ight playa here it is......
-you spit first
-10-20 lines
-no hatin
-no d/r
-no crew
-get tha point..................-one

ok alright

Hey yo fuck fuck fuckity fuck fuck
sayin fuck so many times makes your shit suck
what u need to do is tap into your mind
hang out for a while and see what you find
do some searchin, searchin for some rhymes
so u dont resort to cursing all the time
whats a matter man u never went to school?
u got no rap vocabulary in this duel
you need to quit ignorin your brain -thats cruel
and realise that its a valuable tool
So jump start it with this lyrical fuel
instead of mopin around like you were a fuckin muel
you have a limited word choice
you think shit is the only way to express your voice
cause it comes out soundin like nuthin but noise
like a buncha children at the playground, playin on toys
like u tryin to impress the boys
like u been takin too much steroids
stupidity is something u should try to avoid
so why dont u go out and practice
cuz i know u lack this
and when your brain is found
come back and holla, Ill still be hangin around

ight yo, im goin to pick up my check from work then
i'll come back and drop suttin for you................... - one

droppin . . .

Your rymes skipped an axis, you on tha 'X' missed tha 'Y' and went straight to tha 'Z'//
You rotating in mis-directions, sun hits you once in a great while, but darkness falls on ure record consistenly//
You punchlines hurt like gettin stung by bees wit no stingers//
Your lyrics suck, your better off typin a battle wit no fingers//
Commited parently adultery sins, lights in ure bedroom dims,
knock ure mom up wit kids. Think not ? then ask why the doctor mentioned twins//
I'm like the guy in Rudolph, i'm un-suitable for you in the land of misfits//
You two-faced like an optimistic goin balistic over pre-written shit that wasn't proplerly spitten, re-definin tha laws of physics//
Mic mis-shaped, like the formation of a clerical mace, smack the soul from the color of your race, mis-place your eyes wit ure mouth and have you lookin for tha rest of ure face...end

UPPIN UPPIN

UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN
....vote on this i vote on ures.......... - one
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whitey took this one, I dont' really need to explain. Uhmm No.. I don't think I do.. but I will.. becacuse I need 100 chars

white came with punches and a better vocab and rhymes scheme and wordplay and multis and flow.. and if I missed anything I'm sorry, while mex's shit sounded like a 2nd grader wrote it. Peace

UPPIN ZzZzZzZz.... UPPIN

its a vote on ure battle ya'll, take the oppurtunity....- one
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Thug white killed him ............ Not even in the same league....... he killed him with one sentence... damn its that simple....

lol thanks........STILL UPPIN UUPPPINN.....
.................................................. ................ - one

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.....c'mon ..now who dont want a vote on their battle?..-one

wow, this is takin along ass time ya'll.........
if you vote on this shit, im gunna hit you back
so why not vote???????????????????????????? -one

I CANT! i dont have 100 posts! see look at the side i got like 20 not 100............................................... ...........

anyways i just signed onto this shit yesterday, what the fuck is all this uppin shit, maybe you could fuckin explain

i wasn't talkin to you man, plus you cant
vote this is OUR battle....lol........................... -one

ill vote on this if you vote on mine , whyt you got this but im not goon poll vote till you poll on mine iight.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54429

Uppin is gettin tha post back to tha top of tha board.....