like Hiroshima, Nagasaki-ing your head...
I've just dropped a lyrical mega-death, over one million dead.
And you were one of them, you didn't burn but you didn't escape...
Disses coating you like fallout, have you hunkering like an ape.

They're debilitating you, you can barely walk, you should have stayed in your shelter...
I'm a dope rhyming nuclear Manson, that's killing you Helter Skelter...
Fuck the Beatles, I'm not peace lovin, I relate more to Charlie...
You be Sharon Tate, I'll be a cultist, and smoke you like Bob Marley!

Jumping from killing to smoking, but it's still you I'm toking...
Burn your ass now, for the sake of THC invoking!
Cause yes, I get high, while I look at the sky, and remember all my victims...
Take a big hit, then exhale it, and lower my hat by it's brim...


Ok...I threw...
Now you.

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Snatches the mic sayin bitch that shit you wrote

Lets be original like night after day
The gun in you face you seeing black and grey u fadin away
Ya lyfe flashin b4 you like the start of another D-Day
Got that red shit pourin out you like a bitch on her period

This shit is serious leavin ya ass delierious
Ya ass a get strangled trying to be courious Like Mr. Magoo being mysterious
Tha ak at yo chest deteriating yo chest cavity like a dog gone visious
You thinking ya rhymes was dope but they not thats like hammer trying to diss pac

You just a writer claimin you a freestyler
That's why you dont want nigga to flip shit cause you cant spit shit
You couldnt spit if you had 4 lips and a mouth full of spit
Wit a bitch pussy in yo mouth lickin her clit

the only thing you kill and smoke is the food on the grill
have yo ass danglin like a nigga on x pills
U take a big hit exhale off my dick and grin
Looking at the white shit i bussed on yo chin

Fuck 20 lines i'll need 5 less to put a whole in yo chest

Ok...

Interesting stuff ya had there...

But, in your first line...
How is being original like night after day?
In my world, I see that shit all the time...

And then at the end of your first verse...

"Ya lyfe flashin b4 you like the start of another D-Day
Got that red shit pourin out you like a bitch on her period"

WTF is that?
It wasn't a rhyme.
Oh well, nice try...


Votes, people...
Throw them this way!

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cuase nite after day is original bitch what is you stupid

it rhyme wit da next line if you can read nigga

nigga learn how to write and ready raps dumb ass nigga

nigga i dont kno and i dont like you dont be taken up for me like ya kno me or somthing stay out my shit but born u need to learn how to flow for real for real

MOST ALL BATTLES SUCK PEOPLE DONT K NOW HOW TO VOTE


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da reason is a biatch he sucks asss battle me reason and anybody who disagrees

bring it set it up spit first you want it so spit aight thats 1-0 that nigga still aint gone beat me wit that one vote all the others gone be mine son cuase he aint rhyme bout shit he wrote what he spit that aint what this website bout nigga

Yo people...

Drop some votes on this one, please...

My post count is almost there, I can return the favor and vote in your battles if you do the same to mine.
Vote either way, just vote!
Thanks, Peace!

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Please drop votes on this one!
I'm fuckin begging over here!
I'll spend the day voting my ass off if I can get some votes here!!!
Don't want favoritism, just votes.
Thanks, people.
Peace

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Votin for Born To Kill. He did have a bit more punch. I dont know wat else to say.

VOTE => Born To Kill <=

Vote here now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46496

Hey people...
I thought this was a good one.
Please drop votes one way or the other.
I've been voting all day and will continue to do so.
So help out a motherfucker!
Peace

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My props go to both of you, but to be straight up, Born To Kill won this shit. Plain n simple. You both had sum tight shit but a lil improvements could be added . . Like 'Born To Kill'. . I liked that shit but i mean sum people just dont know wut ure talkin about.

Like Pol Pot to a Killing Field, I'm going Vietnam on your ass...
Have you pulling a P.O.W. then an M.I.A. Have your peeps asking, "Where he at?"

Now that shit is hot, but i mean sum ppl just dont know wut the hell ure talkin about. P.O.W, M.I.A. . sum ppl dont even know about vietnam and sum illiterate ppl dont know wut those abbre. mean. But i mean other than that you stole the show, no question. Props to dat shit.

'Da Reason' . . i liked ure shit also but its too, uhh lets just say sum of the shit in ure rymes were just to common. You hear ppl talk about the same shit that you said. Not to say it wasn't decent but i mean not to say either that i haven't heard those type of lines before. Be more inventive and then i think we will have an Ill battle on our hands. - one