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Topic...
Changing your ways

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heh. glad to be paired against
a fellow perfect member...this
should be excellent. i am glad
to be in this. and i am now checking
in....so if you want check in after
me. have fun. lets keep it fun.
word. perfect.

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Ali is here.. And paired with NiGhtDemise himself? Good Luck; Either way, WP gains a win. Let's drop sometime this weekend..

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Changing Your Ways


my name is alex johnson and i have a story to tell
a story of life the heavens mostly a story from hell
i dont know what compelled my actions or positons
but i know the hell the dying and choking symptoms

so perhaps its best to listen...

damn i think sitting in my desk in a prison caught
listening to thoughts...damn that girl is fucking hot
feeling in my crotch i stare imagine that nice ass
no temptation was stopped when the note passed
"cindy its alex and i noticed your beautiful smile
i noticed your eyes your light ive noticed for a while"
its wild how her eyes lit with passion lust or love
then mike "alex. no man. everyone knows cindy=slut
look at the boys in this room . 50 % shes fucked
and half of them probably had put it in the butt...."
.."mike...so what" shes different shes beautiful
its different with her. even if she has had a booty full
invite i hope .lust fills my veins. i unfold the return note
"meet me today 330 ..ps (parents wont be home)
i looked at her...with a lustful stare...and mouthed

"baby ill be there...."

3:30 came and eventually so did i it was paradise..
i was starin like your the greatest to fare the light
baby i love you...innocent deadly words hit me..
this went on 2 months...then i got bored with cindy
then i changed...in the halls not a woman could pass
without me convincing them of giving me a chance..
a second glance or maybe some love at best...
but the rant wasnt love..c'mon...it was about the sex
fuck fuck fuck...all of them and then toss em out...
so many that i soon lost the enormous count...
i went up i went down ... in the name of love...
and if you asked theyre names..i couldnt remember 1
this continued...i yearned for sex like a beast
i never gave thought to the people that id seek
until one came that thought i was different and special.
sarah. the one that no matter what i was never regretful...
it felt like love. i cared for her. i phoned her constantly
i got her pregnant were we happy and were only 19.
we had little ryan man he was the greatest to this day
but when he turned one month. i tested + for AIDS
not from sarah. from previously..i changed my ways!
but god wants me to stay in deaths pretend little cage.
so when ryan was just 2 months the start of his life..
i got sicker than ever..and eventually just died...

now thats not all....

because i look back and realize i was an idiot dumbass fool...
and AIDS was my death...but what really killed me is when

i learned sarah and ryan were infected too....



"sometimes it doesnt even matter....
think about your actions"

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that was really nice sand. I liked how you started your verse looking at a girl and when you screwed her it just opened a gate and the women kept coming. And then you got AIDS and infected your lover and son....blows cock, doesn't it?
well, nice story, I'm looking forward Ali's verse.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

good drop..

I'M TRYING TO GET IT UP TONIGHT..

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.. INTROduction ..

People rhyme it.. Unwelcome change is prey for the foolish and feeble-minded
"A change'll do you good," not so insignificant a message directed towards the teens who buy it
So we change.. Most of our decisions induced by opinions of our peers
High School Locker rooms flooded with emotions.. The halls become dominions of our tears..

-. .Kiersten is a beautiful sixteen-year-old girl living in Suburban New York City. Upon entering high school, she experiences a change in persona and the atmosphere that surrounds her. Unfortunately, the close-minded community of peers surroudning her is less than supportive. Therefore, she is left in a new environment with a new set of friends, wishing that she could somehow win back the support of her previous friends. .-

She won't show it.. Today's society grimaces at any trace of emotion..
Rapid changes.. Social ups and downs, why face the commotion?
An intelligent, young woman.. A mentality that's, unfortunately, repeatedly marred
A reputation built from ground to sky.. Now left conceivably scarred
Sexual life in question.. Whose business is that? Regardless of the truth..
Grimacing faces at every stop.. The park, McDonald's.. Formers launching charges from their booths..
Opinions are entitled, sure.. But so are the targets' respective lives..
In a perfect world, she sticks it to her formers.. Raises the bar, even collects some pride..
Corrects the lies.. But sets of eyes paralyze, and question agendas..
Why postage? When a couple of errant comments and suggestions could send us..

..To hell and back..

.- .I'm Alex Johnson for News 10, Newark. Our top story today is the story of a sixteen-year-old girl who was unceremoniously molested and left for death in McIntyre Park last night. The victim was found by three of her peers, unconscious, at 11:00 last night. She was quickly rushed to Secaucus Hospital where she regained consciousness overnight. Her heroic rescuers include friends who, apparently, had actually been quarreling with the girl in past few weeks. However, this particular incident goes to show that friendship means more than words. .-

There you have it.. Rescued, in the nick of time, by enemies who kill the state..
Lust and love go hand-in-hand.. Often, real friends pretend to be filled with hate..
But doubt's unpleasurable.. Unfortunately, it takes tragedy to deliver its fate..
In the end, friendship runs fathoms deeper than the omniprescent river of hate..



GoOD Luck, Good drop Sand..

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*sheds a tear*
lyricali you always seem to be the under dog and you always seem to impress me.
im givin you the win again. this was ubelievable, and both exceled in everypart so t actually had to get turned to what verse i liked more... and it was lyricali.. his rhyme scheme and flow attracted me and made me enjoy this battle... sand came dope as usual but wasnt enough.

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Word^
nice drops from both in this one
Sands was good good to read.....then i read Lyricali and his was better.....just had a more complex structure but kept it simple to read at the same time.......as i said both nice to read but Ali's verse just edged it for me

up..

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damn....im losing








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this is a hard choice, but as much as I enjoyed Sand's piece, I have to say I was feelin Ali's more. The news report was really interesting, I wasn't expecting that. Normally, I don't like it when the main action takes place outside the verse, but this was different, Ali pulled it off well.
Sand came with an amazing story with a sad ending, but it didn't over power Ali's piece at all.
vote=Lyricali

Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

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3-0...Damnit....
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Sand's drop was a drop....good as usual....but I've never seen Lyricali's drops b4.....his verse was crazy....they way he did it. I enjoyed reading both verses...good wordplay...followed the topic....concepts were good...but it all came down to which verse I was the most entertained by as you would say....A very close battle here fellas....but I'm going to go with......

Vote - Lyricali

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