Aight, You Called Me Out......You Said You Wanted To Prove Yourself......You Said You Were Good......

Rules:
10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Dickriding Votes
No Feeding

You Spit First As Agreed......

Good Luck......

Yo,
i'm the Don of this game and rule you all//
dont step up to me cuz u just gonna fall//
watch yo back coz Romeo gonna kill//
i'm a natural killer out to rip//
dont challenge me, i'm just gonna flip//
i've won this battle already dont try to win//
take your verse and put it in the bin//
my rhymes are deadly, they should be a sin//
how easy can this be to win this//
you know you cant contest this//
dont show up for your own safety//
call the police and say i beat you badly/
actually get an ambulance fool//
hit you over the head with a wrench tool//
well i won so give me wot you got, fool//


no beef or nothing, just the way i battle.

Ummmmm......
Yeh No Beef Man, But Really, I Thought You Said You Were Good?!......
Well I Hate Killing Newbies But I Guess I Gotta......
Verse Will Be Up Shortly......

just drop yeah, i thought my verse was quite good. can i get some feedback on it then please. it will be much appreciated.
and i aint a newbie, i been here for a while and checkin shit out so i'm as good if not better than you!

kid ur gonna get rippped........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........i would know and this is my 3rd day on this

Aight, I'm Gonna Come A Bit Weaker Just So I Dont Waste A Good Verse......

This Fool Couldn't Get A Girl Even If He Was In The Lead Part With Juliett/
This Is the Second Line and People Are Sayin "Hasnt He Got The Win Yet?"/
Fool Dont Challenge Me With That Bullshit Excuse For A Fuckin Verse/
Tell You What, I'll Throw It Back At You, Take It Home And Reherse/
Don?! Your From England And You Think Ur In The Mafia And Italian/
Well Kid, U Aint No Stallion, You More Like a Donkey, Dumb As Fuck/
So, I'm Coming Weak In This Verse Just To Give You 10,000,000-1 Odds Of Luck/
Your 'Punches' Are 'Un-Armed' So I Guess I Must Have Your Hands/
Clap Em Together Just So You Can See What Its Like To Have Fans/
I'll Just Go To 10 Lines Coz I Guess This Will Be Enough For The Victory/
Dont Ever Challenge Me Again Coz You've Just Been Raped Verbally!/

Well i think u got smoked by romeo he had better evrythin
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SYKE -lol vote=R i p p er better flow and punches

come on ppl Vote on my Darkthoughts battle............................................ .................................................. .........................

Thanx......
1-0 Me......
Uppin......
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Ripper wrecked this kid
Reason why ?
just read both verses
Don, you need to elevate kid, work on the punches make them hard so people feel it, don't talk about yourself too much and don't make your shit predictable
I allready knew what you where saying before you even wrote it

Vote = Ripper

don romeo battle me dawg! if u in set it up! this went 2 ripper 4 beta flow but 2 be honest you'd won b4 you'd even replied!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote=ripper

Yeh Thanx Man......
2-0 Me......
Uppin......
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Aight Cool......
3-0 Me......
Uppin......
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Come On Ya'll, Just 2 More Votes Needed......
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