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Topic...
through the grapevine

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check............ 1........2.......

through the grapevine? hmm.... aight....

......gluck weaponz

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Lol........this is gonna be a lil complicated i dont really have an idea on how to do this. Give me some more info and i'll be straight.
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through the grapevine ,,, its like he said / she said
rumours going round ...na'mean?

.......................OnE........................ ...........................

aint you ever heard the song.............................................. .................................................. .....................????

how many people are going to free post in this thread?....

...lol blaze's i can understand cause he was explaining to weaponz... but panther?.....wtf...

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Ok i am still confused but i'm gonna do tha best i can lol.

Behind secret filled curtains there is rumours floatin like no gravity/
Each person knows sumthin and each one's lies keep on stabbin me/
Heartless as it seems they have no idea....its just harmless fun/
But when tha truth comes out of tha grapevines all fun and games are done/
Quoted in ones mind is tha belief of whats true and whats not/
Regretful sometimes but hardly noticed like a dandriff spot/
Unfriendly in some eyes but to tha majority their just lies/
It's hard to recognize when tha truth is covered with colored dies/
Cant see with tha naked eye, but look hard enough and notice tha surprise/
Liquidate tha opinions and believe nothin but facts/
Cuz everyone lies to thier own max....but just remember eventually they'll be taxed/

Fuck it lol......I suck......Hope he no shows lol.....but not bad for only 10 minutes
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...setting...round 1850...
...point of view...a traveling migrant worker...

im on my way to californ-i-a, hopin for a job with good pay
gettin old and gray, lookin for a nice place that i could stay
i arrive at half past five, realizing the place is old and deprived
the owner's survived so all it really needs is to be revived
i politely knock on the door as i patienlty await my first chore
my hands are sore but he said to pick fruit cause i done it before
passing by other workers as i headed out to start on the field
thinkin that after the oranges are picked they still gotta be peeled
clutchin my bucket i sigh in despair, and utter a humble prayer
this seems unfair, but no one cares about my burden to bare
swearin and cussing the whole time until i finally got there
unaware of all the other workers who had stopped to stare
embarressed, i remained silent and went on without comment
then returned around dusk to find that the boss was discontent
he called me inside his office because he said we needed to talk
i was completely nervous...my calloused hands shaked as i walked
"ive heard a rumor, are you unhappy working here old man?"
what?!...how in the world did he know?!.. i couldnt understand

the next day i was kicked out with out remorse or hesitation
aparently theres to be no disgrunteld employees pickin vegatation
quickly glancin back at the front sign as the sun began to shine
i saw about nine migrant workers, waving, standin in a line
then i knew the owner had heard it from the workers of the grapevine

..that is how the term "from the grapevine" started...

...believe it or not...

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Damn..............
Vote=Mindless for actually some effort behind his verse
I didnt really try....but thats because i was really confused.
Nice shit
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lol thks man, i think thats the first time ive ever gotten a vote from the opponent, lol....

...anyway, uppin for votes... i dont think his counts...

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nice shit mindless, good flow and everything........................................ .................................................. ....................

OMG!.....Mindless Completely Ripped This Battle Apart.............I Mean Good Job From The First Cat....And U Don't Suck....That Was Pretty Good.....But Mind Just Ripped This.........Yo....Yall Check Mine Out After This......Good Battle...1

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uppin...........

.....im not sure if infinitiG's vote counts? wasnt well explained, so ima leave the decision up to weaponz or a mod if need be........

...thks for voting tho kid, just try to explain more nextime aight...

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