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i did this wrong first time round so im posting the stuff again

THIS IS MY VERSE !!!


like aaliyah its "plane" to "sea" i'll "rock your boat"...
throw ya over-(this)-board but with the amount of hot air u got im sure you'll float
your probably wont 'bring it' thinking im a newbie your miscalculating
for 6months ive been doing nuffin but elevating
i could stand on your grave and u still couldnt "understand"
when i win you'l b screaming "stole" like "Kelly Rowland"
i could put my dick in your hand and you still couldnt "beat me"
you'll never " get me off " , try to do it discreatly
you got bruised knees from all the dick sucking youve been givin
choose a new profession, cos from mcing u aint gonna make a livin
you couldnt knock me down if you reversed into me in your drive
couldnt 'shoot" a "line" if u loaded them in a magnum forty 5
so im gonna leave this shit emcee and get a KO
cos this whack bitch is as good at rapping as JLO

ILLEST_ MCS VERSE !!!!!!!!!!nigga, you a newbie, ya verse was tight,/1

but you gon' be cryin tonight. ya clothes/2

are from goodwill, but you lie so no one knows/3

nigga you comin at me with a rifle like you G.I JOE/4

my guns are POPPIN like my name was MARY nigga/5

hearin you rap is SCARY like we in the middle of a horror MOVIE/6

i ain't NEVER SCARED, cuz i got an arsenal of guns/7

whose bullets'll puncture ya lungs. i'm like the plagues of Egypt/8

i'll kill ya first born son. you lost all ya money to me in casino/9

i'ma professional DICE ROLLER, and i sent ya ass home crowded/10

in car like you were a fuckin latino. bitch now i have to merk/11

you. i'ma GAS ya ass like i'm HITLER and you a jew/12

come back when you won a few.

sorry if this is kinda confusing cos i didnt do it right the first way. anyway been one vote so far its posted below

uppin for votes

dirtysouthrappers6s vote

illest get my vote. cuz he tight emcee/rapper.
holla atcha boi

i'ma put vote on this aight. illest get my vote. cuz he tight emcee/rapper.
holla atcha boi............................................... .................................................. ...................

Yo i was feelin Delerious more than illest here,don't know whether it was tha way illest verse was set out but i found it hard to find his flow,evenly matched for punches but i think Delerious had better wordplay and better flow so.

Poll Vote = Delerious

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yo, illest got my vote cuz i liked his flow and metas, and punches...............................


lkajsdflkjasdlfjlksjdfal;sdjfousdfguadsopg daf90ugerotuweort098ertweru-i hate this 100 character rule

THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT i AM GOING TO GIVE THIS ONE TO THA PERSON WITH BETTER WORDPLAY AND BETTER PUNCHES

MY VOTE: ILLEST MC

illest_emcee took this 1 e did it 4 me go vote on my battle plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

poll VOTE.......UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!................................................ .................................................. ..............................................

shit, i've already voted on this. sorry fa freepostin. lata.............................................. .................................................. ...................................

illest..I would like to congratulate you on losing to a noobie...you need to elevate your whack ass lack of skill...better luck next time

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