10 to 20 lines

first to 5

3/0 is k/o

sorry bout the first attemt at this

Not very respectful, but this was just straight typin what comes to mind








When I rhyme my mind works in Mysterious ways
I’d be lyin if I said it wasn’t delirious makin fun of gays
My 9 sprays bullets while your just squirts water
I know…I feel you man..it hurts when you get slaughtered
You bothered me though so I bursted out wit flames
I’m here to win in this battle..aint playin no games
Aint sayin no names it’s all the same to me
I could school ya fer free aint chargin you no fee
Who you think you be comin up in here like you wanna win
You couldn’t battle me and win even if you spit from both chin
Yo when you gonna wake up that wearin make up aint cool
I wish I had more room to take up on this thread, to clown this fool

hey, can you vote at feeble vs darkforce? id vote here for u when its over...but i only have like not enough posts lol...but im close..so if u vote there i'll vote here once i get enough posts..which will happen tonight...thanks...vote fairly

ight Mos, like i said i'll hit you back once
i get back from work 3rd, shift so it'll be
tomorrow, sorry for the wait but i gotta pay the
bills ill get back to u tho -one

Ahhhhh...I thought this was gonna be like a 20 - 30 minute battle........

that's why I spit in 10 minutes, but of well i'll keep what I posted.

Spit when you can I guess

its not like im gunna sit at work all night and
write shit....its called freestyle battles and thats
what i'll do...so i'll get at you tomorrow, -one

ight heres my shit . . . .

Muther Fucker, you never burst out wit flames, from the begginin you burst into flames//
You prolly think that ure Mos Ill cuz you beat Born to Kill but wit me your playin un-winnable games//
You so dumb, you walked through Columbian Crack fields lookin for pot//
You like a neon light pole runnin through Vietnam rice paddies beggin for a hole, just awaitin to get shot//
Bullets commin' from Compass direction too many to mention, 68 shots went into un-disclosed sections and not once did my barrel tip get hot//
You were the one who set up the thread for a challenge, and who wrote back? Thug Whyte//
Now was i suppose to be scared of someone who couldn't even set up the battle right?//
So you'll school me for free? what fee would you charge me//
i wouldn't pay you 2 cents from a Quik-way counter for you to swallow a piece of bark from an ant-infested tree//
Stick to a day job and do me a favor, quit rymin//
I'm only sayin this for your health, cuz your losses will continue multiplyin//
If i gave you a shotty, you still couldn't kill, you'd be frozen still, you didn't think i'd come this un-relentlessly but i told you i will, but its time to end this cuz like niccotine, i've had my lyricall fill//
Rest In Peace the lyricist wit no skill, Mos Ill...end

thats it....now all we need is the votes......c'mon everyone
help us out....thnx ........................................ -one

UPPIN 4 VOTES............................................. .............
UPPIN 4 VOTES............................................. ....... -one

Vote = Thug

His verse was longer and had better punches. Mos just gotta lengthen ur shit then it would have been tighter. Flow was aight but at some points Thug's didnt but notin 2 major. aight battle though.

ripper check bitch slapped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im not a fan of one-verse feeds but mos was really weak so my vote goes to thug whyte coz of his punches

VOTE ---> whyte
poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47642

Honestly though I beleive you wrote that shit.....why would you ask for a battle then after I spit say I will post tomarrow.....Why didn't you just wait till you had time.

Mine was done in 10 minutes straight of the top. I know I am weak, but damn least I come off the dome quik and don't need to write.

But good verse anyway.

YO iF SOMEBODY GO TO MY BATTLE AND MAKE A HONEST DECISION ON IT THEN i WILL HIT THIS SHIT RIGHT AFTER YOU HIT MINES ...i'M NOT NO LIAR!!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49143

Note the direction when I ground you on your back with your feet up
No need to duck, you’ll get stuck behind like fat kids tryin ta keep up
Head the script chump, Goin after your opponent has it’s benefits
Are you out your wit, cause you know you wrote that verse admit it
You aint shit, and you aint crap ur damn mic spit in your face cause you couldn’t rap
I don’t even have to throw all these punches, I can just beat you wit a bitch slap
You wish that you could freestyle a verse like you just did, “Don’t have time”
Yeah fuckin right dog, look at mine it sucks but it was a 10 minute rhyme
I got you seein stars, I don’t use discretion to those I’m hurtin
When I knock out your lights….”Bye Dawg”…this battles closed curtains

Everyone go ahead and vote this dude writtin rhyme cause honestly it was better then my "FREESTYLE"

Get this over with......

Next time you ask for a battle dawg just try and make sure you "Have Time"