iight....quik battle

10-30 lines
5-15 bars max
no d/r, crew, or hate votes



after u check in i'll spit...you have to spit 10 minutes after me..




don't vote if you don't get da wordplay or vocab...if you have to get a damn dictionary

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c'mon hottie holla 1 back herei voted on ur game
Beg u check out me and hustla its been sleeping thnx

iight jus send me da link and i'll hit it up....ok here ma verse..not ma best cuz i'm in a hurry


Knowing you, you go to school dressed thuggish, sayin you ready to die
Then somebody draws a pen to your back, bitch ass nigga started to cry//
your ass got crammed-by-Spittin Quik, nigga take-it-like-a-man
Nobodies 'feelin' ya 'shit', so you take a 'dump' in their 'hand'//
Crashin his car in a ditch only way to destroy his property
He couldn't write good philosophies if he took lessons from Socrates (Soc-ra-ties)//
Im Shining-but-Felt Residing-in-Hell spitting Nouns-At-Vets
if rhythmic hung Saddam Hussein on his wall he still couldn't Mount-A-Threat//
i'll kill u in the Heat-of-the-Moment ain't no need to Arise-wit-Sizzles (fire)
rhythmic i'll Reign (rain)-on-ur-Parade till ur Thoughts emerge to a Light Drizzle//
Fight-folks-through-the-jeers...invincible through these tears...you couldn't hold impediments-to-rip-me
Rhythmic tendencies and winning...a more mismatched couple than Eminem-and-Britney//
it doesn't take a genius to realize this cat's wack, I got him watching my text while I flip the script like a flapjack/ if I pump the shotgun I'll make ya head snap back and leave it hanging by a piece of skin on ya neck like a knapsack//
Here-it-is I put the fear-in-kidds cuz hottie is the definition of a real lyricist
Who’s scared now? I’ll leave rhythmic more shook than Shakira’s hips//
Rhythmic could copy-n-paste his name-an-stick it on my verse an claim-its-his , an it still wouldn’t be a hot-script//
With such-rhyming-words...if this fool ain't a vet, he ain't worthy-to-be-ripped-barely everyone knows you are scared of my text...like ya were 'allergic to dictionaries'...//
i could grab you by the throat n' start chokin but why bother
you're probably into that nasty shit, like "Hottie choke harder”//
you ain't close to my level come on lil' bitch please
i'll ask the mods to make you a division, we'll call it tha puss-ies//



iight ur turn

(spoken)
Your style is appalling to the bone....
I melt you bars, like an ice cream cone...
My punches I’ll twist your disses till they moan...

{rappin]
Yo,
Man I’ll lift you up, like a fuckin pick-up-truck
Send you back down, face flat in-the-muck
You act like, you’ve been stuck with-propitious-luck
I heard you’d sell you delicious body, for less than-a-buck

You say you a bad-ass-bitch, maybe your looks were a genetic-mutational-glitch...
Your only in this game to quickly-get-rich, beating you ass should be-a-snitch...
People tell me, you like the wicked-east-witch, battling me, you certainly not wished...

A 7-5 record, is’nt that bad, after me, you’ll need to go back to the writing pad...
Maybe you anger comes from being had by your dad, you shoulda been protected by a steel-clad...
Don’t dare compare me with Em and Brit, you ain’t got the wit, so just quit...
Before I lose it, and I transmit...my anger, like your dad when he got you in the triangular,
Position, listen bitch just shut-upand-listen, you should be down with the-WEC-division...
Recognize me like a-new-religion, annoy me, so I can beat you like-a-pigeon...
Admit that you scared-I’ll-glisten, you rhymes look like you unprepared...
Missy Elliot you can be compared..to, your horrifying through and through
Unfortunately you’ll always be there like-BLINK-182, permanently like-a-tattoo
Nevertheless, my finish is long overdue, so I’ll leave you with a shot and a thank you!//

P.S - yours was a dope drop

my vote --------------> hottie 7


y'all shud shorten up ur battles stick 2 the hot shit. she came hard esp with the mount a threat line. Feelin it.


vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52622

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holy shit....good ass battle......Hottie...damn girl...u came out harder against him than u did wit me..whats up wit that? Newayz I got Hottie comin out of this one....hard ass punches and ya wordplay and flow was tight...I was really feelin this whole battle....no hate or d/r, but my vote goes to hottie.....

hit my shit up against Kidd....and Fatal Actions....thnx

yo I will hit this shit if someone goes to my battle and make a honest vote then I will do tha same at your battle.....and thats a deal...!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51529

DAMMMMM
ALL the fucking femcees here are fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!my eyes are gasping like a motha fuka
i never ssen so many ill femcees in my life
hottie you killed this kid
but yo both verse where hot
i just felt that the other kid was lacking because his where more obvious then compered to.....

"Im Shining-but-Felt Residing-in-Hell spitting Nouns-At-Vets
if rhythmic hung Saddam Hussein on his wall he still couldn't Mount-A-Threat//
i'll kill u in the Heat-of-the-Moment ain't no need to Arise-wit-Sizzles (fire)
rhythmic i'll Reign (rain)-on-ur-Parade till ur Thoughts emerge to a Light Drizzle//"

compered to

''Your style is appalling to the bone....
I melt you bars, like an ice cream cone...
My punches I’ll twist your disses till they moan..."

i mean common, you could have at least tried harder for an opener

vote hotti

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

alright both of your drops were hot but I was feeling hotties a bit better she came harder, I wasnt really feeling the start of rhythmic tendicies, i think thats what it came down to they both were dope but hottie came a bit harder

vote ==== hottie

Now can u guys return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50171
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50237

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lol thanks...uppin........
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yo we jus need 1 mo...uppin............
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hit my shit up against mr.marley, and poll vote both of these, and terrell. holla atcha boi!!


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UNTOUCHABLES FA LIFE NIGGA!!

hottie7 definitely took this 1.Illa punches and betta multies.

"your ass got crammed-by-Spittin Quik, nigga take-it-like-a-man
Nobodies 'feelin' ya 'shit', so you take a 'dump' in their 'hand'//"
&
"Here-it-is I put the fear-in-kidds cuz hottie is the definition of a real lyricist
Who’s scared now? I’ll leave rhythmic more shook than Shakira’s hips//"
those pretty much took it home

vote-Hottie7