RULES.
14 LINES MAX
5 VOTES WINS
NO HATERS OR D/R'S
NO FEEDING
SPIT YA SHIT ASAP
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yo yo you best step back this is givenand im given pain/
put holes in yo brain/ so try to sustain yourself in this game/
leave nothin left of you but blood stains/ill make the blood rain/
so step back before you get clapped and ripped/
youll get your throat slit/ quick run dont slip/
or else youll get stripped and then whipped/
my freestyle are advanced/ battle me please you have no chance/
try to hide and ill come banging on your door/
if yo mom answers ill stab that hore/
then ill stab you more/so you best zip up your vest/
cause im on a quest/ to burn you to dust/
i geuss no one i can trust/ no its your turn to bust

I THINK YA SORRY RHYMES GOT ME GASED UP
WRONG, U THE ARAB I KILLED AND YA CASKET SHUT//

THIS IS A JOKE IT AINT GOD 'GIVEN' TALENT
I TOLD YA MOM NOT TO HAVE A BABY BUT OUT YA WENT//

I SPIT FASTER THAN BLOOD DRIPPIN OF YA FACE
I MUST BE A STAR IN YA HOOD CUZ U A DISGRACE//

THAT AVY DONT RESEMBLE U. U AINT SONIC
THE ONLY THING THAT DOES IS BLUE ON IT//(BLACK AND BLUE)get it

THE ONLY THING U HURTIN IS YA OWN DAMN LIFE
BUT IF YA MOM WOULDA LISTEND. COULDA BEEN A NICE NIGHT//

U BETTA COOK THE BEEF WITH ME AND EAT IT
IF I GAVE U VIAGRA, THATS THE ONLY WAY U COULD BEAT IT//

ILL LEAVE U GASPIN FOR AIR ON THIS LAST LINE
IF I GAVE U N OXYGEN TANK U STILL COULDNT READ FINE//

UP IT FOR VOTES...................HOLLA

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that shit was pretty ill yo
damn i just realized that you were a heavy weight but its all good but a newbie against a heavy weight i never saw that before

vote=512 return the favor

yo can ya just poll vote on this battle cuz the kid know i merked so bad that he gave up so justpoll vote thank you.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3897#post493897

UP IT................................................
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HOLLA

I AINT HEAVY WEIGHT DAWG.........ITS JUST HOW MANY POST U GET..................IM STILL LEARNIN..........
HOLLA
UP IT................................................ ..

ohh so your winning well i didnt expect me too win now that i know your a heavy weight, a 512 how old are you anyway

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my votes going to 512 nice flow
return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53245

me...........im.............only...............13. ........imturnig 14....................... in august

IIGHT ILL CHECK OUT THAT BATTLE.......
2-0 MY FAVOR..
UP IT
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y'all put your vote up in this battel and i'm sure to do the same
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53040

This battle didn't really have too much Ohhhhh's and ahhhhhh's. It was an aight battle. but yall need to elevate more. And Given, u did an aight job, but I didn't really feel it. So imma give dis to 512, not that Given is a newbie, it's jus that 512's rhyme was more original compared to Given's. 512, urs wasn't that great either, but it was enough for da win. Slightly better punches. Not hatin on any of yall, jus tryin 2 helpin yall out. Good battle 2 both.