Ok i already stated tha rules but here they are again:
10-20 Lines
No hate/ dick-ryding/crew votes
U spit first
Besta Luck
Peace

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ok here it is:

I spit like a killer
There’s no-one realer
You can call me illmatic
My shit is out there wreakin’ havoc
My terror constantly causin' static
I'm a fuckin' wildcard
Don't play yourself too hard
I don't ride no common wave
My path - the only one i pave
From the cradle to the grave
I couldn't be more serious
Thinkin i wasn't; you're delirious
You can't win; my rhymes are furious

good luck to you. peace

Yo, these lyrics im spittin cumin' at you like lazer guided bombs they ain't gonna miss//
Cause afta this rhyme ur legs be shakin' mouth dry and at ya feet be a pile of piss//
Yea dawg your a wild card alrite, a fuckin' joker, thats why i can't take seriously//
Cumin' gainst be your first loss, but it alrite dawg,cause i know ur battlin' me outta curiosity//
I'm back on tha roll, making people eyes squint reading this shit, and their fingers numb//
Yo, this boi is like a old man who can't get it "up", he ain't able to "cum" ( come get it haha )//
Yea man battlin' me on your first go acceptin this ill give ya credit//
Cause this is a bad start and you'll regret(it)//
After this rhyme your any last signs of respect you have left, im a shred it//
Leave this kid on tha flat-line, with a frothy mouth looking like a milk-shake//
Cause you got your "sixth sense" telling you this battle was a mistake//

Nice first verse man^^^^^^^^Uppin' for votes

Don't rest on this all, vote on this we b sure to return tha favor, jus drop a link
Peace..............

Man, I would if I had 100 posts. could you do me a favor? vote on this? >http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53330<

ey vot on this we'll hit ya bak we need votes all ^^^^^Uppin'
PEace.... we b sure to return the favour

I say Castle00 got dis shit. He had better wordplay, and elevated his shit more. Also better punches. I like da one bout the old man. That shit was funny. Phrequent, u did good. I aint hatin or anything. That's a pretty good rhyme for a newbie. but Imma go wit Castle00. Good battle to both.

vote=Castle00

Castle took this pretty easy, the other kid didn't come hard at all...Get those punches harder man....Seriously, Castle, you're improvin some alright lines, much harder than phrequent all over...

.......Pz.........

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thnx mead n 808, yo phrequent that was an alrite spit for a newb, ^^^Uppin' for votes ^^^
We'll return tha favour

Castle took this one easy. He played with words more and his punchez stood out more. Phrequent ur verse was just too basic, mayb lengthen the lines and use more personals. Ull develop ur skills over time once uve had a few so dont worri. No hate only respect.

VOTE => Castle <=

vote=Castle 00, he had the betta verse had the more harder punches and used wordplay his opponent was kinda weak!

Still uppin for votes b sure to return tha favor peace......
^^^^Uppin'^^^^^
Peace
Fuck this 100 characters shit.... No_Good_At_Rap is a stupid fagget hopin' he dies

castle u wanna battle me dawg! i'll set it if u do!

castle took this 4 beta flow! vote=castle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!