10-20 lines

no d/r, hata votes, crew votes etc

u spit first

ight......
Check it....Check it.....

The only way u keep goin is by yo "batteries", but now im think its time to "die hard"//1
cuz u aint got no fuckin "game", you bout as borin a my grandma and her "deck of cards"//2
And now you aint goin far, cuz i just "stepped" on ur brakes, and u stopped "dead"//3
Guess that was easy enough, seein how usuch a pussy and u only hit yo "head"//4
My rhymes come faster at you then a rocket on "full throttle"//5
and you think u can beat me, but ur only inspiration was seein "kobe" wit a sprite"bottle"//6
and the only way ur rhymes could "change" is if people actually cared and gave u there "2cents"//7 (get it?)
now my spits comin "hotter" than yo fuckin "heater", the only way to stop me is to get some pre"vents"//8 (gotta get that one)
Lame Ass Who Thinks Of Nothing(his name), very creative//9
your rhymes and raps, yeah they kinda remind me of "craig david"//10
You think you came hard, but i just came and "burst" yo bubble, now u doin "pop"//11 (type of music)
and it gets so annoying, you got everyone on dis site just beggin u to "stop"//12
But really i just wasted my time, i dont know why i even try wit you//13
But now that i just got u influenced, you gonna be "stickin" to me as if u were "glue"//14



ight....kinda off.....oh well.....payce

im a rapper of wanted taste/
u stikkin to me like a sticky glue paste/
do u think we are stupid we no wot pop is/
u sound like a rapper hu likes drinkin whizz(piss)/
does that shit get u high? make u think ur fly?/
well ur not, ill burst u like a spot/
i am the king of this game and i luv puttin u to shame/
u spit ur lyrics like a humming bird, i can tell ur every fuckin word/
u need to see a doctor for that head of urs/
if it inflates anymore u wont get through any doors/
u try and express urself in rap but ur killin off our race/
all ur lines r full of crap, u make me leave this place/
ill have to tidy up the mess uve left use in/
u shud have put ur verse in the rubbish bin/
where it belongs wid ur moms blood stained thongs/
in my 16th line i better stop hurting u/
after ive beat ur ass there will be no round 2!!!

im a lyrical mastermind one of a kind

ugh i hate how you always put the number of the line at the end of ur verse......fuckin queer.......hahaha......i dont really see no wordplay at all....but whatever..................votes anyone? people who can poll vote only please...thanks.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48810

vote there and i will vote here....all the vtes there so farwere most likelybiased (he votes for them they vote for him) vote thee and i will give yall a fair vote here...can ya vote ther for me slik???peace ill hit this oneup...promise..........

this shit is like the eurovision song contest-u vote for me and ill vote 4 u shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

good tight battle......
nice spit slik but L.A.W.T.O.N. made me laugh more.....
fuck wordplay when you can make people laugh......
your shit was probably prewritten ey slik?...........lol

vote=L.A.W.T.O.N.

slik's spit was the shit and would definately get my vote if i could place a fucking poll vote because his lyrics had good word play, but lawtons where funny as shit...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...The+Real+Terror

close that battl out for me, or give him a vote....but we need more votes..................................thank yall....................

ok fuck you fiori, fuckin dick rida......i fuckin dont prewrite.....fuck you....fuckin say shit bout me and u dont even fuckin no me....you fuckin vote on this kids battles all the time....always "oh it was more funny" well fuck the funnys hit.....i really dont care....your a fuckin fag....ight? cool....peace.....

id have to go wit slik, who obviously used better word play and ive seen his other battles and its fuckin obvious he is not prewriting, so give the man some props

^^^^even the newbs agree.....can we get some votes up in here....Thanks dawgs.................I'll vote on urs, if i havent already....I always return da favor.................................

Slik won this by a long shot....he came much harder and ACTUALLY HAD wordplay.....I wasn't feelin ur shit newbie....keep ya head up and keep battlin tho......hit my shit up pleaz

DarkForce vs. Carsonjet
DarkForce vs. The Real Terror
DarkForce vs. Manic Killer......

could we get some more votes over here!!!!.......................................... ...........................................